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Published: 2012-01-21 04:53:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 685; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 10
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Amira is considering a second visit to Lliria's cave. That might not really be a good idea, to be honest.Unfortunately, Lliria may not be the only dangerous thing in this forest.
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Hey, I drew a new Lliria comic! And in a different style than before! Opinions?
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This is very true.
People who go into the jungle, worry about tigers and get eaten by leopards
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Nice. Great compositions, wonderful rule of thirds. You have a knack for anticipation.
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Thanks! I just tried to make it look nice -- I don't have any in-depth knowledge of rules of composition. (I am vaguely aware of the rule of thirds, however, so I probably did that subconsciously.)
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Nice perspective! Using texture without shading is a risky proposition, though, as it tends to flatten things out. I would try some basic shading first, then overlay the textures even more faintly.
YUS! I was hoping Lliria's story would be continuous! 
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Thanks! I'm kind of experimenting with different methods and seeing how they look. I want to actually be more devoted to a comic, but a big part of that is time. I don't have a lot of it, and if I'm going to draw a comic regularly, I need to be be able to gauge how long it will take me to do a page. I agree, though: the textures without shading do look a little flat.
I'm glad you're excited! I had always planned for the story to be at least semi-continuous. I also originally had ideas for reader-participation content, if anyone is interested.
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Oooh, interesting. And I definitely understand experimentation; I do it a lot too. Either way, you learn something!
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Wow! I am so impressed, baby! This shows how much you are growing as an artist because it looks almost nothing like the original comics, it is 100% better! I absolutely love the new style.
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Thank you, baby. I'm glad you feel like I've improved. I think I definitely agree with you on this one. ^_^
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