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Published: 2008-07-30 01:03:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 509; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 4
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The thoughts run in Suriv's head, He is grinning... he is happy... he is happy... he is a good guy.... She is a bit tired in waiting for somebody to sign out from the inn, exploring the inn and found interesting people.There is a lot I like and dislike about this. Yes, sweets, I messed up.
Entry for *kuro-musouka 's contest : [link]
Loc (c) *kuro-musouka
Suriv (c) InnocenceEvil / Kimmy
Invader Zim related (c) JCV
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Comments: 9
A very nice piece.. The linework is great! Very clean-cut ^^ and the shadowing is great as well... If anything, there is only a few issues with the anatomy... But I see MsMouse have pointed it out
A great drawing!
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thx for the comment, I will try to improve on drawing anatomy.
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Well, since it says Advanced Critique Encouraged, I'll try to do this without hurting you, but I can be...pretty harsh. So if you don't like your art being torn apart, don't ....read farther. 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
There isn't actually much wrong with this, actually. THe arm to the right (or the guys left arm) doesn't seem...right. He's supposed to be relaxing his arms in the "I'm cool" way, right? Well, for that you probably should have put his arm on top of the cough thing he's sitting on, in a form like >
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\\ <- Looks like a person, doesn't it? Kinda.
Anyways.... SO yeah, just make sure his arm goes striaght out, then bends down. The finger onthat hand are also a little messed up, but fingers are just hard in general.
Other then that, I think it's really really good.
Ouch. xDDD jk. Don't worry, it didn't hurt me. You are not harsh!! nice try xDD
ya. I know that messed up. I was blur on that moment to fix it. I agree fingers are hard to make it look right... *cough* you noticed I been avoiding to draw them? I need more practice.
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