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Published: 2007-06-30 11:27:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 1795; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 128
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Description A shoot with models: puppett- [link] and on the left- [link]

I'd like to try this again another time, Jul's hand kept covering her face. More planning needed I think.
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Comments: 12

Dieplztks [2007-10-23 11:25:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm willing to give this another try :3 Just have to play with things a little more next time.

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Damica [2007-07-19 21:34:57 +0000 UTC]

Maybe move her higher. Either way, love the shot

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rmford [2007-07-06 10:36:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure i like the soft focus being that soft, but i also don't know if the shot would work were it any.. 'harder'? i dunno what the term for un-soft focus is

Aside from that personal preference, though, it's a really well executed shot of a cool idea Possibly moving MistressSonya more towards puppett's back would work better for less hand/face coverage issues. Maybe even almost directly behind?

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jstem In reply to rmford [2007-07-06 11:42:27 +0000 UTC]

I intentionally used more softness, actually if I remember I made heavy use of PS's Diffuse Glow filter. I wanted the glowing white with the soft as well.

I might try moving her back farther, along with above as mentioned earlier. Thanks.

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rmford In reply to jstem [2007-07-06 13:43:13 +0000 UTC]

mm, like i said, i don't think the shot would work so well if it was in hard focus, but i'm just not a huge fan of softer stuff. know what i mean?

Like work. I don't like it, but it needs to be done. Sorta thing.

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Splend [2007-07-02 08:23:28 +0000 UTC]

What a great concept, well done!

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AngelJester [2007-07-01 00:50:24 +0000 UTC]

Try putting the puppeteer up higher - less likly to cover her face then.

love the concept but the contrast is almost washed out...the top of the picture is too bright - maybe a slightly darker background....

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jstem In reply to AngelJester [2007-07-02 15:28:33 +0000 UTC]

The higher idea just might work, thanks!

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AngelJester In reply to jstem [2007-07-03 13:51:30 +0000 UTC]

glad to help

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bound-nicole-babe78 [2007-06-30 22:11:19 +0000 UTC]

Nice overall concept. Might just need to tweak up on the resolution. Some of the strings blend in to the point that they disappear.

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OctaviousRex1979 [2007-06-30 20:50:37 +0000 UTC]

now this concept i like...amazing. my hats off to you.

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lsycko [2007-06-30 13:24:49 +0000 UTC]

sweet, I would love to see that!

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