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Sunset in Rio Grande do Sul, Brazil.For #CRphotography 's Contest: 'Where i Live'.
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Really good critique. You really seem to know what you're talking about which is very helpful to artists one here! Very fair too. You picked up on alot of things that I didn't but now you mention them I totally agree.
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Thank you very much
I do believe that a critique should be helpful and honest, you have to point out what you like and dont like and in a good way too, personally I think such is the best kind of critique.
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I agree. Since you seem to know about critiques would you mind reading my journal entry I just posted? Thanks in advance if you do!!
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Very fair, and some great insights !
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First of all i would Thank you for taking the time to do this amazing critique!!!
Sorry, but honestly I can not add more sharpness to the picture, because I've done it before and adding a little more, would destroy the picture.
As for the tree, unfortunately I can not crop the photo to the right, since this is already the original photo, just cropped to improve the horizontal line, which was very tart.
I'm starting landscape photos, thanks again for your feedback!
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You are certainly welcome.
It kinda depends on how you sharpen it, my advice is to use High pass filter and either Overlay or softlight layer properties, it adds the most non-destructive sharpening there is, that way you dont mess with your pixels.
Yeah that tree is there and not really much to do about it, but hence the critique, Its more a thing to think about for future shots.
Fun that you are getting into landscapes, its really a relaxing way to play with the camera.
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Absolutely amazing photo! You are a great photographer. How magical!!
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You're welcome!! It's true
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your beautiful work is featured at [link]
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Thanks, Leni! I'm honored
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you're most certainly welcome
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Thanks for your kind words, May! Your support is truly appreciated
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You're very welcome! 
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Em qual hora do dia vc tirou essa foto? Fico muito boa! parabéns
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Tirei essa foto às 17:50, eu gostaria de poder ir nesse lugar de manhã, mas fica muito longe... Pra pegar uma foto nesse lugar no amanheçer eu teria que me acordar às 5:00 da manhã pra ir até ele, então prefiro ir de tarde mesmo
Ela havia ficado com sobreexposição, então editei ela em um novo programa que está me fazendo começar a fotografar paisagens novamente: o Photomatix. Esta é uma foto HDR, mas fiz da forma mais realista possível. Eu fotografei a paisagem originalmente fotando na grama, para depois criar duas cópias dela com subexposição, depois juntei elas e dei uns ajustes finais no programa. Após isso exportei para o photoshop e lá arrumei a luz de forma melhor, a linha horizontal e a nitidez.
Obrigado por comentar!
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Highlights are a bit strong but it really works with the image. nice light and composition
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Thanks for your positive feedback! 
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