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Published: 2014-10-28 00:55:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 756; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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First time using Sculptris!Feedback would be appreaciated!
Critiques too!
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Man Dude! better than any thing I could ever make! but the head does look a little smallish compared to the body. Still good!
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Thanks for the feedback! I will try to fix the head for sure!
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OK, here's my critique of it.
I am impressed by the overall concept. It's original and I don't think I've seen anything quite like the arm forms before. However, the overall image would benefit from a little more proportion work, especially comparing the head to the chest or the arms. Specifically, I think the chin could be a little longer and/or bigger, simply because the face is dwarfed a little by the rest of the creature, especially the well-defined chest muscles. The head tentacles, for lack of a better phrase, are pretty good as they are but I personally think they would look better if they were somehow fitted to the natural curves of the human head. Just a thought. The arms are my favorite part of the whole piece. I like how they remind the viewer simultaneously of a crustacean and a cephalopod. I think that the focal points could be the claws themselves though, not the face, seeing as they are the most unique part of the piece. I would suggest adding a little more detail or texture to these to bring them out. Otherwise, the piece looks great.
Cheers,
axiom-concepts
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Wow thank you very much that was a very good critique I appreciate it! I do agree that the chin could be longer that is a really good point! I was thinking of making the hands like a pair of scythes or something like that! I still need to come up with a way to make clothing and other features. The next one will be less creepy and I will try to add more detail.
Thanks again!
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No problem! always glad to help out a fellow artist.
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