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IngloriousMe — Murder Me with Subtlety
Published: 2010-02-10 06:31:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 442; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 21
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For those of you who are having difficulties reading it or with the formatting, I've typed it out here:Murder Me with Subtlety
Allow me to occupy you vacant eyes
Again.
Peek at me between strands of hair
Be stealthily obvious
Test my affection
I promise
I'll prey on your gaze
To feed the butterflies
Inside.
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Comments: 18
this is so sweet i think everyone can relate i like test my affection the most great job
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You're welcome. *chuckle* As you can see, it stunned me enough that I started blurting out statements of the obvious.
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Aww... Thank you for your beautifully subtle compliment!
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I hope it does not murder you. *tilted smile*
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I'm not so sure about that...
Being murdered through subtlety sounds pleasant!
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*wink* I thought that would make a nice joined pun.
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And it was! I was just being smart... can't help myself sometimes...
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Hahaha~! Oh, no, you did splendidly.
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Succinctly written., & cleverly constructed! Nice work.
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its pretty (: i an creepy strange kinda way 
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Hahaha! Yeah... I never wrote poems about love because I don't think I ever felt the way most people typically feel about love.. BUT I decided to write one! Maybe try to give off the feeling...
Thanks so much!
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