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The shape of my heart is not of a heart.
My shape is like a balloon.
With an emotional string attached to a red skin,
a skin that shone under the moon.
It started out small when I was first born.
My first breath, it came from you.
With each breath you gave, each breath I received.
My heart, it just grew and grew.
But then your breathing began to slow down;
it eventually came to a stop.
With your weak dying breaths, my heart still grew,
But your last breath caused it to pop.
My heart is shriveled and empty inside.
Every passing day, I grieve.
I hold so dearly to the memories you made...
... Mom... why did you leave?...
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Comments: 56
ARTgazer12 [2016-09-21 20:30:37 +0000 UTC]
...this was beautifully written. I am sorry for your loss.
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LadyManticore101 [2016-09-21 01:00:09 +0000 UTC]
Dude, that is such a beautifully tragic tribute.There is no possible way for me to know how you feel right now. I sincerely hope you can find comfort in this trying time. I may not know you personally but I bet your mother is proud of you.
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ElvenMonsterHuntress [2016-09-19 00:16:02 +0000 UTC]
I'm so sorry for your loss. A mother is a very special person. May she find peace.
This is real poetry right here.
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Corporal-Chaordic In reply to ElvenMonsterHuntress [2016-09-19 21:15:07 +0000 UTC]
Amen.
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TuxbieArtistic [2016-09-18 22:12:32 +0000 UTC]
Wow, Did your mother passed away!?, May she rest in peace!
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squimberlythebab [2016-09-18 19:23:10 +0000 UTC]
OH GOD NO THIS IS TOO MUCH FOR ME
/// angry sobbing about my mom// ;;;;
if this is about your mother i am very sorry for your loss, our hearts go out to you <3<3<3
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DracoWolf17 [2016-09-18 17:23:45 +0000 UTC]
Is this a personal poem or this like a tribute to Adrian or something?
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Oniiix In reply to DracoWolf17 [2016-09-18 22:30:32 +0000 UTC]
Ipku's Mom died from cancer a few years ago. I think that this is an anniversary of some sort.
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Starfall12 [2016-09-18 13:52:58 +0000 UTC]
This is just...Β Β
Too beautiful and too sad
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diebitch2947 [2016-09-18 10:42:19 +0000 UTC]
... Such a beautiful poem... I'm so sorry.
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loner911 [2016-09-18 05:33:00 +0000 UTC]
this is a beautiful poem, and i'm sorry for the loss of your loved one
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djjafeth [2016-09-18 04:58:56 +0000 UTC]
ohh sh...
damn man, im sorry for your loss D:
and your mom, its too hurtful
my condolences u_u
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Karren-san [2016-09-18 01:35:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry for your loss. I know how it's like to lose someone. It hurts, but you need to be strong.
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DragonzWhisperer [2016-09-17 22:54:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry for your loss. I grieve with you.
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DemonizedSilver [2016-09-17 22:51:55 +0000 UTC]
im sorry Ipku... at least youll be able to see her again in the after life
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TimMcJimFromPL [2016-09-17 18:26:54 +0000 UTC]
I'm so sorry. Is there somethink I can draw to commemorate her? What she like?
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Goldenfredy [2016-09-17 16:51:14 +0000 UTC]
...these things happen...
neither you nor I nor anyone can stop them, we can only delay them ... all we can do is live matenerlas in our memories and move forward once they are ... they're gone
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WrathChildG [2016-09-17 15:22:09 +0000 UTC]
You are only on the front because deviantart decided to burry my deviationΒ Forced...Results
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Bowser14456 [2016-09-17 14:57:50 +0000 UTC]
I'm so sorry for your loss. I can't imagine what it must feel like...
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CQ-SkyPaint [2016-09-17 14:57:11 +0000 UTC]
I am so sorry Ipku. Nothing matches your grief. However all you can do s love, and remember, and keep on in her memory if that helps...
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LindaTheHedgehog194 [2016-09-17 13:12:24 +0000 UTC]
How sad.....I'm so so sorry for your loss...Β Β
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Imagination7 [2016-09-17 10:53:21 +0000 UTC]
...don't be sad, she wouldn't want you to be sad, but I know that it's inevitable...I'm so sorry, I really am so sorry, that I can't be there with you to help you cheer up, though I know that I wouldn't be able to do much. If you need someone to talk to, don't hesitate to come to me. I hate it when my friends are sad and I can't do anything about it...Sorry for your loss..
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thebestial [2016-09-17 09:47:52 +0000 UTC]
J'ai perdu mon grand pere, je sais donc ce que c'est de perdre quelqun, alors si t as besoin de quelqun pour parler te gène pas. Entre francais on peut s entraider
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KatsKottage [2016-09-17 09:45:25 +0000 UTC]
If you need someone to talk to at all, I'm a good shoulder to cry on and someone to talk to.
I know what its like to lose someone close. My condolences.
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Bananas-are-violet [2016-09-17 08:01:24 +0000 UTC]
I'm so so sorry ;-;
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aruma-san [2016-09-17 05:09:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm crying...aw Chat *hugg* keep strong for her keep strong...
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