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Description Winning Hearts and Minds - Helmand, Part One
by JamesE82



A small city near Balbul Karez, the Helmand Province of Afghanistan…


There must have been a terrible mistake. A terrible mistake…

“I’m here to help!” the American woman sobbed for what may have been the hundredth time since being captured and bound to the torture device. “Please, you don’t understand! Somebody! Somebody, please! Let me out of here!”

Janet Raison shifted her weight from the left side of her body to the right, gritting her teeth in pain. A sob was ripped from her as the blood swirled beneath the surface of the indentations in her flesh on her left side, then she moaned as the spikes on the right half of the chair poked her skin and dug deeper into her muscles. “I’m here to… aah! Please, it hurts!”

It was like sitting down for so long your legs fell asleep, she thought; the longer you sat, the worse it tingled, and you knew that the longer you put it off, the greater the discomfort of moving would be when you finally did it. This was not tingling and discomfort, though--it was hot stinging and sheer pain, and her agony was increasing by the minute.

There was no clock in her prison, but she could hear the adhan, the Muslim calls to prayer, emitting from a nearby mosque throughout the day. The fourth one had rang out some time ago, meaning the day was nearly done. She did not need that method of tracking the passage of time, however, as they were keeping her in a cell that must have been quite high off the ground, and not sparse when it came to windows.

She was utterly perplexed at both the fact that her captors apparently were not going to great pains to hide her, and that the people below could hear a woman in distress and not do anything about it. Were the sounds of women screaming in pain so common that nobody paid attention? Didn’t they hear her, and didn’t at least some of them understand that she was a peace worker, not a soldier sent there to murder and destroy?

“Somebody…” she moaned. Her body, slick with sweat both from the blazing heat of the day and being in a state of constant suffering, shivered as a chill crept into the air. “Gaaah!“ she shrieked, her involuntary movements making the spikes dig further into her naked buttocks. She grimaced and leaned forward slightly, bare feet clenching from the effort as she relieved the pain in her seat. She was only trading one agony for another, however, and the feeling of the spikes digging into the backs of her thighs made her gasp.

The aid worker’s eyes went wide when she realized that the temperature was only going to drop further, and eventually the cold would cause her to shiver nonstop. “You have to let me go!” she wailed, knowing that her own body’s uncontrollable movements were going to be the cause of excruciating torture. “You’re good Muslims!” she called, tears running into her mouth as she spoke. “Allah does not want this! He can’t! Please, I respect your religion! I-aah! Oh, it hurts! Please, Islam does not cause pain! I’m not like other Americans, I know this! I’m not a soldier! I’m an American, but not hateful! Don’t you underst-ow! Ooow!“

Janet Raison, head of the Angel Falls chapter of Conscientious Global Citizens, screamed in desperation as the faithful around her were called to prayer for the fifth and final time that day. And while an atheist, the writhing woman found herself joining them in a plea to a higher power, and prayed that whatever god was hearing her would deliver her from this humiliating and agonizing plight…

* * *

An abandoned cannery on the Waterfront, Angel Falls, USA…


“Sounds like she’s got her ass in trouble, alright,” the Crimson Conservative said, mouthing the words around her unfiltered Lucky Strike.

The man across from her nodded. The redheaded supersoldier was seated on a stack of large metal ammo containers, and had not offered him a seat of his own. She had also corrected him when he had the gall to caller her “Connie” during his recitation of the facts concerning the disappearance of his boss, some ditz in charge of one of the countless liberal do-gooder outfits that littered the world.

“She thought she was watchin’ a little kitten getting stepped on by mean ol’ jackbooted American soldiers,” Connie mused with a smirk. “So she listens to her bleedin’ heart and dives right in to save it. Only when she gets on the ground and the soldiers have marched on, she realizes she’s all alone with a damn tiger, and not only don’t the tiger want her help, the big beast is hungry…”

The man sighed and closed his eyes as the giantess laughed. Dillon Trombly wanted to clap his hands over his ears; the sound of her voice was so cruel that it seemed to jab him in the heart like a black knife. “I see that I’ve wasted my time,” he said, voice shaky with a mixture of despair and anger. “I-I see… I see that you’re about as helpful as the State Department is going to be in getting M-Ms. Raison back.”

