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The best way to dieThe worst way to die
Is without any regrets,
Is with so many regrets,
Quickly and painlessly,
Slowly and painfully,
Having lived a full life
Having not lived at all
And ready to ascend into the heavens.
And unprepared to fall into hell.
There is nothing left on earth
There is so much left on earth
For us to do.
Death has come to redeem us,
Death has come to capture us,
And we are ready for him,
And we try to hide from him,
As our hearts are clean.
As we have secrets.
We will be remembered
We will be forgotten
By our loved ones
and also the world.
A legacy and memory we have left
We are but another weight on earth,
Alive for future generations,
Dead and rotting away aimlessly,
Like a fire burning strong.
Like if we were the living dead.
Love is one of the best feelings to have felt,
Torture and betrayal are worse than death
As it fuels your fire and warms your soul,
Because they slowly and gradually degrade you
Tying and fortifying relationships together.
Both inside and out, destroying relationships.
Dying with these things
Is very powerful indeed.
We wish to move onward
We wish to go back home
Into the clouds above
To our planet called Earth
Where our master resides
Where we feel safe and sound
With his pure angels
With our own species
And complete our mission.
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Comments: 79
IridescentCatalyst In reply to Meow313 [2016-05-01 13:12:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I had kind of forgotten about this since it was awhile ago, haha.
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Meow313 In reply to IridescentCatalyst [2016-05-01 13:13:26 +0000 UTC]
was in the more from ... box xD
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blueturtle1994 [2014-02-08 17:51:12 +0000 UTC]
This is very powerful and it really makes you think about the kind of life you're living.
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to blueturtle1994 [2014-02-09 00:41:28 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I was aiming for something like that. ^^
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ObsidianRavenShadow [2014-02-05 00:37:57 +0000 UTC]
OMG !!! Fabulous INTENSE piece of work !!! Very thought provoking !!! I love it !!!
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to ObsidianRavenShadow [2014-02-05 00:44:02 +0000 UTC]
Why, thank you (and for the favorite, too)! I'm glad you thought it was "intense" and "thought provoking." That's what I was aiming for (;
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ObsidianRavenShadow In reply to IridescentCatalyst [2014-02-05 02:04:28 +0000 UTC]
You have an incredible depth in your vision of life and death !!! They are thoughts that need so much to be provoked and dwelled upon but we fear them to the very depths of our soul !!! Keep up the good work !!! And thank you as well !!!
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to ObsidianRavenShadow [2014-02-05 02:19:07 +0000 UTC]
Ah, it just sort of came out, but thanks once again. That's a nice way of putting it. I will try to do good. ^^
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ObsidianRavenShadow In reply to IridescentCatalyst [2014-02-05 02:37:34 +0000 UTC]
You're quite awesome man !!! Your vision and talent is far greater than you even know yet my friend !!!
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to ObsidianRavenShadow [2014-02-05 03:01:24 +0000 UTC]
You give me lots of credit! Thank you one final time! Your words have made my day. I appreciate it, and have a nice day (:
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TopHatBigPencil [2014-02-03 00:07:16 +0000 UTC]
I love this, it's so beautiful and deep. It's exactly how I feel about death, so I want to make the best of what I have. Thank you for sharing this.
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to TopHatBigPencil [2014-02-03 00:14:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, and no problem!
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to RobyRidge [2013-12-26 17:11:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for reading, commenting, and for the favorite! Your support is appreciated (:
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falconess22 [2013-12-19 01:38:04 +0000 UTC]
Bravo!!!
This was really well written, and the contrast is amazing. I haven't read a poem like this before
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to falconess22 [2013-12-19 01:40:23 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thanks! It just sort of came out, like most of my poems do.
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falconess22 In reply to IridescentCatalyst [2013-12-19 01:41:11 +0000 UTC]
I guess writing tends to do that sometimes. It just happens, and it's unexpected
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to falconess22 [2013-12-19 01:42:57 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, true. In a way, it's good. ^^
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TheMalloryPerson [2013-12-18 03:50:02 +0000 UTC]
Wow... Just wow.
