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illwillkill — Pack Up Miss Indecisive
Published: 2012-09-14 14:49:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 255; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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Trying to findWhat keeps me here
The words that bind
And simply so I believe
Clutching onto
Coarse grains of sand
Just like the food
My starved heart demands
Silent screams
Demand no attention
Those unseen perfect dreams
Remain in my head as dereliction
The wanting
That tears me in two
Is poison that daunting
In the end I don't want the cure
Comments: 4
I really like it, the story it tells is clear and powerful, the only two things that derive from the flow are, to me
"And simply so I believe", it's not so much the lines meaning, just something in it's construction.
and then the other things is the very last line, it's of the beat because it's composed by so many more syllables and more words too.
But overall, I like it, long time no see, here at least, welcome back, should you stay.
I would love to hear from you again on skype or fb or anything, hell, I'd even play LoL again ^^
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"And simply so I believe" reinstates that I just take words as they are and I dont really question it, the indecisiveness is quelled by my lack of it
I'll fix the last line but since it was the last I was going to let it be different
long time no see indeed, not sure if I'm staying, me and devart are always ephemeral with each other
I deactivated fb cause I never use it and people think I read msgs but only two weeks after which kinda defeats its purpose, skype you can always leave me msgs and if you asked I'd play league with you
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Heh, I never leave this place, but I don't really stay either, I'm not here, I just leave traces ^^
Ah, the old "two-week-delay", always at least... two weeks old.
Skype it is, and so it shall be, and remember, you can drop me lines too, you know.
Also, it's funny, I remember when I asked you for pictures, ah, fun times...
Sadly, they were lost when my old computer crashed *cry*
But remember, you'll always be my dominatrix, well, at least to name ^^
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very true.. neither here nor there
what.. two weeks? wah.. D:
i have skype so that people can leave me msgs, im almost always too busy to do it myself =[ sry
pictures? i dont remember sending any.. i can resend some i guess? i lost my whip but am getting new thigh high laced boots which i cant wait to arrive! ... but things from overseas take forever to ship grr
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