He turned and began quickly walking to the door, not wanting the monster he had pled his case to to see the tears that were about to come. He was a fool to go to her, he realized; he should have tried one of the Guardians, or-

A large box of ammunition slid across the floor at a frightening speed, kicked with tremendous force by the woman behind him. It slammed into the door as Dillon reached for the handle, causing him to squawk in surprise and dance backwards.

“Compare me to those gutless terrorist appeasers again,” the Crimson Conservative said, “and I’ll make whatever hell your bimbo boss is being put through seem like a stroll through a fairytale garden, singing unicorns ‘n all.”

He stared up at the woman, who had stood and was stretching her limbs. The display of her sheer mass shocked him for a moment, then he swallowed and started to apologize. Despite his hatred for the woman and all she stood for, he did not want to be trapped with her while she was in a bad mood.

Which is why he was extremely relieved to hear the words that came out of the supersoldier’s mouth.

“Don’t worry, kid,” she told him, reducing her cigarette to ash in one final inhalation. “If I have anything to say about it, you’ll get your pretty boss back, all safe ‘n sound, and in time to waste her money on the next PBS pledge drive, too.”

Dillon Trombly blinked. “You mean…”

Connie flicked away the spent Lucky and nodded. “Yup,” she said, taking another from her pack and popping it into her mouth. “Looks like I’m headed back to the sandbox.”

The aid worker felt like he was about to faint, like he was going to be bowled over by the wave of relief and hope the woman’s words had sent crashing into him. Help is on the way, Janet, he thought. He was about to thank the redhead, but was halted by something he thought he saw.

It was hard to tell, as most of her lower face was blocked from his view by the enormous hand that was bringing a lit match up to her cigarette, but the young man thought he saw a flash of teeth in a very large, very eager grin. When the hand was lowered, however, her lips were sealed around the burning Lucky, and he could not be sure…

--To be continued--

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Keywords: Boobs, bondage, shameless pageview-grabbing attempt.

Credit for this cruel-yet-stunning picture goes to , who had a few renders laying around and was generous enough to give me permission to post them. That was very kind of him, especially when you consider that he’s obviously one sadistic SOB. Seriously, he’s a nice guy, and obviously as talented as he is rough with his 3D models.

is where this takes place. Well, Afghanistan, too, but Angel Falls is where my girl and a whole lot of other interesting super-babes call home.

The Crimson Conservative is my creation, © 2009.

Comments welcome, even if it’s to tell me you’re sending this picture to Jennifer Aniston because you somehow think she just might get a kick out of it…
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Comments: 60

JamesE82 In reply to ??? [2012-06-12 01:48:02 +0000 UTC]

We fear nothing, infidel who lives above the Great Satan!

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Paudraic [2012-04-28 19:48:35 +0000 UTC]

Hey action is action.

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JamesE82 In reply to Paudraic [2012-05-02 18:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Yup.

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neosoc [2012-04-20 00:51:27 +0000 UTC]

*sighs and shakes head with wry grin on face*
Y'know, I'd say that this reads like the opening sequence of a REALLY cheesy 80s action movie vehicle for Sylvester Stallone, or Chuck Norris... but something tells me that's exactly what you were going for Still pretty entertaining!

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JamesE82 In reply to neosoc [2012-04-20 00:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Well, I can’t say I was going for really cheesy, but yeah, this is not going to be a subtle study of man’s inhumanity to man, or a nuanced look at cultural differences between East and West. And you better not be badmouthing those great old action flicks!

As you are on the opposite end of the political spectrum from me, I’m wondering how you would get Ms. Raison out of her predicament.

