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Published: 2009-07-24 14:13:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 64081; Favourites: 958; Downloads: 0
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Jasmine and Rajah from Disney's Aladdin ^-^ hope you likeOMG!! A BACKGROUND!!!!!
characters (c) Disney
Drawing (c) Jaq (me XD)
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The light is actually coming from the front right some of it is a little off I know but I did not want any shading in it, I was making it look like it came out of the movie in my style 
no worries no harsh words really.
thank you so much for your crit! its very helpful!!!
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ah, so that's where it is coming from....
I see now... it's okay that you didn't put any shading/shadows in, but I do think a little more would help... at least my biggest issue is the shadow that she is casting... I say that is quite important because when I look at the bottom part, I feel like the bench is floating...
but enough of me beating the dead horse...
thanks for lettimg me critique this <3 and thanks for taking my words with a grain of salt!
I'm glad I was able to help you too! After all, that's what the point of a critique is... as I see it anyways... so that you (or I, or whoever) can become a better artist.
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Alright, this is the first one for me. Here we go.
I think you did very well on her face, hands, and feet. Her whole body is very well done, clothing is good, but I am slightly confused as to what she is wearing. The lamp looks a little flast and he looks sorta off. His face seems a little off and the nose too flat for the angel he is supposed to be at judging by his ear.
The bench needs a little clean up, and it looks like her dress is stuck under the bench? Is that on purpose?
Back to the lamp, it looks really small. In Aladdin's hand it filled it so compared to Jasmin's hand it should look really big.
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what confuses you about her clothing? It's a long dress based off her normal outfit, but without the pants, instead I showed her legs with a sexy see though version of her pants, kind of like negligee.
lol do you mean flat, the lamp looks flat? yeah there is only so much you can do with flat colors. I should have put a small shine one it like I did the jewels but I would have to do that with the whole picture, that was not the style I was going for.
Rajah looks a little off? lol
no, actually thanks for pointing that out, the bench part, its actually a layer problem. Just have to reverse the layers ^-^
wooooo yeah for firsts! Oh, and one thing about Critiques, there is thing to it, you have to point out the flaws without sounding mean. hahahahahaha at least as best as you can, some people don't know how to take them. and also try going into more detail, just saying "I don't understand" is not something you should say, unless you explain why you don't understand. OH! and try having a different part in each paragraph, like lamp in one part, Rajah in another, than you can add a nice thing in each part. BUT of course it is hard to sound nice like in my first paragraph I sound mean, even though I am more sincere
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Alright, I apologize for sounding mean, and confusing you.
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hhahahahaah its all good, since you said this was your first time doing a crit on here, I gave you some advise that I have gone though here on DA ^-^
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most people draw the face mediocre, but I think this is beyond beautiful
the face expression really brings out her fun and flirtiness 
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I love this
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hahaha! that's what I was going for!
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I love how she is scratching rajah's ears with the lamp...lol.....I take it this takes place after the movie or the genie would be here as well
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yeah think of it as Aladdin looking at her haha
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really good!!!
you could've increased her boobs a bit, but thats the only minor i guess
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First off, kudos to you for drawing one of my all time favorite princesses (lol, she's tied with Aurora and Tiana). And yayness for the new outfit! 
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the see through part of her dress is a little confusing and I think Rajahs nose is a little off, but I love the pic :] and Hooray for bg's we all know how hard they can be!
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Hey, Jaq! This is good, but her feet are a bit small. Otherwise, I love it!
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did you ever look at jasmines feet? these are huge! lol
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