You did a good job.
This flowed together so well.
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TheMalloryPerson In reply to IridescentCatalyst [2013-12-18 21:39:45 +0000 UTC]
Your definitely welcome. xD
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Alexsauce [2013-12-16 03:25:31 +0000 UTC]
Neat concept! If you had any doubt on whether you captured the idea you had in mind, I would like to assure you that I think you did an excellent job in putting it into words. The format really adds to the straight forwardness of the message, and it creates a more evocative environment. A tough subject to face, writer or reader, but it's well written. You should be proud. I think you aced it. At its core, it's simple yet engaging, and that's what I liked most. The message is clear and I cared to see where it ended. There isn't any rough edges or slop. A refined idea executed well. Good job
I enjoy art. I enjoy reading. I believe everyone has a talent, and I believe anyone that can talk or write has something to say. However, a majority of what I (or we) encounter regularly is there to simply amuse us, entertain us, or to capture our attention briefly. What I define as true art is not something of staggering achievement or superb quality. You did something more than just string words together. You spoke. And that, I say, is true art.
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to Alexsauce [2013-12-16 12:34:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for everything! You give me much credit. I'm glad my message was conveyed (:
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VeloArtwork [2013-12-14 23:30:44 +0000 UTC]
You did a wonderful job getting the duality of fear and beauty in this image. Also because you made the text join together at certain points and made it also a VISUAL joining and separation, not only the text itself.
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to VeloArtwork [2013-12-14 23:33:37 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I was aiming for that! I'm glad you got it. Thanks for reading, for the comment, and for the favorite! Your support is appreciated (:
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VeloArtwork In reply to IridescentCatalyst [2013-12-14 23:36:03 +0000 UTC]
Hey, I'm glad to have found your work here. It's really fascinating to read. I might dig into it a bit more.
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to VeloArtwork [2013-12-14 23:37:27 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad to have you here! Thanks again! ^^
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VeloArtwork In reply to IridescentCatalyst [2013-12-14 23:40:25 +0000 UTC]
Sure, no problem!
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PatternVSUser [2013-12-12 12:33:17 +0000 UTC]
It just nails it. I wish it had something more constructive to say but you nailed it.
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to PatternVSUser [2013-12-12 13:19:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for the comment and favorite as well as for reading!
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DeviousGlassworks [2013-12-10 14:59:03 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful, I think it captures our fear of the unknown beautifully.
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to DeviousGlassworks [2013-12-10 15:00:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I was aiming for something of the sort (:
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october26 [2013-12-09 19:55:02 +0000 UTC]
I could understand most of your words and really felt I identified
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to october26 [2013-12-09 19:55:46 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad! Thanks for reading and commenting (:
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to themetalsoldier [2013-12-08 13:45:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for reading and favoriting!
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LunardreamerEmy [2013-12-08 01:23:06 +0000 UTC]
Yet another piece of writing that leaves me speechless. You never cease to impress me, seriously. Keep it up (:
Also, I believe this could count as a two-voice poem.
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to LunardreamerEmy [2013-12-08 01:54:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for the kind words and support! I will try to do good. Also, thanks for the answer. I think that's what it would be called, too.
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LunardreamerEmy In reply to IridescentCatalyst [2013-12-08 03:23:29 +0000 UTC]
Yeah anytime man ^-^
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to White-Eagless [2013-12-06 12:17:45 +0000 UTC]
From who? ... Oh, him. Well, I try (:
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White-Eagless In reply to IridescentCatalyst [2013-12-06 20:00:16 +0000 UTC]
well, it is very good ^^
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White-Eagless In reply to IridescentCatalyst [2013-12-06 20:05:15 +0000 UTC]
*grins*
do you have an inspiration?
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IridescentCatalyst In reply to White-Eagless [2013-12-06 20:08:51 +0000 UTC]
Not really. To be honest, I only started writing this year, and I just write what's i my heart and what sounds right. I suppose various people inspire me, but in the end, it's self motivation and creation (:
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