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InsaneVaporeon — Experiment R-375892: Chapter 1
Published: 2014-02-18 03:58:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 537; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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"Where am I?" said Raven as she woke up unconsciously. Raven looked around the laboratory, she saw lots of machines, scraps of metal and two robots, a tall yellow one and a round silver one. "Pass me the DNA." As Dr Eggman was creating a creature to defeat Sonic once and for all. "This will be the special weapon to defeat that little blue hedgehog!" As Eggman was trying to put the DNA in Raven, Sonic crashed into Dr Eggman's laboratory as soon as Eggman was about to put e DNA in. "Hello Eggman, is this your new plush toy to stop me?" said Sonic. "This is not my plush toy, it's my secret weapon" exclaimed Eggman. "If it was secret then why did you tell me? Very smart of you to tell me your secret weapon." Sonic said sarcastically as he took Raven away to see what she does at Chris's attic with his friends. 


"Hey guys guess what I found in Eggman's play house!" as Sonic told the others. "What is it Sonic, it's so cute!" Amy replied. "We'll I don't know what it is so I'll ask what's its name is." Sonic answered. "Hello there, what is your name?" Sonic asked Raven. "My name is Ra-a-ven." Raven stammered as she tried to speak English. "W-ho are you? Raven asked. "I am Sonic, Sonic the hedgehog." Sonic pointed to Tails. "This is my buddy Tails." "Hello there Raven." Tails said as he smiled. Then Amy stood up as she introduced herself. "I am Amy Rose." Then Amy pointed to Cream and Cheese. "This is Cream the rabbit and Cheese, Cream's chao" "Its very nice to meet you Miss Raven." Cream said softly. Chris stood up and walked up to Raven and kneeled on his legs. "Hello there Raven, I'm Christopher, but you can call me Chris." 


"S-Sonic, T-Tails, A-Amy, C-Cream and C-h-heese, C-Chris, it is very nice to meet you." As Raven smiled, then the others smiled. "Hey Raven, would you like to play with us outside?" Sonic asked. Then Chuck (Chris's grandpa) came in the attic. "Chris, what is that black rabbit thing in the room?" "This is Raven, Sonic found her in Dr Eggman's laboratory." Chris replied. "Hmm, Raven might be evil, so I'm going to scan her if she's evil or not." "W-ho are you?" Raven asked Chuck. "I am Chuck, Christopher's grandpa." He replied. "Come with me please Raven." Chuck asked. "Ok then, Chuck." As Chuck went to his lab while Raven and the others followed. 



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hunterN05 [2014-02-18 04:19:51 +0000 UTC]

Last time I left a critique on a story it got taken down -_- but eh, oh well YOLO.

I'll just say this, I like the story, while somewhat confusing at parts, no details I can see and some of the paragraphs could use some fixing, I love it.

Good work.


(might want to try and get a beta. )

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K-9-6-9 [2014-02-18 04:00:59 +0000 UTC]

This story has no details.

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