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Published: 2011-06-03 16:21:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1845; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 15
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An OC Rider I made for a fanfic I plan to do, a shorter one than I normally make that'd be "movie" length. Anyway, moving on:---------------------------------------
Name: Originally: Katsu Hitoshi, Renamed: Norio
Age: 23
Animal Base: Thunderbird
Personality: Norio was originally a reserved, kindhearted individual, very intelligent as well. However, after what happened to him, he's become quiet and cunning, plotting vengeance on those who have done him wrong, rather cold. However, he's has always had a sense of justice that will not allow him to permit anyone to suffer if he can help it.
History: Katsu Hitoshi was a Japanese scientist, fresh out of Collage before getting a job offer in the US at a laboratory. However, he soon discovered this was all a ploy by a gang of genetically enhanced criminals known simply as the Renegades. The Renegades leader, named Adrian, used his wife as a hostage to force Katsu to do what he was told, to steal a batch of experminental weather control nanites from the lab they'd set him up to work at. While he stole the nanites and made it to the meeting place at a Native American bural ground, he discovered Adrian had lied and already had his wife murdered in coldblood. Having been lied to, Katsu tried to flee but was killed by the Falcon Renegade, who knocked him off a cliff. However, Katsu took the nanites with him to the grave.
The Renegades thought he was dead, that was until the Falcon Renegade found himself staring down the gun of the very man he believed he'd killed.
While the Renegades returned to Japan to plot their next crime, something strange happened. The mystical energies of the Native American artifacts surrounding him reacted with the nanites he took with him, rebuilding Katsu' body and imbuing it with the power of the mythological Thunderbird. Rising from the grave, Katsu renamed himself Norio (Man of the Law), swearing to never let the Renegades hurt anyone again. He returned to Japan took on the mantle of Kamen Rider Ace, seeking to bring the evil Renegades to justice, one by one.
Weapons/Powers:
Ace Buckle: The thunderbird based buckle that allows him to transform.
Elemental Power: Kamen Rider Ace can use the weather control nanites to use the power of wind and lightning to assault his foes.
Aero Revolver: A pistol that he reconfigured by the nanites and mystical energies giving him his powers. It is capable of channeling his wind powers to let loose pressurized bullets of air capable of shattering concrete.
Storm Rider: His motorcycle, based off a classic chopper.
Finishing Moves:
Storm of Vengeance: Surrounds himself in a vortex of wind, lifting himself in the air and surrounding himself in lightning before delivering a flying side kick to the oppponent.
Lightning Crunch: Charges electricity into his fist and delivers a lightning infused punch to the enemy.
Piercing Cyclone: Spins the revolver barriel on the Aero Revolver, sucking win through the vents of it into the chamber. He then lets out a thin, concentraited cyclone through the opponent's body.
If he manages to find something other than his revenge to fight for, he'll transform into Kamen Rider Ace Justice Mode, gaining a lighter color scheme and a boost in power.
I chose the darker colors because unlike most Riders, he's not a straight up hero in this form, he's an Anti-Hero.
Kamen Rider belongs to Toei! Kamen Rider Ace and the Renegades are mine!
UPDATE: Changed color scheme and also added a cowboy hat in place of his head crest, think it looks better.
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Comments: 25
Devil-Master-3000 [2011-06-05 03:50:54 +0000 UTC]
I agree with RiderBOy, he does remind me of a rooster. I know that is hardly the effect you were shooting for, but he does.
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Kendell2 In reply to Devil-Master-3000 [2011-06-05 11:52:15 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I'll try to fix it. Do you think a cowboy hat instead of the head crest would look better?
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Devil-Master-3000 In reply to Kendell2 [2011-06-05 15:49:01 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't get rid of it completely, but yeah, a hat with the crest in it will look good on him.
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Kendell2 In reply to Devil-Master-3000 [2011-06-05 18:01:44 +0000 UTC]
Gave him a cowboyhat, couldn't make the crest look right with it, changed his color scheme as well.
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Devil-Master-3000 In reply to Kendell2 [2011-06-05 18:04:44 +0000 UTC]
Now that is infinitely better from the last one, but it is a shame you had to get rid of the crest.
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Kendell2 In reply to Devil-Master-3000 [2011-06-05 18:07:16 +0000 UTC]
Made an edit and added a Thunderbird symbol on the hat if it helps. Thanks though.
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Kendell2 In reply to Devil-Master-3000 [2011-06-05 18:13:41 +0000 UTC]
So I take it you like it?
