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Published: 2018-02-24 04:11:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 7810; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 0
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So Riku's so sick, that he can't remember what happened last night.ITS A BANANA!
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JaredSteeleType In reply to Tosonic10 [2018-02-25 05:56:07 +0000 UTC]
Spoiler alert: It was all a dream. mwahaha
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Tosonic10 In reply to JaredSteeleType [2018-02-26 00:13:03 +0000 UTC]
awwww what...cute dream sad hes sick in it
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JaredSteeleType In reply to theswordking69 [2018-02-24 22:42:46 +0000 UTC]
Foxy must stay, hopefully qwq
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theswordking69 In reply to JaredSteeleType [2018-02-25 02:53:33 +0000 UTC]
foxy...the name of my first dog D=
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JaredSteeleType In reply to ShadowtheCartoonist [2018-02-24 22:41:24 +0000 UTC]
Time to get dat belt. =w=
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JasonMasters [2018-02-24 05:34:51 +0000 UTC]
Fun Fact: Being cold or wet doesn't give you a "cold".
But of course, we often need to ignore reality if we want a fun story. And this is a fun story so far.
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JaredSteeleType In reply to JasonMasters [2018-02-24 06:05:56 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, i accidently put cold there. My mistake. =w=;;
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JasonMasters In reply to JaredSteeleType [2018-02-24 06:39:55 +0000 UTC]
"Fever" works, but you should change "caught" to "got" because you don't "catch" a fever (you "catch" an illness which can give you a fever). "Got" is less specific and so is more appropriate.
Sorry about nit-picking, but I love these little tales and want to help make them "perfect".
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