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Published: 2008-11-12 01:16:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 278; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 32
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when i stand therei expect you to come
with abandon
to rush
like a superhero
in a myth
to come in
running
with open arms.
why won't you come?
why?
why?
i've been waiting.
i am waiting.
and i will always be.
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Comments: 5
Wow, stunning treatment of foreground and background, though that misty background could well be natural, in which case I salute you for capturing it as you've done. The longing and yearning of the young lady looking out at the water is all the more intriguing because we do not see her face. You thereby make us participate in the picture, not just observe the scene. We imagine what she's thinking and how those thoughts show on her face. We partly capture our own picture as a result. You have much talent in these visual arts. Keep up the good work!
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It's very wistful and melancholy, I like it! The mist adds to the feeling of sadness.
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