HOME | DD
Published: 2011-08-02 00:33:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 783; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 7
Redirect to original
Description
Police tape flutters in the wind. I look up at the office block. It's been abandoned for the past week, since they found everyone on the fourth floor dead. Throats slit, blood spattered across every surface. Police had no suspects, forensics had no clues, the coroner determined that everyone had died simultaneously. 34 people, slain where they stood, before they even knew they were in danger.The dark blue crystal I wear around my neck glints, and I search through my ancestors' memories for useful information. I remember a similar incident, and watch the investigation through my Grandfather's eyes. Pale, spindly creatures swarm around me/him, and we draw his longblade, naked steel but for the alchemical sigils carved down its fuller. It was a frenzied battle, and the rest of the memory is frantic slashes and terrible screeching.
'Harvesters,' grumbles my Grandfather, clouds of light stirring within my necklace as he speaks. 'You'd know that if you studied the bestiary I compiled.'
I enter the glass doors and climb the stairs. I don't trust elevators anymore, not since a gremlin trapped me in one and almost dropped me fourteen floors. Rookie mistake. The city spreads out below the stairwell. The twinkling lights look pretty, but it's hard to enjoy the view when you know the city is malignant, infected with unholy demon larvae. On one hand, the mage-sight is a curse, binding you to a life that no sane person would ever choose. On the other, now that I possess it, I could never give it up for fear of the invisible horrors that surround us.
It's in our blood. The first thing my Great-Grandmother asked me was 'Have you sired an heir?' And rightly so, it's a dangerous job. My eldest son will find out when I die and he comes of age. I only hope he doesn't hate me when he wears me around his neck.
The sight is like a torch. It reveals unseen things, but it also reveals you. It's a beacon to creatures of the dark places, and this is why we with 'the gift' have no choice but to leave our families and fight. We live in isolation. It's easy to save people when you have nothing to lose.
Floor 4. I emerge into an open plan office and hit the lightswitch. The ceiling squares spark one by one, plink plink plink. Desks stand in a grid. Sterile. This is still a crime scene, but all the blood is gone. I don't know if that's procedure or not. It doesn't seem likely.
I hear a ragged, inhaling shriek that carries on for far longer than human lungs could withstand.
'Keep calm and draw from experience,' says my Grandfather. I replay his encounter with the thin white monsters again. The memory is tinted blue and faceted like the necklace jewel.
'You should have made preparations,' scolds my Great-Grandmother. 'You do not take this seriously enough.' She'd been nagging me for a long time now about this, but frankly carrying around a belt of alchemical solutions and filling my pockets with holy artefacts was a pain in the neck. It's not a fighting style that I find intuitive.
My Grandfather however, was a master swordsman. He left me his argent longsword, and I dedicated myself to learning the art of swordplay, before it was unmade in a particularly harrowing encounter with an entropy spirit. No other blade ever felt quite the same.
These days, I have a more hands-on approach. I think Dad would approve, but he's being characteristically silent. Still, I know he's watching.
The creatures crawl out of the woodwork, just as my Grandfather remembered them, but stained with blood, smeared around their mouths and painting their long talons and grasping avian hands. Their veins stand out like wires, a red so dark it's almost black. They have tiny black eyes on the sides of their bulbous white heads, but their large slitted nostrils flare and they all tilt their heads towards me.
'They're fast,' advises Grandfather. 'try to stay out of reach if you can. You really ought to invest in a new weapon of your own.'
'He's not wrong. In the meantime, use your environment. Demons can no more survive a sixty foot fall than anyone else,' offered Great-Grandma.
I make a swift gesture, tracing the sigil of agility and reflex in the air, and then dart to my closest opponent. I pummel it with my fists, and its skull is crushed by the time I spin around to meet another. I block it's wild swipe with an Aegis block, a technique I learnt from my Great-Grandmother. The first two fingers extended from my fist, a faint shimmering buckler appears on the back of my hand for a fraction of a second, saving me from those fierce, vicious claws.
'Good form,' she says, approvingly.
