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Beautiful model. Really like the complete tonal range of white to black. Nice stance...wonderul eye contact...just a wonderful shot. Thank you for sharing.
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I like your photos alot..but I have one question..why are they alwayz in black and white? Not that it's not nice..it's always amazingly beautiful...i was just wondering
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aww you worked with my friend Erika,thats gorgeous, you cant really fail with her
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Now that is a really useful photo critique, thank you.
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I like it. Though i don't think her leggings ( or whatever those are called) match well in the picture. They just seem to stand out as they don't fit, otherwise, nice photo.
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They are stockings (women wear those!) and they fit perfectly, now you don't like them in the picture, that is another matter. Thanks for passing by.
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sorry i can't help what the others say but i like the shot very much,nudism with class that what its all about
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First off, you found a very beautiful girl. I really liked the hair how it flows down her head in that playful way, the look you captured sends tingles throughout my body but the eyes complimented by the light smile were what really blew me away.
As far as critique goes; I think a slightly more covered up model like with half-dropped boyshorts for the nether. For her bra I think either a half-dropped-Bandeau bra, -Demi bra or a -Sports bra would go very nicely with that playful theme and would enhance her female sexuality greatly. One of the ways women control us men is through the power of suggestion, they rarely give us what we want, but just enough to keep us interested and begging them for more.
Nonetheless, excellent work!
Would love to see you work more with her.
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Stunning girl, but that out of the way it's the stocking and jacket, combined with her expression is the real art in this photograph. I really do like black and white for artistic shooting, but this must have been the devil to light like that.
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She looks like she is flashing someone. It's the way she is holding her shirt type thing
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They way everything matches so well, this photograph is spectacular. Though, the background is almost confusing. If there was either more, or less, behind the model, or perhaps more than just the model, in the photo, I would like it better. The... thing, near her right hip draws my attention away from her, it's about the darkest single thing in the picture.
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Sorry I can't give you a negative crit here this picture is very nice. I can understand the over reactions, the way she holds the garment, the way she seems to be peeking out from behind her own hair and the questioning look in her eyes are probably the primary causes. You say she is elegant, is she sweet as well?
Rex
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Wow, you got a bunch of trash from commenters on this one...
The way she opens her top (very much reminiscent of a striptease) is very inviting and probably the reason for the squadron of trolls decending on you.
That being said, I love the pic, it's very provocative and yet she looks very at ease. Nice grey tones very soft with her flesh being in the lightest tones but not stark white (I imagined she's tanned). Great work to the both of you.
I always wonder what your b&w pics look like in colors, but this one more than most (I have to say I'm usually partial to colors).
Best regards.
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Thanks .. as I explain below, it's only one person that was angry at not suceeding to get the model's name .. the best thing is to ignore people like that and just block them from our files. That said, please do not ever hesitate to make negative criticism of my work. Best wishes, John
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I like this one very much. Her expression, like she's seeking approval for her actions. I also like that it's not in the couch room, the different location works great for this shot and pose.
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Location .. hmm .. it's the lift outside my front door ..: -)
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She's amazing.
I totally think of 80's rocker chic when I see her.
I half expect to see her in a short leather jacket and a really ripped pair of Guess jeans.
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haha .. you are psychic, that is exactly how I met her .. : -) .. thank you for your support. John
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Always my pleasure John.
Maybe you should shoot her in the way you found her... Really done up in that 80's style.
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It is a technically skilled photo and the model is really fine ... the subject isn't porn or if it is it's extremely soft .. I nail my colours to the mast and shout I LOVE IT
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Thank you, the young lady indeed is very elegant. The silly remark below was only written because I refused to identify her. Quite apart from the fact that she is not who they may have imagined, I do not name models anyway. That is why they pose for me and accept to be posted here.
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I also think it is...rather contraversial photo. For me what distracts are her nails.
I respect the model, I am talking about the idea and composition and else. What I say is that maybe a good light here but saying that it is somhow unusual or ...m..maybe a word "tender" whoto...would be an exagerration (from my point of view of corse).
(I hope JohnPeri respects opinions as well as he respects models).
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By all means express your opinion on the photo, I ask people repeatedly to be overly critical of my work, including on this page, and I appreciate your views. What I do not appreciate at all however, and it borders on the arrogant, is you taking it upon yourself to question whether it is so. I hope you are equally receptive to criticism.
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I never cease to be amazed by how your photos are so natural and unpretentious yet still glamorous. The photography never overshadows the models who are obviously very comfortable in your presence (a much overlooked aspect of a good photographer).
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Thank you my friend. Indeed, the relation that one builds up with these young persons is important in attempting to capture something a little more personal without being invasive. Needless to say, they are wonderful girls of course, which helps. I choose my models very largely on their personality. Many thanks for passing by again. John
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the dark top is a nice contrast to the model's torso and blonde hair tumbling down to match her expression. the swirling lines of the ironwork in the background seem to fit with the tops of the stockings. nicely done.
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That's very nicly expressed, thank you very much. But please do not ever hesitate to be critical of my work. best wishes, John
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Tres beau model avec un look naturel, sans fiafia,sans extra
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