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UPDATE: Now with full length story by Lislsdream !Take it away Elisa:
It is a fresh early autumn morning, with a light mist blending imperceptibly with the sky. The Sun is up, though, starting to cut through the damp air, and its yellow light casts their shadows out behind them, and glints on the dewdrops that coat the girl's bare body. She is finding it hard to catch the rhythm they are trying to teach her; each pace is foreshortened by her hobble, but the goblins are making her hurry along, almost running...and in a moment of sudden unexpectedly clear thinking, she realises she is trotting...
Her feet, the only bits of her that were covered, tap and dance on the ground: her long legs flashing inner sides alternately, little pert breasts bouncing in syncopation. Her slender paleness was emphatically, dramatically, shown off by her near total nudity: at random moments, she kept noticing the feel of fresh air on her newly displayed skin.She feels her left rein pulled sharply: the corner of her bit-gag pulling into her cheek, and she briefly smells and tastes the fresh sap of ironwood; the goblins' favourite building material. She crazily thought how sturdy, how solid, how real, the bit in her mouth was, and wondered if her teeth were making any indents in its surface? How dry her mouth flet with her lips parted open all the time...
A stripe of whip across her knees for turning too quickly, without the high stepping movement they seemed keen for her to pick up. Her legs scissored again and again, while the goblin on her right rein made clicking noises. Encouragement? Annoyance? She didn't know. She couldn't gain any time to gather her thoughts, had had none since she was captured in the berry woods, and the puzzle of the goblins' speech was an insignificant one amongst many: the huge, terrifying, exciting mysteries that surrounded her, engulfed her, enslaved her.
The rein tugged left again, and the blonde pony was led back around the circle in the centre of the village, for another circuit.
The Girlmaster was quietly impressed with her: while she had shown fear and worry and confusion, as all new mares did, this white's eyes shone with an acceptance, a calmness, a submission, that he would not expect to see for at least six months... Still, she would need many weeks of training, taming, he had had only just started work on her. He flicked his quoit at her thighs, approving of the slap sting it made against her pale limbs; such short jolts of pain teach the mares the lessons they must learn first: that they were to submit to the directions of their masters. The blonde sighed softly behind her bitgag, and the Girlmaster was sure this grey pony would be broken in record time.
Much later that day he said, only half-jokingly, to his wife "That grey is already resigned to her new role, I tell you. As if she had had her future foretold, that it said she would be a pony, it was her destiny, and by becoming a ponygirl, she would become her true self..."
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My original caption:
The morning after the ponygirl hunt, the rest of the tribe is still sleeping off the feast - but for the tribe's girlmaster and an assistant, it's straight to work saddle-breaking the new captives! Hobbled to keep her from kicking and running, it's a physical but routine task for the two goblins to walk her by the bridle about the outskirts of the camp, slowly training her to move at another's behest...
The village background was a total afterthought, this was originally going to be just these three characters standing on a sort of display base against a white backdrop, perhaps starting a series-within-a-series of such pics. But I liked how it looked, and it kind of made it a natural continuation of Room for one more..? I thought about populating the background with more characters but I sort of like it like this - it ended up with an oddly olde-tyme photograph sort of atmosphere, which I played up with some anachronous vignetting for the hell of it.
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Comments: 54
Arctoss [2022-12-31 16:22:55 +0000 UTC]
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pr-squared [2016-08-01 20:41:53 +0000 UTC]
Much enjoy the tale and the clever additions to the cannon like the iron wood bit. The goblins have no experience with 4-legged horses. I doubt they would use equine terms for their mannish mounts. They might more likely call a mature female 4-legged horse a mom or momsy than call a mature female mannish mount a mare. A young female 4legged horse would be a girl, not a filly, and a young male 4-legged horse a boy, not a colt. A horse is simply a 4-legged man.
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Lislsdream In reply to pr-squared [2016-08-07 02:33:37 +0000 UTC]
I'm so pleased you like my little story. All the real work is done by IronHawk: I'm just pleased he inspires me!
