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Published: 2005-10-31 09:31:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 79; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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The people you see,The lives you pass by,
Caught in their own moment,
A reflection of your lie,
You feel so bitter,
But you never face your reason,
If someone tries to get close,
Might as well be friendly treason,
A painful greeting,
A venemous smile,
A helpful revelation,
Might be a while,
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Hmmm. I can tell this poem will mean something to you, and something to others, but while I judge most works on my feelings bout it, this one doesn't affect me that way, so I'll have to do it based on technicalities. the rhythm is varied but good, and the rhymes are faultless
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