castaway [2002-07-06 21:37:44 +0000 UTC]

hmmm...so simple, yet so beautiful. To choose lines that I particularly liked would probably be pretty pointless, as it is a very short poem. However, I love the simplicity of it, and the wonderfully vivid imagery.
Well done.
I hope that you get writing and posting again.
I just started again after several people inspired me to begin writing again. I look forward to more work from you.

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greumach [2002-07-02 03:31:52 +0000 UTC]

This is beautifully written and very moving . Very much been there with the sexes mirror imaged . Always nice to read good poetry . All the Best

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kgcreative [2002-05-21 15:54:55 +0000 UTC]

:smile:

beautiful words jess.
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Curiosity was framed.
Ignorance killed the cat.

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spunj13 [2002-05-21 07:27:08 +0000 UTC]

what a beautiful poem... so much hope wrapped up in it...

//spunj13

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verbalize [2002-05-19 21:55:15 +0000 UTC]

nice to see you back and being deviant this is a very emotionally happy poem I'm glad
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where are my meds !!

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eklipzed [2002-05-19 18:25:01 +0000 UTC]

absolutely gorgeous, he sohuld be flattered that he could do something as powerful as that... whilst what might have been is a curse, what could be is a blessing.
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archergirl2000 [2002-05-19 17:31:43 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful words They seem to be describing a fairy tale where the happy ending hangs in the balance of one glance...

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jade [2002-05-19 15:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Nice image for the background. Like the font although it seems a bit fuzzy on my screen. But that may be cause I'm still in LA using my brother's computer. His monitor isn't like mine.

Like the words. Like the feeling that comes through and the thoughts it makes you think about.
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spaded-n-jaded [2002-05-19 10:47:43 +0000 UTC]

I like this, quite good jess, wish you would go and visit my DA once again and comment on a couple of my stuff... I know it ain't as good as your's, but it's still worth the while you are there

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who is the one who has blood in there alcohol system officer, I just had a few cars, and now I just want to drive my beer... *hic*

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