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Jeeaark — ER R4 ROG-004 pg. 3
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And then everything got purple
Major A is not a big fan of any kind of prison. They're just as bad for pokemon as they are for humans.
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Thiiis, yes this oh my goodness. This whole round and the way you handled Majora in it, just perfect. It was really about her the whole time, in a way. Despite her taking a bit of a back seat in everything, and the shots and actions focusing more on Miguel and Tate. In the end, it was all about her...
The panel where she says 'prison' and it melts into black.. her eye in that panel. Guaah I love it, that whole scene however brief, is just.. fantastic. She's really tortured by it, she's traumatized. She's broken.. *V
And we get a glimpse of it in that panel of the chamber there, it's like seeing inside her mind.... V*
The dynamic between her, Miguel and Tate is really good too. Seeing him stick up for Miguel there is so nice... ;o; And keeping such a close guard against her ahah :,D I love how even with how little he trusts her they could still have such good team work.. for a while.... <:,D It really is interesting though, it certainly said a whole lot about the both of them...
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oh man, it really is about the moon isn't it? :'D She's just so much more interesting though ;a; I can't stop her story from taking over, haaaa. Miguel, you had your chance, man, you had your chance. Majora is now the main character, yes yes. u3u
You are seeing the inside of her mind ra, its messed up in there *V Needs some spring cleaning in there. Miguel don't like going in there that's for sure.
Tot was Miguel's only defense from Majora's pyschic talks too, now he has to deal with her on his own, gotta build up them mind defenses somehow now, yeah >8V Tot and the moon woulda made the bestest teamwork ever later on if he didn't go and die on us >8'U Had so many plans and everything hnnnng *sobs*
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It is it is...~
Majora and Miguel can be co-main characters~ Because Majora will certainly have a monotonous and boring story without Miguel and all those that he brings along with him into this story XD
And I like this... *U Yes Majora, show us more of your tortured soul via Miguel. And Miguel, learn to empathize rather than being a bitch and telling her to go away I8< I'm all fired up on bad attitude and peanut butter jelly sandwiches tonight can you tell *<*!
Miguel you must carry on Tate's torch! Don't build up defenses, instead let her in and give her the shoulder she needs to cry on u.u STOP BEING SELF-CENTERED AND IGNORANT MIGUEL. IGNORANT TO EVERYOOOOONE
Miguel and the moon will now make the bestest teamwork I8<
Take this as a lesson Jee, don't deprive your story of valuable points via unnecessary shock value~ Tate's death better be long-felt and crucial to your final chapters to make up for all the awesome you're missing out on now!
And hang on to those ideas! Because they can find a way~
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Major A you don't lose any of your creepiness I see. :T
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The creepy moon has a reputation to keep, heehee~ XD
Its like a hobby of hers now :'D
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Very nice touch on the darkness about the prison part. Very dark
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