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Kalidassa — Vinnie Comic - Box 20
Published: 2007-06-13 22:03:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 515; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 16
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This is the 20th box from my art project comic. I spent a lot of time on it, and while there are some very obvious design flaws that I'll probably fix later (like the fact that Vinnie and the drixel are WAY too large), I still wanted to put up this giant thing... for now.
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I have to say that the flying ships is gorgeous! Great design and colouring!
And I don't think that the characters are too big per se, I think it looks like a bit of perspective. 
And again you did a great job with the light!
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Haha, yes. I'm horrible with things like perspective. 
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LOL! Oh yes! Perspective is a betch I tell yah!
Tried to master that my self a few times and.. well.. I didn't. ^^
But one day.. Oh, one day I will!
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it's pretty. i like it.
the sahdowing just seems a littlwe unrealistic and the trees and characters stick out from the realistic water and grass. I likes it tho.
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Yes. It's actually supposed to be that way, so I take that as a compliment... but, haha, it still needs work if it doesn't look like it's supposed to be that way. 
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no problem ^-^
I like it anyways.
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And the zeppelins even go in and out :3
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Bwahaha! This world is called Deswure....
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I also almost forgot to rate it!
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Haha, well, it's a comic that my friend and I have been doing FOREVER. So there MAY be a possibility of there being some manga about it.
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Wow, that's really detailed. I do have a question though... Are the cities supposed to be miniature? They seem to be quite small in comparison to the characters.
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Hehe, no, the cities aren't supposed to be. I made the fox critter and Vinnie several thousand times too big, but was too rushed for time to fix it. I plan to edit it later, though.
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It does give it a strange feel though, like he's emerged as a giant. It kind of adds to the fantasyish, you know?
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I was looking at your Vinnie comic...the major design flaw I saw was that it needed to be spread out over several more pages with more development in the last bit after this frame. I knew this one had to be either a single or double page spread and now that I see it in detail, I'd go for the double page spread. It's supposed to be a WOW moment and you'd lose the details of the ships in the air if it was too much smaller
LOL I do not think Vinnie and the drixel are too large, but there should be a little more space between them and the frame bottom--they're a little too close to what would be the frame trim line--and possibly more details in the other world
I like it tho
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Thank you very much! Your detailed critique is very helpful. I wish I would have had more time on the project itself to put more detail into the other world, but I already turned it in about two weeks late. Haha.
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