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Published: 2005-10-07 22:01:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Beautiful as it was terrible,The girls world seemed abstract
Stones throwing themselves through windows,
Cracked but never broken she would cry.
God forsaken land of wonder
Truth speaks not in her passive voice
Broken katana stings of the butterfly.
High above the heavens,
So low she'd drown in the sea,
Some knowledge couldn't have voice
Speak but not of me
Show some hate, Give a bit
Emphasis on honor could pass,
Roar of the whisper
Thunder at noon
Friends don't wait for that.
Shouldered outward
Caution! Left turn
Stop, Speed Racer, Go!
She screamed before the first blade was drawn
And the sounds that could have enshrouded her became
Abstract Block at dawn.
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Comments: 2
Deathstarr [2005-10-07 23:04:20 +0000 UTC]
The first stanza is great. Overall a pleasing read. <3
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Innsomnia In reply to Deathstarr [2005-10-07 23:30:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I really appreciate your feedback!
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