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Published: 2009-05-03 15:55:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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condemnation in dry eyesno tears shall fall from them
no sorrows or sympathy will assuage the fears
we're aΒ Β struggling rose on a thorny stem
no room for mistakes
the pressure squeezing tight
the rope is holding fast
the bottles almost dry
can we make it through the maze
this labyrinth from hell
can we make it to the end
and can we really tell?
the protagonist antagonizes
with hypocritical words
tell them their wrong
(tell fire NOT to burn).
who to turn to?
who to believe?
who will trust?
who will deceive?
condemnation in fiery eyes
no belief for us at all
only words of disbelief
ready to watch us fall
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Comments: 5
i love the second stanza. it hit me personally.
and five problems..or SEVEN!? what in the world are they? that sounds like a lot..course i haven't counted mine..probably would just make me want to drink after i ran out of fingers and toes
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hahaha well its actually down to 4 problems
theyre people.
thus i can count them
im glad you liked it.
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wow..so you killed one? sexy
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hahaha nope
its complicated
i did however model that stanza you like so much after you.
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thank you very much!
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