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neosoc In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-20 01:23:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I'm not THAT much of a movie snob that I can't enjoy the odd cinematic ham-and-cheese sandwich

As to your second question, I'd probably inquire about ransom. Believe it or not, the Taliban commanders are typically at least ABOUT as greedy as they are fanatical, especially when it comes to captured journalists. There was this one incident where an American reporter was captured by some Islamist outfit run out of Waziristan, and the commander was more interested in trying to get as much money out of his associates as possible than in making an example of him. I'm pretty sure they didn't torture him, though.

As to my characters, though:

Hector- A phone call to that friendly Taliban commander/warlord he sold cheap Chinese assault rifles to would probably sort it out in no time.

Kurt- Admittedly, his solution might resemble Connie's, seeing as how he's a soldier. Plus, he's dealt with Islamists before

Though, you'd never catch me in Afghanistan! Believe it or not, while I view liberalism and conservatism as two sides of the same coin, I probably dislike liberalism just a bit more

Still, good intro to what looks to be a fun series of stories!

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alphazion [2012-04-18 02:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Awesomely rendered pic as always. Can't wait to see Connie deliver some hollow point justice.

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JamesE82 In reply to alphazion [2012-04-20 01:03:20 +0000 UTC]

You’re not the only one eager for Connie to get going…

Uhg, I’d rather be in another cheap Cyborg sequel than sit here another minute!

Thanks--the picture is indeed great, and I appreciate hearing that Connie’s adventures are looked forward to.

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summertime-killer [2012-04-18 00:02:29 +0000 UTC]

The Widow I can't seem to remember the last time I was captured and stripped naked by a group of Muslim extremists. Am I losing my sex appeal?

Awesome story! And if, if Miss Raison survives maybe she'll be a little more realistic next time.

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JamesE82 In reply to summertime-killer [2012-04-18 00:08:18 +0000 UTC]

It isn’t that you’re not sexy, Widow; you’re just too good at what you do to get caught. If it makes you feel any better, I would love to see you naked and tied to a--uh, I’d better stop right there…

“Awesome,” you say? You’re too kind, but as for Janet being more reasonable, you never can tell with people like her.

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summertime-killer In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-18 00:37:22 +0000 UTC]

I don't how the Widow would look in that situation. She has so many scars and stitches from fixing herself up... well, ever see No Country For Old Men? Never mind....


And yes, it is awesome. The facts prove it, too.

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JamesE82 In reply to summertime-killer [2012-04-18 00:45:21 +0000 UTC]

So you’re saying No Country for Old Men is all about hot femme fatales getting naked? *Runs to nearest Blockbuster*

And stop with the undeserved praise already!

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summertime-killer In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-18 00:49:57 +0000 UTC]

Yes! Yes, it is! And so is "Citizen Kane". You just have to keep watching them and eventually they'll get to... you know... "that part".

And I think the praise speaks for itself. You have a quite a few favs/comments/views to say the least. So, for my next project, I've enlisted a secret weapon:

Let's do this!

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JamesE82 In reply to summertime-killer [2012-04-18 00:58:02 +0000 UTC]

That Orson Wells sure knew how to pack his films with T&A, alright.

Yes, I have received a lot of favs/comments/views in quite a short amount of time, and I’m sure it has nothing to do with the fact that the story is accompanied by a picture of a buck naked Angelina Jolie look-alike in bondage.

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summertime-killer In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-18 01:09:12 +0000 UTC]

You need more Drewbacks and Gungans in your stories. That's my own personal opinion.

No, George. No he doesn't.

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JamesE82 In reply to summertime-killer [2012-04-18 01:17:23 +0000 UTC]

Take it from me: Magic retards, characters that are writers, and taking three pages to say what could be conveyed in one sentence are the keys to success!

He’s right--have you seen his book sales? They float… they aaall floooat!

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summertime-killer In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-18 01:21:19 +0000 UTC]

You are tearing me apart, Pennywise!

