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Someone behind Alanna grabbed her. She spun. A tall, gangling boy of nearly fourteen looked her over, a sneer on his thick mouth. He had cold blue eyes and sandy-blond hair that flopped over his forehead."I wonder what this is." His crooked teeth made him spit his s's. Alanna wiped a drop of saliva from her cheek. "Probably some back-country boy who THINKS he's a noble."
"Leave him alone, Ralon," someone protested. "He didn't say anything to you."
"He doesn't have to," Ralon snapped. "I bet he's some farmer's son trying to pass for one of us."
Alanna blushed a dull red. "I was told pages were SUPPOSED to learn manners," she murmured. "Whoever told me that must've been mistaken."
The boy grabbed her collar, lifting her off her feet. "You'll do what you're told," he hissed, "till you earn the right to call yourself a page. If I say you're the goatherd's son, YOU say, 'Yes, Lord Ralon.'"
Alanna gasped with fury. "I'd as soon kiss a pig! Is that what YOU'VE been doing--kissing pigs? Or BEING kissed?"
Ralon threw her against the wall, hard.
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From Alanna: The First Adventure, written by Tamora Pierce.
10yr old Alanna makes her first enemy as she, dressed as a boy, starts her training as a page. (To become a knight)
Hehe another Alanna Illustration.
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Comments: 105
jessijoke In reply to ??? [2011-09-10 16:57:32 +0000 UTC]
I love that Alanna overcame her Bully It was why I loved this part so much.
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biggestmunkfan In reply to jessijoke [2011-09-11 04:54:11 +0000 UTC]
Yep.Does Alanna ever reveal she is a girl in the story?Wait!Don't tell me I will just get it ruined!Don't tell Me!!!
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jessijoke In reply to biggestmunkfan [2011-09-11 06:53:41 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, I was going to say "I couldn't possibly tell you! You'll have to read all four books and find out!"
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biggestmunkfan In reply to jessijoke [2011-09-11 06:55:58 +0000 UTC]
Good...Wait,all four to find out if she reveals she is a girl?!But,the book belongs to my school!!I need to go to a Borders.
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jessijoke In reply to biggestmunkfan [2011-09-11 07:57:04 +0000 UTC]
I said all four so you wouldn't know if she does, and if she does, which book it's in
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StarRanger [2009-01-08 06:38:48 +0000 UTC]
Good job! I like this scene because Alanna that she is not one to pushed around, bullied or worked walked over. Two words about Alanna, "Don't mess". Presents medal.
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jessijoke In reply to StarRanger [2009-01-08 17:50:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks LOL
*nods* Hardcore Alanna! I wanted her to beat him up right there so badly *sigh*
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idot-hp [2008-12-27 02:35:37 +0000 UTC]
I am a TAMORA PEIRCE NUT!!!! I have read ALL of her AMAZING books!
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Hermione162 [2008-11-30 23:43:50 +0000 UTC]
I love that seires. You made Alanna look so bloody cool
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mysticwolf2314 [2008-02-09 00:20:43 +0000 UTC]
And, coincidentally my friend has all the Tamora Peirce books. I'm gonna read the 4th Alanna when I get back to school from being sick.
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jessijoke In reply to mysticwolf2314 [2008-02-09 01:34:54 +0000 UTC]
All of her books are AMAZING. You will love it ^^
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mysticwolf2314 [2008-02-09 00:19:10 +0000 UTC]
Ralon was a jerk-face. Like Duke Roger......stupid Thom....*grumble grumble*
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jessijoke In reply to mysticwolf2314 [2008-02-09 00:20:18 +0000 UTC]
I couldn't believe Thom brought Roger of all people back to life. He couldn't have tried for his mother at least!?
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mysticwolf2314 In reply to jessijoke [2008-02-09 00:22:51 +0000 UTC]
I know! I don't know why he didn't. DX Kinda dumb though. "Let's bring back my sister's enemy. Even though she's been there for me for a long, long time and she made it possible for me to be a sorcerer!"
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jessijoke In reply to mysticwolf2314 [2008-02-09 01:34:36 +0000 UTC]
I think Thom was just as hot tempered as Alanna who thought, "I'm mad at Liam, so I think I'll go take a nice long stroll in a blizzard just to tick him off... "
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mysticwolf2314 In reply to jessijoke [2008-02-09 02:57:24 +0000 UTC]
But bringing back Roger....
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BishiHunter [2008-02-05 03:01:08 +0000 UTC]
KICK 'IM IN THE BALLS!
. . . sorry. I just re-read that part of the book. I feel like an idiot now.
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jessijoke In reply to BishiHunter [2008-02-05 04:34:57 +0000 UTC]
HAH! She totally should have that son of a duck >>
He was such a jerk!
Dude now I totally want to reread that part ^^
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BishiHunter In reply to jessijoke [2008-02-05 13:21:25 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I then went and bought all the other books . . . so much money . . . but the covers were so pretty . . . DX
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jessijoke In reply to BishiHunter [2008-02-06 01:38:08 +0000 UTC]
I have all of Tamora Pierce's books. I am broke, and happy.
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AestheticDevil [2007-09-21 17:11:05 +0000 UTC]
You've got the expressions spot on! And Ralon's lips. ^_^
I would have figured him to be taller though, to be more imposing and because he is a older boy.