I throw my attacker through the window into the night, and listen to it howl before its abrupt end. I punch another harvester and cave its face in. My fist is tattooed with the arcane symbol of purity and strength. It's like a Magnum. Two more charge me down, screaming. I hit one with my palm (and the rune of justice thereupon), and break the other one's jaw with a plain old elbow.
'Watch out!' shouts a gruff voice.
I roll sideways just in time to avoid a leaping demon.
'Thanks Dad,' I say breathlessly as I plant my foot in the monster's ribs.
They're all around me now, I can barely keep up with their attacks to block them. I conjure a circle barrier around myself to give myself some time to breathe.
More hellspawn crawl out of the shadows. This is a hive. I don't know how I'm going to get out of here.
'You'll be fine son, just remember what we've taught you. You're worth one thousand of these bastards.'
I wreath my hands in sacred fire, kindling it with my breath. I can do this.
Related content
Comments: 21
joe-wright In reply to kitiaramajere [2011-10-18 17:01:49 +0000 UTC]
It's based on a piece by distortified, so there kind of is more of it... I know what you mean though, I like the character and the world here, if it actually belonged to me I'd probably have done more already
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
kitiaramajere In reply to joe-wright [2011-10-18 17:23:28 +0000 UTC]
Yup, I went and read that one too.
A collaboration? Sounds like the perfect setting for a Thieves World type deal, or the original Wild Cards series by Martin.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
joe-wright In reply to kitiaramajere [2011-10-18 21:27:20 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps, but right now the only really unique thing about the setting is this one guy's situation, and even then it skews a little close to Devil May Cry and stuff right now. Still, it has potential!
I'd never heard of Wild Cards before but I just looked it up and it sounds awesome!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
kitiaramajere In reply to joe-wright [2011-10-19 03:54:51 +0000 UTC]
It was pretty damned cool. I think it started getting bogged down as the book numbers got into the teens, but the first ones especially were quite good.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
inksoaked [2011-08-02 16:47:01 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely fantastic!! I love the noir feeling and it's a fantastic follow up to the story.
I swear, you've done nothing but improve all month!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
joe-wright In reply to inksoaked [2011-08-02 22:23:09 +0000 UTC]
Aw thank you! I was afraid I sucked a little of the depth out of the character, but I'm glad you both like it!
I'm really happy that you think I've improved too, that means a lot!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
inksoaked In reply to joe-wright [2011-08-04 16:52:49 +0000 UTC]
Not at all, it was very well done.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
distortified [2011-08-02 15:59:56 +0000 UTC]
Duuuuude. So wicked. I really love the way that you expanded upon this, and the way that the ancestors nag at him. The way that you handle the magic system is awesome, and a whooole lot of fun to visualize. Lord, I need an animator. XD
Out of curiosity, does the term Harvester come from a different mythology? I'm not sure if you've seen, but that's the name of a group of entities that make up a big part of my fiction.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
joe-wright In reply to distortified [2011-08-02 16:05:39 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I pictured the magic as a kind of martial art, and you're right it would look so cool animated!
I wanted the demons to survive on blood, and in my head I was calling them reapers or reavers, but I settled on harvesters because it accurately describes them and I use reapers/reavers much too often. I just like the words, they have really savage, vicious connotations.
Serendipitous how it links to more of your work though! Link me to a piece where you've used harvesters, I'm curious now.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
distortified In reply to joe-wright [2011-08-02 16:21:16 +0000 UTC]
Reavers and reapers are definitely awesome names, and would probably be more fitting for these creatures, as the Harvesters in my world are.. well.. bigger than Gods most of the time..
Some examples:
War of One (Harvester of Strength vs. Harvester of War)
Prophecies (Harvester of Death)
Of Wolfs and Mans (Harvester of Mischief)
... Which actually, I'm going to be making a book that's a collection of short stories about these guys, and I was thinking of trying to get other people to write something about 'em.. So, if you're interested, lemme know. I'll have more information up about them soon.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
joe-wright In reply to distortified [2011-08-02 16:37:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh cool, they're kind of halfway between gods and celestials from the Marvel U.
