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Description The Seeds of the Future Lie Buried in the past
We must seek the balance, Megatron. Not only between the organic and the technological, but the balance between eternal enemies. Between you and I.
The Great Transformation awaits, Megatron. Prepare to be... reformatted.
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So! If any tf series was in need of a revamp, redesign and regutting, it's BEAST MACHINES!
While initially, as some of you may know, I did not like BM. In fact, I despised it. But, recently, after a third viewing of the series, I can honestly say, I actually, really really do like it. I like what the writers were trying to do, I like that the writers had the pure guts to do what they were doing. I have said before that they had butchered the characters, but now I can see that they were merely exploring them, pushing them to their limits--declawing Rattrap, guilting Primal, twisting Silverbolt and emboldening Rhinox. It was painful to see the characters that we had come to love so much be put and have to deal with what they did, but in the end, we discovered so much more about them.
However, on that note, I would also like to say, that a lot of the concepts were poorly executed. One of which is the art and design direction. Not much to say about this, other than, for the most part, it was terrible. Painful to the eyes.
Another problem, was with the character limits. I like what they were trying to do, but sometimes they just missed it completely. So in this "revamp" I'll be adding in my vision.

After landing back on Cybertron, Primal came into full grips with his failure--the entire Transformer race--their death weighing on his shoulders. Aided by the Oracle program that gave him direct access to the Matrix, Primal became dependent on the will of the Matrix, no longer trusting his own judgment. However, this dependency on this program led Primal into a state of insanity and pure fanaticism, as he began to lose his old self.
After nearly destroying Cybertron due to his own lack of decisiveness, Primal came face to face with the Oracle. And it is here that he learned that the courage and leadership that was needed was not in the Oracle, but in the very thing that had made him, and every single Transformer, more than just mere machines. The truth had always layed inside Primal's spark, his own free will. Primal came to full grips with his failures and his past as the confident and brave leader of time's past reemerged from the ashes of defeat.

I'll be revamping designs and profiles of all the BM cast! Enjoy! :]
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ZUltraman7 [2023-01-03 05:14:36 +0000 UTC]

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Marshi-s-Cookies [2021-07-12 21:19:18 +0000 UTC]

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Crossz-Grimlock [2020-08-21 03:54:16 +0000 UTC]

It looks amazing it combines his original look with his beast machines one this is how he should have looked like in the show

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Th3F0rge [2020-04-18 01:42:37 +0000 UTC]

A redesign would be good for all the Maximals. Top Three Cheetor Black Arachnia and SilverBolt with a Knight/Ninja look for Silverbolt.

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Kiarou In reply to Th3F0rge [2020-04-21 00:22:50 +0000 UTC]

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Th3F0rge In reply to Kiarou [2020-04-21 14:45:18 +0000 UTC]

Β  Β Yeah. Forgot to mention to give B.A. a Shinobi like robot mode with a green katana.

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Palettin [2017-08-24 08:03:21 +0000 UTC]

when i first saw this, i thought to myself:
If the beast wars/machines series ever continues, and optimus somehow returns,
this is what i want him to look like.

Well done.

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UltraRobo [2017-01-07 12:33:12 +0000 UTC]

This is highly superior to the Beast Machines design.

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wjones215 [2013-09-10 21:03:51 +0000 UTC]

Cool. I bet Silverbolt would look pretty badass if you ever did one on him.

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theherocreator In reply to wjones215 [2014-01-02 23:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Imagine this: Silverbolt as a Griffin

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wjones215 In reply to theherocreator [2014-01-03 02:11:23 +0000 UTC]

To be honest, I was really hoping that Silverbolt was going to be reformatted as a technorganic griffin. Other than having a better understanding of Beast Wars I assume, what did you think about TF: Prime? I personally thought that it was really well done and very refreshing from the awful animated series that came after TF: Cybertron.

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Marshi-s-Cookies In reply to wjones215 [2021-07-12 21:22:13 +0000 UTC]

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wjones215 In reply to Marshi-s-Cookies [2021-07-13 01:44:39 +0000 UTC]

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theherocreator In reply to wjones215 [2014-01-03 15:19:35 +0000 UTC]

I have mixed feelings about TF prime. To me, was one of the best shows of transformers, but i think it could be better if the writers had taken more risks instead of playing safe and make no changes at all to the status quo of the autobots (for example, if Bulkhead would died by hardshell and Smokescreen was his replacement, i think it could create a more dramatic inpact for miko)

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wjones215 In reply to theherocreator [2014-01-03 21:33:30 +0000 UTC]

True, there was some areas that needed improvement. I did like how the writers used the Predacons as prehistoric Cybertronians and Predaking as a dragon, nice touch. I sucked that there was no combiner teams in TF: Prime.

