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InconsequentialPoet β€” How to be Alive
Published: 2012-03-05 07:07:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 243; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 5
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Description Look into my eyes and see the torture, see the pain
See the tears of flames surviving every drop of rain
See the cruel reality that lies upon my skin
Turn your head, deny the truth, ignore my troubled grin
Speak of every trial spinning through your aching mind
Teach me how to be the best, so generous and kind
Make me shatter, make me break, and murder me with knives…
After all, how else to teach me how to be alive?
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Comments: 6

BellaBugia [2012-03-15 04:38:20 +0000 UTC]

Excellent job! I cannot fault this at all. I tip my hat to you, madam

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to BellaBugia [2012-03-15 05:37:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!

~ mikki

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BellaBugia In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-16 09:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome!

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passionriter [2012-03-05 19:21:54 +0000 UTC]

It's short, yet perfect.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to passionriter [2012-03-06 03:46:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! ^.^ It means a ton, you have no idea!

~ Mikki

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passionriter In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-06 19:07:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I really loved it, so it's no problem.

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