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Published: 2015-04-21 03:12:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 554; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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Description A photo of you was like a map
with streets and parks
and sites of schools,

and when, one day, we consummated
our growing bond, I almost swooned
as you saw right through me,

feeling vindicated when you
fell in love before we'd met.
I too had always felt the same.

And so, between us, we wrote our book
for all time, to turn page after page
of beloved words, like all the spells

used to conjure renewal of our oath
every year, each day,
with every breath we take.
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Comments: 16

shep4life [2015-05-19 02:57:02 +0000 UTC]

So sweet

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Jade-Pandora In reply to shep4life [2015-05-19 15:01:18 +0000 UTC]

That means so much.

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shep4life In reply to Jade-Pandora [2015-05-22 21:00:17 +0000 UTC]

You have a gift

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Jade-Pandora In reply to shep4life [2015-05-22 21:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Β 
you continue to honor me

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shep4life In reply to Jade-Pandora [2015-05-23 16:50:41 +0000 UTC]

You continue to write gorgeouslyΒ 

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kerrybush42 [2015-04-22 02:44:27 +0000 UTC]

oh my goodness I adore this

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Jade-Pandora In reply to kerrybush42 [2015-04-22 05:21:42 +0000 UTC]

You honor me, sweetheart, thank you!

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S4M1E [2015-04-21 13:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Love it

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Jade-Pandora In reply to S4M1E [2015-04-22 05:23:28 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you, Samantha, and welcome to deviantART!

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Dragonlover84 [2015-04-21 11:43:00 +0000 UTC]

A very strong and loving feel to this. It's as if the two parties were getting to know the other biblically in the most beautiful way. Thank you for sharing! Β 

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Jade-Pandora In reply to Dragonlover84 [2015-04-22 05:26:23 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you, Joey, aren't you a love.

And it was my pleasure, absolutely!

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Leopold002 [2015-04-21 11:06:48 +0000 UTC]

It captured my attention and held it. I like that!

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Jade-Pandora In reply to Leopold002 [2015-04-21 11:28:53 +0000 UTC]

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Stenkuss [2015-04-21 03:15:34 +0000 UTC]

Awe. Heart warming.

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Jade-Pandora In reply to Stenkuss [2015-04-21 03:17:41 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you so much.Β  Yes, Pat, some of these themes have been inspiring me in that direction.Β  And thanks for your support.

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Stenkuss In reply to Jade-Pandora [2015-04-21 03:28:43 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome

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