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Keykey — FOR YOU YES YOU
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I am the tight ass you're watching swing
down the sidewalk,
but you never get to see my face.

I am not a mirror, am not a reflection,
I am a ripple in the water
and a wrinkle in your shirt,   I am
a drifting cloud, am the perfect
wood shop project for sanding
because of all my rough edges.


Everything is a cliche
anymore.
I don't know why I bother.


The snowflakes have melted, have
curled my straight hair
have disappeared into my eyelashes
and eyebrows
and skin
and skin
and skinskinskin.

Winter is not the month of love,
not the time for ILOVENEEDWANTYOU
YOUYOUYOU
it is not the time to fall in love
and pull your pants down for a boy
so he can scrape your ass in the snow
like if you'll give him this one thing
he'll give you the fucking world.


I am sorry if I am too honest
I am sorry if I am not realistic enough
I am sorry that these words aren't
anything more than words and they
are not hands holding your heart in place.

Never mind, never mind, I was
never sorry for anything.


I am still a dog. This is a repetition piece.
I am still a dog. This is a repetition piece.

I am a cryingwhiningslobberylovingloyal dog
and I am the kind of dog that will bite a hand
that doesn't feed me and thinks
that I owe it something, thefuckthefuckthefuck
IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE?

THIS IS ANGRY
FUCK YOU
I AM ANGRY
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU
I NEVER MEANT TO RIP APART
ALL THE THINGS THAT MEANT SOMETHING.

I am sorry if you said they didn't matter.


NOI'MNOT, FUCK YOU.


I apologize too much.









I swear too much.





Fuck it, I'm so easy
so gullible, I am such a tool;
if I love you I will give you
everything I am and if I don't
then it will not matter what
you are in my eyes because
I will not see you.







USERS, USERS, USERS,
please stop, I realized I just
didn't give a shit after you
stopped giving a shit, after you
ripped out the trust from inside
of me and replaced it with some
IDON'TGIVEASHITBITCHFUCKYOU.




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Comments: 11

Enskie [2009-01-01 01:04:37 +0000 UTC]

You have such a creative and unique style of writing, never gets old. What I notice the most is that at the 'stronger' parts you combine words, e.g:
IDON'TGIVEASHITBITCHFUCKYOU.

I love your writing, never stop.

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Keykey In reply to Enskie [2009-01-05 05:58:13 +0000 UTC]

I never noticed that but you are so right.


Thankyou again, you seem to be filled with praise.

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Enskie In reply to Keykey [2009-01-06 11:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Of course I have praise for you, people who deserve praise will get it. But you're welcome.

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Felidire [2008-12-06 04:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Sounds almost like you're venting into your writing? As it progresses, anyway.

if that's not true, then others might get the same idea.

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Keykey In reply to Felidire [2008-12-08 17:52:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I tend to do that sometimes.

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TheseKrimzonFlames [2008-12-05 22:32:35 +0000 UTC]

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Keykey In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2008-12-08 17:52:24 +0000 UTC]

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Keykey [2008-12-08 18:53:46 +0000 UTC]

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platinummyr [2008-12-05 22:06:15 +0000 UTC]

Because that's just how you write

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Keykey In reply to platinummyr [2008-12-08 17:53:00 +0000 UTC]

I suppose so. <3

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platinummyr In reply to Keykey [2008-12-08 19:09:56 +0000 UTC]

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