I was reading the comments and people were mentioning Anansi and Princess Mononoke and stuff, so that's totally my wheelhouse
I'm very interested, tell me if anything happens because that'd be cool
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
distortified In reply to joe-wright [2011-08-02 16:47:41 +0000 UTC]
Definitely will. My plan is to put up more reference material on them (Break down who all the Harvesters are as a group and individually, possibly with artwork by `oilsoaked ) and maybe write a few more stories myself.
At that point, I'll open up the floor to a few writers that I trust to do an awesome job. The idea is that they've been around since before anything existed. They don't measure things in years or eons or even lifetimes, but in 'Existences,' each entailing multiple universes (multiversen lmao?)... So, as the writer, you can put them wherever/whenever you want, but the world should always be at its 'end' in one way or another. That can mean a universe collapsing, or it can mean a particularly noteworthy anthill being stepped on.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
joe-wright In reply to distortified [2011-08-02 22:28:27 +0000 UTC]
I had an idea a few hours ago when I was thinking about cooking, I think it describes how absurd I think it is.
Say there's a harvester that actually cultivates a planet from it's inception, and shapes the land and redirects the rivers and prunes forests and raises up various species. Then after millenia, when it's perfect and beautiful, he just consumes it all.
Of course that doesn't really fit in with your 'only appearing at the end of the world' thing, but I just thought it was an interesting analogy
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
distortified In reply to joe-wright [2011-08-03 11:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Actually, this wouldn't be too far outside the realm of the Harvesters at all. It's their purpose to go to a world when its ending, but they still get bored from time to time. More than one has kept a 'garden planet' from time to time, and I can totally imagine Sabella or Tefris doing that with theirs. XD It's also a pretty amusing take on the concept. I say write it.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
joe-wright In reply to distortified [2011-08-03 11:48:34 +0000 UTC]
Are there a finite amount of Harvesters then? Is there room to create a new character for this, or do you have all of them mapped out already?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
distortified In reply to joe-wright [2011-08-04 15:46:31 +0000 UTC]
There are a finite amount. Right now, the number is at eight or nine, though I've been definitely considering expanding from there. I just can't figure what other harvesters are necessary or make sense. If you had ideas for one, we could definitely work together on that.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
joe-wright In reply to distortified [2011-08-04 17:43:19 +0000 UTC]
Tell me everyone you've got at the moment then!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
distortified In reply to joe-wright [2011-08-05 01:46:04 +0000 UTC]
As it stands, there's:
Tempus (was Balance, but he disappeared a few existences back, leading to the others slowly warping their purposes)
Sabella (Death.. in the old days, she was also kind of 'life,' and the whole great circle thing. Now, it's just Death.)
Draemir (was Wit, warped into Mischief)
Sihree (was Love, warped into Lust)
Brohnn (Strength, too bad-ass to change.)
Tefris (was War--again in a noble sense, fighting for your rights and people etc--warped into Destruction/Slaughter)
Quillia (Peace, slowly starting to embody Apathy)
Aztyr (Hope, who's not warping, but is slowly starting to fade into depression)
Sakotis (was the Harvester of Truth, until he lost a bet with a demon ages ago. Now, he has the job of recording all things, thereby keeping Time in order.)
... I have better descriptions of most of them in this one document that i can e-mail you, if you'd like. Also, `oilsoaked is working on their ref pics for me.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
joe-wright In reply to distortified [2011-08-05 13:51:51 +0000 UTC]
I guess Quillia might fit my story. Especially before the warp.
I'm interested in Sakotis' story, that sounds interesting!
Yeah, by all means email me joewright89@btinternet.com
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
distortified In reply to joe-wright [2011-08-05 16:34:42 +0000 UTC]
Quillia, Aztyr and Sakotis are our three least developed, though the latter one, I'm holding a lot of control over. The former two, I'm very open for input with..
And coincidentally enough, the bet that Sakotis lost was a world-building one.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0


