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Published: 2005-11-02 10:31:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Refusal of me,Followed by tears,
As all my worst fears,
Were brought into being,
Completely numb to the everything,
My emotions were all drained from me,
Strip me to pieces,
My pained suffering,
Is the only thing,
You let me keep,
In the darkest times,
Feeling distraught,
All the lessons you taught,
Never trust anyone,
Not even me,
You want me to feel,
But none of this is real,
Not even me,
Strip me to pieces,
My pained suffering,
Is the only thing,
You let me keep,
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Comments: 3
its really good, and i like it how you keeped the lines short but to the point. well done
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It's been a while since i looked over a poem and this one caught my eye. I like how you keep the lines short but percise, and the poem creates delivers very well. great work
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