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Kendell2 In reply to RiderB0y [2011-06-04 20:46:28 +0000 UTC]
Really? I can see somewhat, but his motif is a thunderbird. But other than that does he look ok? What about the story?
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RiderB0y In reply to Kendell2 [2011-06-05 05:13:50 +0000 UTC]
Hmmmm the story is nice,
But, Because I take rider designs seriously
I cannot go with the design you have here, from what I can find (not sure how true this is) the Thunderbird is depicted as many-colored, with two curling horns, and, often, teeth within its beak.
I'm not trying to be mean but, compare your design to this [link] .... see the resemblance...
Go back and check out the Thunderbird myth again, you might get another view of it [link] [link] [link] [link]
Oh and maybe check out the really version of Oz [link]
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Kendell2 In reply to RiderB0y [2011-06-05 11:51:46 +0000 UTC]
Point taken...think getting rid of the head crest and replacing it with a cowboy hat or just a plain designed helmet might be a better idea? I don't think the horns would look good on a(n) (anti-)heroic character.
As for colors, the reason he's colored like this is because this isn't his true form, his Justice Mode is colored more like a real Thunderbird. That's a sign Vengeanc Mode isn't what he's supposed to be.
Thanks for the tips!
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RiderB0y In reply to Kendell2 [2011-06-05 16:21:20 +0000 UTC]
No probs
Hmmm, Cowboy hat is a worth a try but it won't be easy, even if Skull looks good in it, try 2 horns anyway, Kamen rider Emperor, Arc, Hibiki Onis looked good with 2 horns >w<
Even if its not Multi colored, choose others colors the bird has, as long as its not a roosters... >w<
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Kendell2 In reply to RiderB0y [2011-06-05 18:00:44 +0000 UTC]
Well I tried the horns, didn't look good on him. I did change his color scheme and added a cowboy hat, which I think really looks good on him. Based his armor scheme off one type of Thunderbird I found. Most are black and white, but that didn't look good on him. What do you think now?
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RiderB0y In reply to Kendell2 [2011-06-05 18:38:33 +0000 UTC]
Get rid of the underwear (ugh) , and the mouth needs to change , at the moment it reminds me of this [link] which in no way is a good thing....
for the cowboy part, try going somewhere... different , even try this [link]
How did you do the horns?
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Kendell2 In reply to RiderB0y [2011-06-05 19:10:58 +0000 UTC]
Edited out the "underware", I agree, he looks 100X better without them. Also changed the mouthplate make it more pointed, like a predator and added some bullets to his belt (he can probably use his airpowered gun as a railgun that way). Tell me what you think.
As for going a different direction, I see your point. A longcoat might look good on him, but not as part of his suit, probably as an excessory he wears, like Eternal's cloak. Might try that.
A lot of different ways, just couldn't get them to work.
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RiderB0y In reply to Kendell2 [2011-06-06 16:04:38 +0000 UTC]
Better~ if you ever can, try giving a pattern to the mouth
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Kendell2 In reply to RiderB0y [2011-06-06 16:09:24 +0000 UTC]
I did, it really didn't look right. It's supposed to resemble a beak, as well as a bandana an outlaw would put over their mouth.
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RiderB0y In reply to Kendell2 [2011-06-06 16:12:18 +0000 UTC]
... maybe screw the beak and cover it with the bandana but with patterns >w<
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Kendell2 In reply to RiderB0y [2011-06-06 17:04:49 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps. Though maybe then remove the bandana from his neck...
Thanks for the fav!
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Dragon-Warrior-3000 [2011-06-04 06:16:35 +0000 UTC]
Norio.... That name rings a bell.... Ah! The head of SGS in Boukenger and Norio Wakamoto, the legendary voice actor!
Anyway, I love the heavily Western vibe I'm getting. A Native American/cowboy-themed Rider.
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Kendell2 In reply to Dragon-Warrior-3000 [2011-06-05 18:01:13 +0000 UTC]
Made an edit to him, adding a cowboy hat because the creat made him look too much like a rooster.
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Dragon-Warrior-3000 In reply to Kendell2 [2011-06-06 06:33:42 +0000 UTC]
Ah, nice, nice. Looks very vigilante cowboy.
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Kendell2 In reply to Dragon-Warrior-3000 [2011-06-04 13:37:45 +0000 UTC]
Really? Didn't know that. Just saw it meant "Man Of The Law" and felt it fit.
Glad you like it! The reason I gave him a western vibe is his revenge seeker mentality fit a western setting perfectly. The Renegades' kaijin were actually originally going to be called Outlaws, but it sounded too cheesy.
Thanks for the fave!
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