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IronHawk-R In reply to pr-squared [2016-08-02 10:45:29 +0000 UTC]
One idea I had, which will probably make it into a caption at some point, is that goblins don't have separate words to differentiate their mounts from other human women, but that "ponygirl" is used by goblin-friendly humans for that purpose...
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Lislsdream [2016-07-29 01:26:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Iron-Hawk: you are the BEST.
It is a fresh early autumn morning, with a light mist blending imperceptibly with the sky. The Sun is up, though, starting to cut through the damp air, and its yellow light casts their shadows out behind them, and glints on the dewdrops that coat the girl's bare body. She is finding it hard to catch the rhythm they are trying to teach her; each pace is foreshortened by her hobble, but the goblins are making her hurry along, almost running...and in a moment of sudden unexpectedly clear thinking, she realises she is trotting...
Her feet, the only bits of her that were covered, tap and dance on the ground: her long legs flashing inner sides alternately, little pert breasts bouncing in syncopation. Her slender paleness was emphatically, dramatically, shown off by her near total nudity: at random moments, she kept noticing the feel of fresh air on her newly displayed skin.She feels her left rein pulled sharply: the corner of her bit-gag pulling into her cheek, and she briefly smells and tastes the fresh sap of ironwood; the goblins' favourite building material. She crazily thought how sturdy, how solid, how real, the bit in her mouth was, and wondered if her teeth were making any indents in its surface? How dry her mouth flet with her lips parted open all the time...
A stripe of whip across her knees for turning too quickly, without the high stepping movement they seemed keen for her to pick up. Her legs scissored again and again, while the goblin on her right rein made clicking noises. Encouragement? Annoyance? She didn't know. She couldn't gain any time to gather her thoughts, had had none since she was captured in the berry woods, and the puzzle of the goblins' speech was an insignificant one amongst many: the huge, terrifying, exciting mysteries that surrounded her, engulfed her, enslaved her.
The rein tugged left again, and the blonde pony was led back around the circle in the centre of the village, for another circuit.
The Girlmaster was quietly impressed with her: while she had shown fear and worry and confusion, as all new mares did, this white's eyes shone with an acceptance, a calmness, a submission, that he would not expect to see for at least six months... Still, she would need many weeks of training, taming, he had had only just started work on her. He flicked his quoit at her thighs, approving of the slap sting it made against her pale limbs; such short jolts of pain teach the mares the lessons they must learn first: that they were to submit to the directions of their masters. The blonde sighed softly behind her bitgag, and the Girlmaster was sure this grey pony would be broken in record time.
Much later that day he said, only half-jokingly, to his wife "That grey is already resigned to her new role, I tell you. As if she had had her future foretold, that it said she would be a pony, it was her destiny, and by becoming a ponygirl, she would become her true self..."
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IronHawk-R In reply to Lislsdream [2016-07-31 14:01:37 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I'll add this to the description
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martydibergi666 [2016-07-26 23:43:57 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Love the look in her eyes. A mixture of pain, fear, but mostly (for me) total bewilderment. She still can't fully believe that this is for real. The first morning in her new life. And what better way to start than under the supervision of an experienced girl master and his talented apprentice? Professionals who got up in the early hours of the morning to carefully prepare her and the other ponies for training, applying the delicate body painting and choosing her first charms in order to appeal to the tribe's demons for helping all three of them in their tasks, which are to train and to be trained.
Our pony just got a good smack with the girl master's whip a moment before he tugged her bridle to his side, didn't she? Her head is already yanked to the side but he is still in his jump and the bridle is already strained. This is quite a forceful tug and she will be pulled hard to the left. Well, saddle-breaking is a physical task and intentions have to be made clear to help her understand. She is also already glistening with sweat, isn't she? I do not know how long the goblins are walking her around, but I expect long hours of running circles on a longe for her in the upcoming weeks to get her into shape.
The apprentice seems to appraise her. What does she think? "Good body, docile, but not in shape and somewhat dumb. Will be a good pony in the end but will require some work."
Again great work and many thanks for a little bit of sillines, cannot say how eagerly I await new entries in the pony series.
