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Published: 2012-08-07 04:49:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 13166; Favourites: 119; Downloads: 173
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Pinkie Pie gets a taste of a cake not meant for her, proceeds to grow and gets hungry I suppose. Loosely based on "The Very Hungry Pinkie Pie" [link] , just wanted an excuse to draw mild size difference with ponies.Related content
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I read the story. Problem is Karma... and I don't think it will be pretty....
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But it'll be interesting none the less.
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Well its ok but I wish there was a better ending. Like maybe she threw up everything (somehow) and went back to normal size or she wakes up realizing she was just dreaming. Unless this person is going to continue the story. But still would like a good happy ending.
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Maybe the plant caused her to have vivid hallucinations?
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I suppose you could make it that she wakes up and it was all a dream, but to be fair, that seems like a cop out to me. Not sure it would fit in well with the story at all, unless it was an uncanon ending.
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I'm just not into the "Big person = God mode" concept. There are many ways this could end.
1. (Pinkie Lover) She consumes everything in the universe including the 4th wall (Would make sense then she would be normal size in the Real world!)
2. (Violent) The unicorns kill her magic (Which would not fit the MLP way at all but then again we got "Cupcakes" and this story breakin that way.
3. (Dream) She wakes up from a dream and sees the plant that gave her the vore session and she throws it away.
Something I'd like to point out is that Twilight never uses her teleportation magic in the story. You would think that would be logical since she is asleep in the end, I mean also that Digestion would not be immediate as you see Rainbow Dash is fine even when Applejack is consumed. Sorry if I ramble.
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Actually...that first one, I like that idea. If I ever go back with the intention to add new things to it, it'll probably be along the lines of that first point. So maybe in the future you'll get the ending you want.
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WAIT YOU ARE THE AUTHOR!? And you mean you will make her REAL? As in, she becomes part of the REAL world?! So much awesomeness just got achieved in 10 secs flat...
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Yep, that's me, not usually one for making it known, but the username kind of speaks for itself. It's a better ending than what I did, so I suppose it might be a good idea to use, provided I can make it fit correctly.
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*Is speechless* Well I'm sorry if I offended you in any way. I do have to admit that I'm not one for MLP Fanfics or Vore in that matter. (Yet for some odd reason I could not stop reading it) I'm one of those type of guys that wants: Build up, Crisis, Soultion, Ending. I'm not sure if that makes me a critic or what.
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No offence taken. I'm not a fan of vore myself, I just like to attempt new things, in fact most of things on that pastebin aren't things I'm a fan of. I'd write pretty much anything at least once. I can see why you wouldn't be a fan of MLP fanfics, there's some pretty awful stuff out there, though with that said there are a few gems as well.
Most importantly though, it doesn't really make you a critic, apart from the comments about what was wrong/right about it. I think it makes you more of a man or woman who just sticks by their tastes, nothing wrong with that.
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Sigh thank goodness. I'd rather not be one of those dicks on 4chan who are like, "THS STRY SUCKS CAUSE IT STOOPID!" I see this shit on some items and all I can do is
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I have had no bad reviews from 4chan, then again they're just happy they get something regardless of the content I suppose.
And ouch, that looks painful.
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4chan is hell on the web.
Go there and you might as well have...
(From PennyArcade): Your party enters the Chamber of Futility.
Pretty much sums it up
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I have been there. Seen things. Acted pretty neutrally overall.
But yes, that pretty much sums it up.
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Just wondering, does the plant make her crazy?
Also I need to ask, if you will continue this, you won't put anything like blood and stuff will ya? (I'm squeamish, thank you Dr. House)
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I'd say deluded more than anything.
I'll probably just do it as a sequel if anything, but no there will be no blood and such. Despite the fact that I have like three fics on that pastebin with blood and death and such, I don't really enjoy putting it there. It'll probably just be destruction and such, but no death or blood. Couldn't really do it anyway seeing as though I left Rainbow and Applejack alive.
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True. True. It was the last sentence that made me think they were going to die. "...as she dozed off, digesting her tremendous meal."
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Yeah, I can see how you would get the idea they died. Then again if I had intended them to die, I would've already killed Rainbow, given that she would have most likely been suffered critical burns and such from the stomach acid, before she got room to avoid it.
I guess it'd just have to be believed that ponies can't digest other ponies, but they can digest wood and other usually non edible things. Not that it makes anymore sense though.
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Did ponies used to make sense? lol
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Somewhere along the line, I imagine it did.
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like i said on fa. if it were me, i'd take twi's place and pinkie would be luna instead ^^
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So many pics and Spike still hasn't gotten in on the action. Poor little guy ... I think.
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If you read the story, Spike gets eaten by Pinkie.
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Yeah, but the author didn't even describe his eating scene. Lame.
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No she just ripped the tree out of the ground and om nom nom'd it. I just wish there was like some revelation in the end like maybe he/she said that Pinkie awoke from a dream or something like that.
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That`s how it was in my sequel to it.
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Wouldn't hurt. 
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Given that Spike would be inside the library when it was being consumed, that might be difficult, but I'll give it a shot anyway.
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Lemme know when the changes are complete.
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