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InconsequentialPoet β€” Apologies
Published: 2012-01-19 06:07:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 639; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 6
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Description Kiss my forehead gently with your lips of flaming snow
Hold my hand with bloody skin and never let me go
Sing a broken lullaby with whispers in my ear
Breathe with breaths of carelessness, with cruelty wipe my tears
Take the shining blade that lies upon the shadowed floor
Bring it slowly to my flesh and speak your words once more
Watch my helpless struggle as your wrongness you undo
And leave me there to die, longing to say I love you too…
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Comments: 7

Axlazu [2012-01-23 03:28:35 +0000 UTC]

I don't want to sound repetitive to what other comments have said but...
This flows BEAUTIFULLY

absolutely beautiful, and if I may note; favorite line

"Bring it slowly to my flesh and speak your words once more"

beautiful.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Axlazu [2012-01-23 03:54:34 +0000 UTC]

D'aw, thank you so much!!! Your comments are always so nice.
and... I've never had someone pick their favorite line before... I wonder what the overall favorite line would be if everybody chose one... O.o

But yeah, thank you. ^.^

~ Mikki

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MorbidHarlequin [2012-01-19 06:39:00 +0000 UTC]

I like it,. It flows very nicely in the form.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to MorbidHarlequin [2012-01-19 06:57:30 +0000 UTC]


Well thank ya.

~ Mikki

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MorbidHarlequin In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-01-19 07:07:23 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Writingangel2010 [2012-01-19 06:37:23 +0000 UTC]

I like this poem Like you said, it's depressing, but it flows really well.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Writingangel2010 [2012-01-19 06:57:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!! ^.^

It means a lot.

~ Mikki

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