PS: Since "Room for one more" I hoped you would do a scene like this. At first I thought it would be interesting to follow the tavern wench's journey, ok, I still do. But if the focus of your series is more on swift and nimble scouts or occasionally stout an brave war ponies I can see that she does not fully fit in there. She is probably more destined for a life of towing heavily laden carts to and from the market in Anzeg.
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IronHawk-R In reply to martydibergi666 [2016-07-28 10:18:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for this, I really appreciate it! I'm glad you got that from her expression, that's what I was aiming for.
I'm probably not going to go back to that tavern wench, since I kind of regret putting her in "Room for one more...?" now. It doesn't really fit the way goblins refrain from doing this sort of thing around settlements where they're welcomed, and that's the whole thing that justifies all the pictures of them in towns! I'm sure there are some nefarious goblins that break the rules when they think they'll get away with it, but even they would know that if too many people start going missing when goblins were around people will get suspicious...
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martydibergi666 In reply to IronHawk-R [2016-07-28 23:13:37 +0000 UTC]
I had that idea that the wench was perhaps handed over. It is strictly forbidden to approach the ponies without their riders' permission. Any female who infringes this rule can be claimed by the goblins. But then I can't come up with a proper reason why she should do this.
Whatever, do not want to pester you with that. Thanks for replying.
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IronHawk-R In reply to martydibergi666 [2016-07-31 14:03:41 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I'm probably just going to ignore it from now on.
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IronHawk-R In reply to martydibergi666 [2016-08-03 22:38:18 +0000 UTC]
Well, maybe I'll squeeze her in somewhere! I just don't plan on making her a central feature.
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MyxLyssa [2016-07-24 11:54:45 +0000 UTC]
I have to say ... i am a little worried about your goblin tribes you have shown so far. They only seem to be able to tame the smaler and physically weaker females of those strange creatures called "human" ... What if a other tribe manages to domesticate the stronger kind. Your tribes will be in trouble. Well at least its good to know that you are relletivly safe roaming the goblin territories when you are tall and fast yourself.
Love your Art <3 ...
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Rook-07 [2016-07-22 00:11:37 +0000 UTC]
I love the sense of motion you've captured in this draw. Job well done!
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IronHawk-R In reply to Rook-07 [2016-07-23 13:41:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks I swear this must represent the 15th or 16th attempts at posing the girl and the goblin with the whip...
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IronHawk-R In reply to thossdenn [2016-07-21 14:37:20 +0000 UTC]
It's not really up to me...
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agricola64 [2016-07-21 14:01:57 +0000 UTC]
I hope we will get to see more of pony girl breaking and training
perhaps keeping it thirsty until it submits .. ?
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agentofchaos53 [2016-07-21 13:50:19 +0000 UTC]
Sexy.. And yes more people in background would be good .Ex. More girls tied up in different positions or training..Maybe even couple hanging upside down on poles.
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IronHawk-R In reply to agentofchaos53 [2016-07-21 13:54:55 +0000 UTC]
I feel like I've done the upside down on poles thing, but there's definitely more training scenes I could do...
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Lislsdream In reply to OakEgg [2016-12-14 06:55:20 +0000 UTC]
Oooh thank you! I know how lucky I have been to be caught in Ironhawk's eye!
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OakEgg In reply to Lislsdream [2016-12-14 10:05:07 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! Cute ponygirls are always popular
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IronHawk-R In reply to OakEgg [2016-07-21 13:53:46 +0000 UTC]
Just have to think of something to do with her now...
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OakEgg In reply to IronHawk-R [2016-07-22 04:50:12 +0000 UTC]
Actually you can use the capture image as the first, this one as the next and so on
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Lawsonwelles [2016-07-21 04:25:57 +0000 UTC]
Looks like fun, a lotta fun in fact! Nice work, as always.
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denkira7 [2016-07-21 02:58:15 +0000 UTC]
Nice expression, a good training is required before the modifications take place.
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Blades-123 [2016-07-21 02:58:02 +0000 UTC]
This looks great, I love the posing. Top class work.
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