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JessIsFinallyDeviant — Blue
Published: 2014-08-11 09:47:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 921; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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Blue the waves and blue's the tide,Blue's the world and small and wide,
Blue the tears that I have cried:
Thoughts crossing my mind.
I am dreaming seas of blue,
Blue are all my déjà-vus.
I am wondering just who
Doesn't dream in blue?
Many thoughts crossing my mind,
Tears in blue that I have cried,
Blue's the world and small and wide:
Reaching waves and tide.
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Comments: 31
I love the almost symmetrical, chiastic shape and structure of the lines, words, themes and end rhyming of this poem. I haven't used this kind of technique but I like it in your poem. I like many things about the poem and well done for winning. \(^‿^)/♡
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Ƴσʋ'ɾɘ ധɘℓɔσനɘ! \(^‿^)/♡
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I'm so glad you like it
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Thank you so much,I'm happy you think so
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Good poem ! Immediately caught my eye .Good structure and rhythm , and communicates your ideas well .When I dream in colour , blue is a primary colour within my dreams especially if water is involved .Top stuff !
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Thank you so much,I'm so glad you like it
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You're most welcome
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Thank you so much I'm glad you think so
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nice work there is a lot of words in this today.
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That's lovely, blue is my favorite color and it makes me content and comfortable to see or have blue things around me
All the best!
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Thank you 
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I see what you did there - this is a chiasum!
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Yeah that's right 
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This has a lovely metre and stunning repetition I had to read it twice.
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Thank you for your words,it means a lot to me
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