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JamesE82 In reply to summertime-killer [2012-04-18 01:33:08 +0000 UTC]

I don’t think James gets that reverence…
Did someone say Tommy? Tommy Jarvis? Please, let me reprise that role in the next Friday the 13th! I don’t want to do another cheap Lost Boys sequel!
Seriously, James, that was downright lame…

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summertime-killer In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-18 01:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Fear not! For I have the reference IN CONTEXT, right here! Proceed......[link]

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BelRhaza4017 [2012-04-17 23:51:00 +0000 UTC]

a very well done story, my friend, and an excellent pic to illustrate your point

Drayke (emerging from a back room and nudging Connie in the ribs after the aid worker has left the building) "So, is this the little mission that you wanted me to tag along with you on, or did you just come over to tease me, Red?"

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JamesE82 In reply to BelRhaza4017 [2012-04-17 23:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Connie: “Eek, watch the ribs!” “Uh, nah, I’ve got this one handled, but that lame-brained bimbo ain’t outta the woods yet…”

She’s right, there’s still another picture or two by the talented of Janet in the hands of the enemy to post. And seeing as how this story segment was written in a rush, I greatly appreciate the praise.

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BelRhaza4017 In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-18 01:16:45 +0000 UTC]

u r welcome, my friend, and please, drop me a note if you come up with anything to do between Connie and Drayke, cause that makes storyline number four for me to work on in the future

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Shuma-Gorath [2012-04-17 21:12:29 +0000 UTC]

This is never a Good thing but is the solution any better than the problem.

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JamesE82 In reply to Shuma-Gorath [2012-04-20 01:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Both Connie and I--and people in Janet’s situation, now that I think about it--would say that yes, the cure is better than the disease.

Thanks for dropping by and sharing your thoughts.

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Shuma-Gorath In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-21 19:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Welcomes My Friend

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Soviet-Superwoman [2012-04-17 14:34:10 +0000 UTC]

American Hero"You know the great irony is that the extreme leftist media that is throwing in with the radical Jihadists and standing against me, the great irony is that if the radical Islamic Jihadists took over, the first people they kill are the extreme leftists that have thrown in with them right now. They would not have the freedom of press to say the things that they want or disagree with the government, all of those things would go by the wayside."

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JamesE82 In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2012-04-17 23:32:55 +0000 UTC]

If you’re expecting me to disagree with Smith on this subject, you’re gonna be waiting a looong time.

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jerrie46 In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-22 17:02:49 +0000 UTC]

it would be interesting to see Connie and American Hero in some kind of story together

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JamesE82 In reply to jerrie46 [2012-04-22 17:08:03 +0000 UTC]

You mean it will be interesting…

The wheels are in motion, and thanks for dropping by.

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Soviet-Superwoman In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-17 23:34:45 +0000 UTC]

American Hero"Not at all, Connie and I have a great deal in common. Our love for this nation, life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness. She, as I, have no desire to live under Sharia law."

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deathstarshotput [2012-04-17 14:15:31 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of the celebrity human shields who went over to Iraq to "nobly" stand in front of the schools and such, only to have Saddam's forces gather around those buildings. And then those celebrities were so shocked at this "evil" act by that regime.

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JamesE82 In reply to deathstarshotput [2012-04-17 23:30:56 +0000 UTC]

Gee, it’s almost like Saddam was the bad guy in that conflict, huh?

Poor Sean Penn; remember when he flew over there to meet with his beloved dictator, but Hussein blew him off? Undaunted, the jerk found a portrait of Saddam and posed in front of it for a picture, looking like the smug, self-important prick that he is.

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Levia-the-Dragon [2012-04-17 13:52:44 +0000 UTC]

Well... she's helping, but I don't know if the rescue is the reason why...

Also, I am curious as to who put Janet in that situation and why, I'm thinking there's more to it than: "duh, terroists." The torture setup, the nudity while doing so (which I'm given to understand most fundamentalist Muslims are pretty uptight about) the fact that people (civilians?) Are apparently close enough to hear her and do nothing either way implies to me that this may be more a trap than a "get off our land!" chop off someone's head to prove you're serious gambit.

