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This is the 2nd in what has become a series of abstractsAs always, advanced critique is welcomed and appreciated!
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Comments: 18
FractalEyes [2006-12-07 22:54:52 +0000 UTC]
Trey kool (or as they say somewhere tres chic) If I can remember to do a 4th of July journal, I'd love to include this image.
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imagebuilder In reply to FractalEyes [2006-12-07 22:56:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! glad you liked it that one took forever to do LOL
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Helen-Baq [2006-12-06 00:43:04 +0000 UTC]
That's really cool - I especially like the little white stars with the red balls. The closer red disks, however, don't feel like they have a lot of refraction, which is ok, but it makes them look hollow. If you wanted them to appear solid, then maybe up the refraction a bit. Another thing that would be nice is if those disks were casting a reddish shadow. I like the combination of matte and shiny surfaces and the stormy sky adds an ominous feel.
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imagebuilder In reply to Helen-Baq [2006-12-06 05:59:24 +0000 UTC]
Im so glad you liked it Yes, I had to add another light closer in and make it shadow so that there was more depth to the white stars....before I did that ...they rendered flat white with no detail at all LOL ... of course ya gotta give up something to get something and what went was the reddish shadow & refraction from the globes
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imagebuilder In reply to live2b [2006-12-02 04:09:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much!!! I appreciate that
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skyebluemoon [2006-11-30 22:55:31 +0000 UTC]
Hi -- well done piece -- much depth -- on way in -- good perspective -- colors work very well -- strong composition -- the horizontal approach works very well for this piece -- nice job on the many details -- good post -- exellent -- take care --
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imagebuilder In reply to skyebluemoon [2006-11-30 23:37:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! After I finished it, I wasnt sure about it at all but its growing on me
The colors are my favorite part.
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skyebluemoon In reply to imagebuilder [2006-12-01 02:44:23 +0000 UTC]
Hi My Friend,
I know what you mean about not being sure about a piece -- the colors are the same ones I work with when I am making a huge statement -- good choice -- they work well together & make a person take notice -- take care --
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imagebuilder In reply to skyebluemoon [2006-12-01 04:15:34 +0000 UTC]
thanks muchly!! I so appreciate your thoughts !
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spyderraver [2006-11-30 05:43:01 +0000 UTC]
I like it - I think this piece has foundation. Not all abstract work has foundation.
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imagebuilder In reply to spyderraver [2006-11-30 13:59:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!! Im so glad U liked it!!
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