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The shape of my heart is not of a heart.
My shape is like a balloon.
With an emotional string attached to a red skin,
a skin that shone under the moon.
It started out small when I was first born.
My first breath, it came from you.
With each breath you gave, each breath I received.
My heart, it just grew and grew.
But then your breathing began to slow down;
it eventually came to a stop.
With your weak dying breaths, my heart still grew,
But your last breath caused it to pop.
My heart is shriveled and empty inside.
Every passing day, I grieve.
I hold so dearly to the memories you made...

... Mom... why did you leave?...

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MargozMidnight [2017-03-07 00:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Amazing...

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luzare711 [2017-02-10 22:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Very touching and beautifull. Good job.

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munq8i5 [2016-10-02 21:41:06 +0000 UTC]

/. Β .\
Β  ^

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ARTgazer12 [2016-09-21 20:30:37 +0000 UTC]

...this was beautifully written. I am sorry for your loss.

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LadyManticore101 [2016-09-21 01:00:09 +0000 UTC]

Dude, that is such a beautifully tragic tribute.There is no possible way for me to know how you feel right now. I sincerely hope you can find comfort in this trying time. I may not know you personally but I bet your mother is proud of you.

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Toonanimals [2016-09-20 13:45:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry for your loss! ;-;

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tchannekoi [2016-09-19 00:41:43 +0000 UTC]

;_;

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ElvenMonsterHuntress [2016-09-19 00:16:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry for your loss. A mother is a very special person. May she find peace.
This is real poetry right here.

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Corporal-Chaordic In reply to ElvenMonsterHuntress [2016-09-19 21:15:07 +0000 UTC]

Amen.

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TuxbieArtistic [2016-09-18 22:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Did your mother passed away!?, May she rest in peace!

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squimberlythebab [2016-09-18 19:23:10 +0000 UTC]

OH GOD NO THIS IS TOO MUCH FOR ME


/// angry sobbing about my mom// ;;;;

if this is about your mother i am very sorry for your loss, our hearts go out to you <3<3<3

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DracoWolf17 [2016-09-18 17:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Is this a personal poem or this like a tribute to Adrian or something?

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Oniiix In reply to DracoWolf17 [2016-09-18 22:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Ipku's Mom died from cancer a few years ago. I think that this is an anniversary of some sort.

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Uncanny-Player [2016-09-18 14:29:29 +0000 UTC]

*crying actual tears*

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Starfall12 [2016-09-18 13:52:58 +0000 UTC]

This is just...Β  Β 


Too beautiful and too sad

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Supach [2016-09-18 12:59:15 +0000 UTC]

Β Β 

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diebitch2947 [2016-09-18 10:42:19 +0000 UTC]

... Such a beautiful poem... I'm so sorry.

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loner911 [2016-09-18 05:33:00 +0000 UTC]

this is a beautiful poem, and i'm sorry for the loss of your loved one

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charliethemew012 [2016-09-18 05:19:05 +0000 UTC]

Im sorry for your loss

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djjafeth [2016-09-18 04:58:56 +0000 UTC]

ohh sh...

damn man, im sorry for your loss D:
and your mom, its too hurtful
my condolences u_u

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YumiTsukiyoru [2016-09-18 03:08:13 +0000 UTC]

my... condolences...

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Karren-san [2016-09-18 01:35:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry for your loss. I know how it's like to lose someone. It hurts, but you need to be strong.

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DragonzWhisperer [2016-09-17 22:54:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry for your loss. I grieve with you.

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DemonizedSilver [2016-09-17 22:51:55 +0000 UTC]

im sorry Ipku... at least youll be able to see her again in the after life

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TimMcJimFromPL [2016-09-17 18:26:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry. Is there somethink I can draw to commemorate her? What she like?

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Gumizelki [2016-09-17 18:00:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry for your loss...

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UnicornTwilightShine [2016-09-17 17:27:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry for your loss...

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Goldenfredy [2016-09-17 16:51:14 +0000 UTC]

...these things happen...
neither you nor I nor anyone can stop them, we can only delay them ... all we can do is live matenerlas in our memories and move forward once they are ... they're gone

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Quinne-Dharcwind [2016-09-17 15:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Im sorry for your loss.

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WrathChildG [2016-09-17 15:22:09 +0000 UTC]

You are only on the front because deviantart decided to burry my deviationΒ Forced...Results

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Bowser14456 [2016-09-17 14:57:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry for your loss. I can't imagine what it must feel like...

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CQ-SkyPaint [2016-09-17 14:57:11 +0000 UTC]

I am so sorry Ipku. Nothing matches your grief. However all you can do s love, and remember, and keep on in her memory if that helps...

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LindaTheHedgehog194 [2016-09-17 13:12:24 +0000 UTC]

How sad.....I'm so so sorry for your loss...Β Β 

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adileibu2014 [2016-09-17 12:05:24 +0000 UTC]

im so sorry for your lost sweety...

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Roguewerecat [2016-09-17 12:01:32 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry for your loss

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BeachGal22 [2016-09-17 11:59:54 +0000 UTC]

I know how you feel.

Cry with me.

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Spikeanator [2016-09-17 10:59:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry...

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Imagination7 [2016-09-17 10:53:21 +0000 UTC]

...don't be sad, she wouldn't want you to be sad, but I know that it's inevitable...I'm so sorry, I really am so sorry, that I can't be there with you to help you cheer up, though I know that I wouldn't be able to do much. If you need someone to talk to, don't hesitate to come to me. I hate it when my friends are sad and I can't do anything about it...Sorry for your loss..

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sandykalim [2016-09-17 10:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Omg 😒 i am so sorry for ur loss

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thebestial [2016-09-17 09:47:52 +0000 UTC]

J'ai perdu mon grand pere, je sais donc ce que c'est de perdre quelqun, alors si t as besoin de quelqun pour parler te gène pas. Entre francais on peut s entraider

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KatsKottage [2016-09-17 09:45:25 +0000 UTC]

If you need someone to talk to at all, I'm a good shoulder to cry on and someone to talk to.
I know what its like to lose someone close. My condolences.

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Bitterschock [2016-09-17 09:00:46 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry for your lost.

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SilverTox [2016-09-17 08:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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Bananas-are-violet [2016-09-17 08:01:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm so so sorry ;-;

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mallorierocks09 [2016-09-17 07:43:23 +0000 UTC]

I'm way to speachless....

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Fairy-Fang [2016-09-17 05:26:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm crying..

I'm literally crying no joke..

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aruma-san [2016-09-17 05:09:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm crying...aw Chat *hugg* keep strong for her keep strong...

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cheshcat2 [2016-09-17 04:59:25 +0000 UTC]

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bluewolf4444 [2016-09-17 04:51:30 +0000 UTC]

W-Wow....

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squeakyhammer [2016-09-17 04:40:45 +0000 UTC]

This is so sad..

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