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Published: 2018-01-20 17:57:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 0
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So what if we areA failed experiment
Who’s supposed to end?
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I am a failed experiment of our relationship
Each word is spread out According to test tubes
Again, with his domineering hand,
You mix a "new me" -
with the experience you experienced
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There’s nothing better ,
In this rotten, broken world
Than your memories .
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...and never hot , as a big philosopher of our times might add lol . jokes aside, that’s actually true in some cases, we have caused enough destruction to deserve that name . Thanks for the comment, it’s always appreciated !
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Thank you very much !
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"Failed" from which angle of view, ours or their?
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Hm, that’s a good question! When i was writing it I thought about ‘failed’ from their point of view, but I guess it’s interpretable.
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"Failed" from their point of view it's the meaning I prefer more on this.
If it was "failed" for you it would still be good as it's short and direct, I like this.
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Thanks a lot again for the interest and feedback, it’s greatly appreciated and helpful
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