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Jesseth — ::Altamara Panels Practice::
Published: 2011-02-24 08:55:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1742; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 7
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Practice with comic panels and getting a style down for comics/manga.This took FAR TOO LONG to do.
Don't try to understand what's going on here or with the writing, I pretty much made it up as I was going along. Also my handwriting is bullshit. :'\
Still, pretty happy with how everyone came out here, character-wise<3
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Pointless trivia:
Raimaru has funny looking text because that's how I depict English spoken with a heavy Altamaran accent. there is absolutely no reason why they would be speaking English to one another, or why Raimaru would be the only one with an accent.
I'm in love with Zeni and his freckles. so fun to colour. ngghhhk<3
Fleet admiral Tsubasa would rather shoot himself in the face than leave the Emperor unguarded, but he also can't disobey his orders. Cue brain meltdown.
Fleet admiral Militia went to military school with the Emperor and Empress when they were young. She gets away with calling them cute nicknames sometimes. (Emperor Sakuharu= Haruka)
The Altamaran Empress is the woman driving the flagship.
Now I sleep.
Characters and Altamaran species © me.
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Comments: 23
And actually, this does seem like sound strategy! Cover the allied ship, and while the enemy focuses on the flagship have the fleet ready to pounce on 'em.
It would work, so long as it wasn't done to the enemy before!
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Fyubi look like one of the navigators from Megaman Zero 2... I think you need to practice drawing women... but it is good that you are at least planning your manga XD haha you don't wanna leave it too long or it won't get done
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Wow, this looks great! The anatomy looks great on everyone, and I always envy your hand drawing skills.
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Valkyrie Reference! 
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I was waiting to see if you spotted that
goodness only knows what's going on though~
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Dah I suck. lol But I noticed right away!
And for ref, the Valkyrie would pry be a distraction, too.
*During battle*
Captain: "Status of the Dirga!"
XO: "They are targeting the Altmaran Flagship, she's all alone!"
Cptn: "Weapons?!"
XO: "Exhausted sir, they need reloading, five are gone, the rest damaged or reloading!"
Cptn: "Well, lets give them a show! Crazy Jane! Point us right at the damn Dirga command ship!!!"
XO: "Captain?!"
Cptn: *grinning* "We'll give them a reason not to ignore our Valkyrie... let's show them how the war gods do things..." -Larger grin-
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Appropriate music just started playing... O_o
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Y'know something, I think it does take a long time to do it really well. Looks so good though! Better find a script you like! Alannah says 'guh' me next.
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yeah, and real manga artists have assistants at their beck and call...
but yeah, I need to start script writing~ and don't worry, Alannah will get her turn! XD
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Wow, each panel is done so amazingly! I like the characters, and you have really good hand wrighting.
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Oooo Something dramaticus is happening!!!!!!!! woot woot!!
I think that having four arms is good for driving.
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dramaticus!!!!! XD
yeah, I guess it would make driving easier! multitasking and all... not to mention everyday things like carrying stuff.. wish I had extra hands sometimes XD
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Right??? Although, Id be cool with one arm if i could drive again! I miss my car!!! Stupid Uni.
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you don't have your car anymore? aw no! why? :<
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I was technically using mah daddy's car. xD and now I live like, 25 hours away from him. xD
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I'm sorry I haven't commented much lately. I've been in the midst of moving profiles~
But omg, this is awesome D:
I love the way you split up the images, and your style here looks great for a manga! Might've taken you a while to finish but the final product looks exceptional ;D
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this just makes me dream even more for the day when you do full comics >w<
you did a wonderful job with each character, least you got that talent down =3
and I really like the text being hand drawn, but for some reason at times I had trouble reading a word, maybe cause it's to the fact I just woke up -shrug- or Im just distracted by the pretty pictures <3 fweeeep.
and hopefully with more time doing comics like this it'll go faster? XD
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one day I will, and it will be awesome 8D... hopefully XD
and ahaha! the reason you're having trouble with the words is because my handwriting is godawful. There need be no excuses for it's degrees of awfulness.
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