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theherocreator In reply to wjones215 [2014-01-04 20:43:15 +0000 UTC]

Or even better, M.E.C.H Improved their Transforming technology to create the Triple Changers

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wjones215 In reply to theherocreator [2014-01-05 01:14:48 +0000 UTC]

I really wanted to see tri-changers in this recent series. They are personally one of my favorite types of transformation.

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theherocreator In reply to theherocreator [2014-01-03 15:21:02 +0000 UTC]

About animated, yeah i hate that show too.

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RegularShow2398 [2012-08-05 06:15:23 +0000 UTC]

Nice. Kinda reminds me of how Primal might look in the Movieverse style.

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ryderdecade [2012-02-24 16:05:55 +0000 UTC]

I hope I get to see more like this.

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BelRhaza4017 [2012-01-17 00:20:04 +0000 UTC]

an awesome rendering of the good old big bot; well done

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solomonsea [2011-09-26 18:10:45 +0000 UTC]

I like how you combined Optimal Optimus with Technorganic Optimus. I also like the gritty comic book feel. Fantastic job! Keep it up

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Lewamus [2011-03-01 20:58:40 +0000 UTC]

you shlud make a batter Beast Machines vergen of megatron aswell.

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Spiritstrike91 [2011-02-10 06:08:16 +0000 UTC]

O.o That is sweet! Very well done!

While I'm a fan of BW, I was a little bit displeased by BM. But I love the story, the dark theme added to it, and the voices. The characters were completely OOC, except for Cheetor. That guy was growing up, so that was all I was happy with.

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warman546 [2011-01-17 08:41:59 +0000 UTC]

nice robot mode

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sargenthound [2010-07-07 09:56:40 +0000 UTC]

much better head and body

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warahi [2010-06-29 11:02:47 +0000 UTC]

well, the design's definately an improvement. I seriously don't get what they were going for with how they made Primal look in BM.

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Ravensaurs-Rex [2010-06-05 19:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Ah, that is a much better design for "Big Bot". lol

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prfctcellrulz [2010-03-06 19:44:10 +0000 UTC]

Now I have to rewatch my Beast Machines DVDs!

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Kiarou In reply to prfctcellrulz [2010-03-23 02:36:14 +0000 UTC]

You should! :]

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prfctcellrulz In reply to Kiarou [2010-03-23 03:22:34 +0000 UTC]

(Goes to do so!)

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Chimera-gui [2009-12-19 16:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Though I'm a fan of Beast Machines, I will admit that there were problems.

Great redesign, though it kinda reminds me of Beast Wars 10th Anniversary Optimus Primal.

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NobleSavage [2009-12-18 13:58:53 +0000 UTC]

This is fucking cool. Much better follow-up to Optimal Optimus.

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Isgaroth-Atanuri [2009-12-16 19:03:54 +0000 UTC]

Really cool.

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davidalex [2009-12-16 12:42:00 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I hated how optimus didn't look anything like optimus... and blackarachnia... SRSLY WTF

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Kalila-chan [2009-12-16 11:43:54 +0000 UTC]

Is Beast Wars and Beast Machines the same series or different?
This is so awsome!! Weldone

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prfctcellrulz In reply to Kalila-chan [2009-12-16 20:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Beast Machines is in the same continuity as Beast Wars. A sequel series, to be exact.

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Kalila-chan In reply to prfctcellrulz [2009-12-16 22:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh right cool ^^

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prfctcellrulz In reply to Kalila-chan [2009-12-16 22:28:32 +0000 UTC]

I know!

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RedWingsDragon [2009-12-16 07:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Once again Kiarou's Beast Machine's proves to be better than the show itself. Awsome work here!

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Blackvegetable [2009-12-16 05:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Now that's a much better designed BM Optimus that we know and love! Kickass!

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kakyuuspark [2009-12-16 04:26:54 +0000 UTC]

I definitely remember Beast Machines.

Love the pic ^^

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Kiarou In reply to kakyuuspark [2009-12-16 04:32:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! :'D

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