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IzunaOtoshi — 37 - Rising Tide

Published: 2014-07-10 18:51:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 22472; Favourites: 131; Downloads: 193
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Valerie sputtered, taken completely by surprise. Jessica’s sudden backhand caught a good portion of her left cheek and the side of her mouth, loosing a small spurt of blood that flew upward. Rocked and thoroughly rattled, she stumbled back unsteadily, and Jessica followed, stinging her with a pointed jab to her reddened eye. The jab set her up for the next attack, a strong right that re-angled the Ripper’s forced retreat to one side. From her compromised stance, Valerie swung a dire left hook that found Jessica’s chin and knocked a bit of spittle from her, but it did little to stop her advance as she bore down on her adversary.  Before she even realized it, Valerie felt soft, yet firm resistance against her back that halted her movement; she found herself trapped in the Nova Striker’s corner.   

“This is it…” Jessica thought as she observed her target. “I can put her down! But I have to move in now, before she can recover!”

Battered and under considerable duress, Valerie tucked her arms in, using her forearms and gloves to block incoming strikes when she could, though some of Jessica’s punches still managed to get through. Valerie fired back on occasion when she thought she saw an opening wide enough, and while a couple of her responses landed, Jessica made sure to answer back in force and keep her pinned tight to the corner. After noticing that Valerie’s guard had lowered slightly, Jessica stepped in close, a move which allowed her to add more power to her punches. At the same time, she twisted her upper body to deliver a brutal left hook that cut clean across the Brit’s jaw and left her dazed. Wasting no time, the nurse settled in and went to work on her captive patient, pulverizing the smaller woman’s face with a series of hooks. Valerie let out loud pained grunts as her head was thrown left and right, arcs of blood and saliva following it.

With a fierce grunt of her own, the raven-haired warrior grit her teeth and leaned in, driving a damaging sledgehammer of a left uppercut deep into Valerie’s unprotected gut. She gurgled as the blunt force pressed her back into the post, the upward thrust lifting her entire body a couple inches from the canvas.

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Comments: 40

C0D3SwOrD [2021-07-04 12:19:31 +0000 UTC]

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sockittome24 [2017-04-10 03:33:49 +0000 UTC]

Well-described! Excellent!

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to sockittome24 [2017-04-13 06:59:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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bitchslap69 [2014-11-27 11:22:57 +0000 UTC]

I have to say that the pictures are amazing. It adds more to each image as a punch is delivered that you see the damage its causing. The mixture of blood and saliva and the expressions on the face of the helpless victim is such a turn on. Seriously, when a sexy women in a bikini is making a human punching bag out of her less fortunate target who is just as sexy as the one dishing it out, how can you not enjoy watching the battle take place. However, what really adds to it is the writing of how the fight takes place. while reading the script that details each and every blow makes it more visual. Thank you for the excellent job of this boxing match. Do you have any others that I can see. ??

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to bitchslap69 [2014-11-28 01:07:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again for checking it out, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and all the work that went into it

As it stands, this is the first story that I've put together in this style; it was more or less an "experiment" as I taught myself how to work with 3D rendering. I'd wanted to do boxing stories for a while, so this made a pretty good excuse to try it out

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Noggs991 [2014-07-13 18:40:18 +0000 UTC]

Great series of pictures (like the early "Quick shifting of weight" set). The brutal attack from Jessica has Val trapped in the corner - I like it when a fighter gets caught in the corner like this. However I hope Val survives not least because the story and pictures are so good I want a round 5.

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to Noggs991 [2014-07-15 14:50:01 +0000 UTC]

Though it isn't a good place to be, I have to admit it does make for good images

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CIIKXV [2014-07-12 11:02:36 +0000 UTC]

YES!! Go Jessica!!! I love the 'through gritted teeth' determination on Jessica's face here and that body blow!! Let's just say that if Valerie took speed to a new level a moment ago, I think Jessica just did the same for power!! The right fist looks dangerously poised to crash info her side!! It might be best for Valerie is that blow knocks her down, or she risks Jessica fracturing something if she keeps throwing those bombs!!

This is the best pic so far!! Might be interesting to see Valerie survive the bell to see how her energy and movement has been affected into the next round!

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to CIIKXV [2014-07-12 19:00:53 +0000 UTC]

You know I hadn't realized that until you mentioned it, (the "new level" thing) but now that you did, I agree completely

Now, we must find out if Valerie makes it to the bell

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Wendel-Fragoso [2014-07-12 00:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Trapped in the corner?
I love to see this!

