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Published: 2004-08-19 01:26:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 2232; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 318
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Our bodies touching,As we lay like statues.
He rests himself upon me,
And looks up at me.
Looking so innocent,
Almost puppy dog eyed,
How can I indulge in such sin?
I can feel his mood changing,
His eyes show another side of him,
He runs his hands up and down me,
Feeling every inch.
My thoughts fade away.
I breathe in and embrace the moment.
Tenderly I kiss him,
Sufforcated by his beauty.
Now I can see his soul,
I feel the intensity,
As he pushes on to me,
Still looking at me with such passion,
I am now in this trance.
Unable to break free,
As if I were handcuffed.
Our bodies intertwined,
We now move as one.
Every flaw and imperfection,
Unseen in the moment.
And in darkness we shine,
Our souls made bare,
The beauty of our hearts,
Enriched by our love.
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Comments: 121
thepillars [2008-01-18 06:43:08 +0000 UTC]
well written. emotional yet sexy and intelligent. very nice.
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dudditz155 [2006-12-17 22:22:10 +0000 UTC]
That is so beautiful. Wow. I am going to show my Alex this. He'll love it too. ^_^
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soberartist [2005-08-02 06:59:30 +0000 UTC]
i absolutely loved this.... my whole body tingled as i read it.... and the picture intensifies the idea. its really incredible!
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little-miss-chad [2005-06-21 08:30:22 +0000 UTC]
yep that was a stunning piece and had nice meaning and emotion to it. well done sweeti
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klarawagner [2005-02-07 06:49:45 +0000 UTC]
this is lovely! the poem and the photo work so well together! your words make me feel i am there with you. on another level it describes something you probably did not exactly intend very well.
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J3ss1CA In reply to klarawagner [2005-02-07 16:03:42 +0000 UTC]
thank you, and thank you for the favourite. x
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KERI-KERI [2005-01-20 01:42:08 +0000 UTC]
absolutely wonderful. I like your choice of words, and the pic really adds impact. keep up the great writing!
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First2Last [2005-01-10 02:28:18 +0000 UTC]
wow i think thats really great. i like it... the pic is hot too.
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blablaskunk [2005-01-08 01:59:43 +0000 UTC]
this is so beautiful! you showed love as it should be, beautiful and between to people who truely understand and love each other. very nice!
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Silverwispsoflight [2004-12-28 03:40:43 +0000 UTC]
Very....sexual lol, it was great ^_^ I like the whole theme to this, you made it all sound very beautiful ^^
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J3ss1CA In reply to Silverwispsoflight [2004-12-28 03:42:19 +0000 UTC]
lol well that was the plan
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goodnightstarlight [2004-12-10 18:46:54 +0000 UTC]
i love this! you're a great writer i think
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split-pea [2004-12-03 22:08:45 +0000 UTC]
Brill
in fact NEW FACOURITE COMING UP!
hehe coll pic as well
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OH-mesa [2004-12-02 03:27:06 +0000 UTC]
wha?
uh....
OH.. ok!
I think this is FABULOUS! I LOVE IT soooooooooooooo much. Its just so... perfect.. and sensual.
great job.
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J3ss1CA In reply to OH-mesa [2004-12-02 16:31:21 +0000 UTC]
lmao.
wow, thank you very much
thank you for the fave as well. xxx
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mallettepagan0 [2004-11-26 05:29:27 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful, and the emotion of it fits well with the picture. ;3 Wonderfuly written.
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darkprincessofhearts [2004-11-24 04:30:25 +0000 UTC]
are you sure you haven't write this before...'cause you write like profesional i love your style
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J3ss1CA In reply to darkprincessofhearts [2004-11-24 07:56:15 +0000 UTC]
yeah, i'm sure i haven't... i wish i could write like it again, but it's more difficult this time. at least people liked my first attempt. thank you for the comment xxxx
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TormentednLost [2004-11-21 14:22:10 +0000 UTC]
i love this picture, is it you? did you take it?? i love these lines here
Every flaw and imperfection,
Unseen in the moment.
Very true to emotion and what.. i love it ^^
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J3ss1CA In reply to TormentednLost [2004-11-21 14:38:08 +0000 UTC]
...no it's not me... i didn't take it... i'm 14, like it's gonna be me, i wish, psh lol.
thank you xxxxx
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insatiableKraze [2004-11-19 05:32:25 +0000 UTC]
i lyke tha way u describe tha feeling of intensity, really good.
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K-A-F-roS [2004-11-16 00:58:40 +0000 UTC]
Your words match each other as the two bodies do in that photo.
It's amazing how that photo is just one capture of the millions of pictures you created.
Congratulations.
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K-A-F-roS In reply to J3ss1CA [2004-11-16 01:07:36 +0000 UTC]
You're talented and this piece shows it. ofcourse .
If you keep this up i'll be stalking you so beware.
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