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This is a picture I was imagining for like 2 days xD and I wanted to draw it but didn't have the time x.x now that I had the time I finally drew it basically there is a family on a beach and May (Girl on right side of picture) is asking her friend Jet (1st person view xD) if he wants to come and play but Jet just wants to lie under the umbrella
(Sorry, just made up the names on the spot xD) hope you like it ^^ as u can see it could be better so... any tips on how to make the picture better? xD

Description
This is a picture I was imagining for like 2 days xD and I wanted to draw it but didn't have the time x.x now that I had the time I finally drew it basically there is a family on a beach and May (Girl on right side of picture) is asking her friend Jet (1st person view xD) if he wants to come and play but Jet just wants to lie under the umbrella
(Sorry, just made up the names on the spot xD) hope you like it ^^ as u can see it could be better so... any tips on how to make the picture better? xD