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to Wendel-Fragoso [2014-07-12 19:01:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it, I had fun making it too

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crazyman54 [2014-07-11 17:24:49 +0000 UTC]

So the good girl wins? not a surprise there  

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to crazyman54 [2014-07-11 21:44:49 +0000 UTC]

Er, technically they're both good, more or less. No labeled faces or heels here 

Anyway, I'm surprised you wouldn't want the physically stronger fighter winning. Or wait, is that only in mixed matches?

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CIIKXV In reply to IzunaOtoshi [2014-07-12 11:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Yes that's how I see it too. I think Valerie's attitude has painted her slightly in the less-than-good girl mode, but they're both probably 'faces'. Or is it just a lawyer v nurse? Wonder who would be the fan favourite there?

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to CIIKXV [2014-07-12 18:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Hm. Its kind of like the system in Mass Effect; Paragon and Renegade. Both are "good", but the way that they go about being good can differ somewhat

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KiraYamato74 [2014-07-11 06:20:55 +0000 UTC]

Whoa!  Valerie's been trapped in the corner and she's really taking a pounding from those vicious hooks and that crushing body blow!  Definitely not looking good for the blond Brit here.  O.O

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to KiraYamato74 [2014-07-11 21:40:42 +0000 UTC]

Not at the moment, but the round will be winding down soon. If she can survive until the bell, she might be able to regroup

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wingman51 [2014-07-11 04:53:55 +0000 UTC]

Great

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to wingman51 [2014-07-11 21:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Jose-Ramiro [2014-07-11 03:24:38 +0000 UTC]

A blond punching bag.

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2014-07-11 21:39:18 +0000 UTC]

If only because of how powerful Jessica's hits are. We'll have to see if she can find a way out

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Jose-Ramiro In reply to IzunaOtoshi [2014-07-12 05:33:54 +0000 UTC]

True.

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Fan1ofSinclair [2014-07-10 23:15:51 +0000 UTC]

I can't see a way back for Valerie, which is good from my point of view, because I want Jessica to win. However as they say 'The opera's not over until the gravitationally challenged lady has sung!'

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to Fan1ofSinclair [2014-07-11 21:37:40 +0000 UTC]

Good point. Everyone seems to want to call this fight as soon as one girl takes a punch or two 

It isn't over yet people

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wrath4 In reply to Fan1ofSinclair [2014-07-11 03:07:43 +0000 UTC]

it's over. we all knew it. unless something really unexpected happens like in the game of thrones....boy....did you see the faces of all the fans at the end of each season of the game of thrones?

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to wrath4 [2014-07-11 21:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Some pretty crazy stuff happens on that show.

But as Fan1 implies, the final bell has not rung, and the fight is not over

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bozeeke [2014-07-10 22:28:54 +0000 UTC]

Looks like the KO is about to come. This bout's just about over. 

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to bozeeke [2014-07-11 21:36:11 +0000 UTC]

Looked like the bout was just about over last round too...

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JessicaLaBoxer [2014-07-10 20:16:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeeaaaaaaaah, go on Jess, punish that bitch as she deserves!! Knock Val out babe, uppercut her!!

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to JessicaLaBoxer [2014-07-11 21:35:17 +0000 UTC]

If nothing else, she's gonna try to at least get her back for the knockdown from Round Three

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darkraixgardevoir [2014-07-10 20:05:49 +0000 UTC]

GO JESSICA!!!

I bet a dollar...don't lose or I'm going to lose that...and fifty cents, that's a lot of money there.

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to darkraixgardevoir [2014-07-11 21:34:00 +0000 UTC]

Haha, we'll have to see what happens to that $1.50

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darkraixgardevoir In reply to IzunaOtoshi [2014-07-12 00:00:54 +0000 UTC]

I can't lose that...NOOOOOOOO- meh. Go Jessica! Come on!


well, I guess we will all have to see.

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AzaSket [2014-07-10 20:01:14 +0000 UTC]

Val is in a pinch!

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to AzaSket [2014-07-11 21:32:42 +0000 UTC]

Looks that way...we know how stubborn she is though

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fxboxing-fan [2014-07-10 19:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Shot in the dark, but this round might go to the good nurse.

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to fxboxing-fan [2014-07-11 21:31:55 +0000 UTC]

Considering Valerie took the first three, I'd say she needed it

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13en-works [2014-07-10 18:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Kind of reminds myself of the time I kicked that bully's ass back in high-school

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IzunaOtoshi In reply to 13en-works [2014-07-10 19:10:23 +0000 UTC]

Ha, that's pretty cool, I'm sure they deserved it too

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13en-works In reply to IzunaOtoshi [2014-07-10 19:56:40 +0000 UTC]

Yea, I got a black eye out of the fight, but you should have seen the other guy, three teeth replaced, a sore jaw, and a split lip

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