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jessijoke In reply to AestheticDevil [2007-09-22 03:28:28 +0000 UTC]
Well I thought about that... but I figured he needed a reason to be mean, he is picking on the little kids because he can't pick on the older kids, But his design isn't finished, I just kinda slapped him together for the picture xD
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AestheticDevil In reply to jessijoke [2007-09-24 11:41:54 +0000 UTC]
That's a very good point actually!
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jessijoke In reply to AestheticDevil [2007-09-25 01:30:43 +0000 UTC]
Course it is, I thought of it. *humble*
LOL
I rather thought being short suited him, because I couldn't imagine a strong imposing figure, who wore his scars proudly, taking on George in the end. I always imagined a cowardly short man, fairly muscular, but not body builder, who wears his scars like a curse. A disgraced noble *thinks* They don't often stand tall... feels like he is not getting his dues... Probably walks with his nose in the air.. LOL Ok now I'm rambling, honestly, I'm taking note for character design of him, not rambling!
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AestheticDevil In reply to jessijoke [2007-09-25 07:41:15 +0000 UTC]
I agree with you, Ralon shouldn't be a tall man.
Though I still think that he should at least be as tall as Alanna when they first meet (I think it's said somewhere that he is larger and stronger than her) because here they look the same age.
You've pintpointed a lot of his character, and I'm looking forward to see you developing it!
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jessijoke In reply to AestheticDevil [2007-09-25 12:32:05 +0000 UTC]
Hmm I'm not sure about that, I'll have to reread, I just thought they said he had been in training longer, and he was older, so I think he'd be muscular but stupid and small.. But I'll reread the intro to Ralon, and see if he needs to be bigger than Alanna Thanks for mentioning it...
But Ima still keep him shorter than the others ^^ .. than again, Alanna is short anyway, mebbe that is why Ralon targets her in specific, cause she is the only one smaller than him.
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AestheticDevil In reply to jessijoke [2007-09-25 13:05:13 +0000 UTC]
That would make a lot of sense actually. If he is the smallest of his year, then he'd go for anyone small enough not to be able to fight back properly.
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jessijoke In reply to AestheticDevil [2007-09-27 04:49:09 +0000 UTC]
*thinks* but than he would go for just any smaller kid, I think he was the smallest other than Alanna Which was why she the was the only one bullied by him.
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AestheticDevil In reply to jessijoke [2007-09-27 18:42:22 +0000 UTC]
"Someone behind Alanna grabbed her. She spun. A tall, gangling boy of nearly fourteen looked her over, a sneer on his thick mouth. He had cold blue eyes and sandy-blond hair that flopped over his forehead."
I should have read the description properly...
He is after all described as a 'tall' gangling boy.
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jessijoke In reply to AestheticDevil [2007-09-27 22:18:15 +0000 UTC]
Believe it or not, I read that and only noted cold blue eyes and sandy blond hair that flopped over his forehead XD
I should have noted tall... but he seems short in the book XD I just can't imagine him towering over George...
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AestheticDevil In reply to jessijoke [2007-09-28 08:34:03 +0000 UTC]
Neither can I, but then again Alanna would probably think of everyone as taller than her....
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jessijoke In reply to AestheticDevil [2007-09-28 17:09:03 +0000 UTC]
LOL Everybody is taller than Alanna, next in Shortness, according to Hands of the Goddess, where they say Alex is short to. Funny the two shortest are the best with swords
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AestheticDevil In reply to jessijoke [2007-09-30 14:22:57 +0000 UTC]
Of course, they have to be or everyone will just sit on them! ^_^
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jessijoke In reply to AestheticDevil [2007-10-01 00:26:41 +0000 UTC]
LOLOL, I just loved that Alanna didn't start off as a good swordswoman, it took lots of hard work
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AestheticDevil In reply to jessijoke [2007-10-01 07:35:00 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, clever little fox that girl. Sneaking off at night with a heavy sword.
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AestheticDevil In reply to jessijoke [2007-09-27 10:08:52 +0000 UTC]
Do you think she really was the only one bullied by him? Or was she the only one that put up enough of a fight to make it show? Remember the codex ^^
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jessijoke In reply to AestheticDevil [2007-09-27 16:26:40 +0000 UTC]
Mmmm I think she was really the only one bullied by him, even considering the code, I don't think others being bullied by him would go unnoticed, remember Joren and his Cronies in Defender of the Small?
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AestheticDevil In reply to jessijoke [2007-09-27 18:38:05 +0000 UTC]
Nope, haven't read Defender of the small. And only reason why I react to the name Numar is because I've stalked the fandom for a while. ^^
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jessijoke In reply to AestheticDevil [2007-09-28 01:56:05 +0000 UTC]
Numair
Protector of the Small is pretty good, maybe a little less magic, but no less awesome
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sunflower-2020 [2007-05-12 02:59:32 +0000 UTC]
i have all the tortall books they need to make a movie that would be so COOL a REALLY REALLY good job on this you did it perfectly!!!! you rock^_^
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jessijoke In reply to sunflower-2020 [2007-05-12 05:45:58 +0000 UTC]
I agree! SOMEBODY NEEDS!!! To make a movie xD I am missing 3 books about Kel, but I have most of Tamora Pierce's books.
I have *thinks* from Alanna to Beka of Tamora Pierce... But Missing three Kel books.
Than I have... 4 of the Circle Series.. I need the newest circle book, and the first 4 xD I have the middle four.. LOL I got a good deal on um... xD
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