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JamesE82 In reply to Levia-the-Dragon [2012-04-20 01:19:28 +0000 UTC]

The Crimson Conservative, do something for her own gain? *Whistles innocently.*

Westerners often find themselves being rewarded by the savages they are trying to help with suffering and death, so I don’t believe there has to be something more to what put Ms. Raison into her unfortunate situation. When it comes to Muslims and nudity, off the top of my head I recall that the 9/11 hijackers visited strip clubs, and imagine that the women kept in the rape rooms of the Saddam regime were not exactly fully clothed. And it’s hard to pin a woman down and do a “virginity check” without exposing some skin, and Muslims did not find reporter Lara Logan’s nudity troubling after they tore her clothes off and shoved their hands inside her. Then there is the fun fact that women being sentenced to rape for the crimes of their family is a common practice in Islamic countries, too…

As for common Afghanis not helping, well, who is the rare decent one going to go to? A tribal elder who probably authorized the abduction? The police (assuming there are any in the area) who knew about the attack beforehand and were bribed to do nothing? The opium kingpins in charge of the country?

(Sorry for the TL;DR! )

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MetalBeowulf89 [2012-04-17 08:17:42 +0000 UTC]

This is why most of us have more sense than just to waltz uninvited to a tiger's lair.. The end result is that the fool who does so will more than likely be devoured!

Eat those who say Islam is violent! Rawr!

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JamesE82 In reply to MetalBeowulf89 [2012-04-17 23:26:43 +0000 UTC]

What do I think about devouring bleeding-hearts? They’rrrre great!

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andrewr255 [2012-04-17 07:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Mrs. Brad Pitt didn't expect this when she went there to adopt again.

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JamesE82 In reply to andrewr255 [2012-04-17 07:18:32 +0000 UTC]

I know that kids can be a pain in the ass, but this is ridiculous!

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andrewr255 In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-17 17:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Why are you all looking at me, all I said to them was hurt her just a little...

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JamesE82 In reply to andrewr255 [2012-04-18 00:31:13 +0000 UTC]

Who is this impostor? Ignore her! Give it to that homewrecker, boys!

This time you’ve got the one-up on me in the plz department--they didn’t have an Aniston the last time I looked.

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andrewr255 In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-18 16:38:32 +0000 UTC]

RachelGreenplz??? Who could have found that?

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JamesE82 In reply to andrewr255 [2012-04-18 16:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Didn’t I tell you a while ago that the secret to my plz success is a total lack of a life?

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andrewr255 In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-18 16:53:33 +0000 UTC]

I don't think so but I was starting to form that opinion on my own. (ok that one demanded a double wink wink joke joke.)

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JamesE82 In reply to andrewr255 [2012-04-18 17:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Connie:

Hey! She needs to remember that I haven’t written the rest of this story yet, and I could easily put her in Janet’s position…

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burt86 [2012-04-17 05:58:44 +0000 UTC]

Nice story and nice girl

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JamesE82 In reply to burt86 [2012-04-17 06:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, you like the picture? I can’t imagine why…

Thank you for complementing my little scene to go with your awesome render, and thanks again for letting me post it. As you can probably guess based on the other pictures you did of her, things are going to get worse for the poor captive before they get better…

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burt86 In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-17 06:09:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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Knight3000 [2012-04-17 05:57:06 +0000 UTC]

Looks like Boobs and Bullets time for Connie!
A rescue mission for some bleedhearted agency
a cakewalk for Connie! Blow the hell out a shiite compound and get little Janet out!

*Connie when you get Janet out try NOT to swat her butt! *whispers* But then again do it anyway!
Some Jack and a massage is waitin for ya when you`re done!

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JamesE82 In reply to Knight3000 [2012-04-17 06:05:08 +0000 UTC]

I agree that empty-headed do-gooders like Janet deserve to have their posteriors reddened for putting themselves in horribly dangerous situations, all in hopes of helping people who hate them and their country.

Thanks for dropping by!

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Knight3000 In reply to JamesE82 [2012-04-17 06:13:48 +0000 UTC]

I`ll bet Janet will actually COMPLAIN to Connie that she blew the place to smithereens! Then Connie will HAVE to put her boot in her ass!

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