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Honor


As the throne room doors close behind Gorm he takes in the environment around him and studies it. The thorn room had a luminous yellow lighting from a large, decorative chandelier that has hung from the ceiling. The room itself shows pride to the palace for who see it. The walls were decorated with four horde banners. Originally they had blood red color for the horde, but with the light giving off light in the room they have a golden color.


To give the room it's meaning of royalty, on center flooring laid from the door to the steps of the throne. As Gorm finish taking in new, he inhales all the air he could muster and gave content sigh.


"Ah, I am home." gorm sighed


Gorm took his first steps towards the throne to meet the queen. As he made his way to the throne he felt something was amiss in the air. Gorm gave small glances from left to right. There were no palace guards what's so ever in the throne room.


'Not one guard in sight.' gorm thought


He looks around the room to see that his suspicion was true. Not one guard. One! All of them were nowhere in sight.


'Either RAAM is giving a battle plan for the surface to our brothers, or-' gorm wondered


He continued to wonder until he passed by a few of queens myrrah's treasures from the horde. Every so often, one of the very lucky locusts is granted to present a gift to the queen when they achieve victory for the horde. Gorm looked at each treasure piece until he stops at one particular item, a very special item. It was neckwear item that had multiple of shiny rocks incrusted in a yellowish brown material. It was the first gift to the queen given by gorm.


Gorm was on a war path against the humans from the thirtieth day after "surface break" as they called it. When gorm returned from his day of battle, he has given the necklace to the queen in person. Displayed on a podium, lying on a small, red pillow secured by a glass casing. Gorm was proud of finding that treasure;  it was one of gorm's many achievements that made him a general. Gorm continued to stare at his prize until he heard a tap sound.


Gorm turned around in time to see a theron guard and evaded an attempt for a knife attack to strike down on his Chest. Gorm slides his leg and knocks over the attacker to the ground.


"Did you actually think I'll be that naive to not notice your foolish attack!" gorm growled


The Theron leaped back on his feet and growled at him


"Attack!" it cried, assuming to be the leader


Above gorm, seven other Theron warriors dropped down from their hiding spots behind the banners. Gorm saw each one landing exactly around him as if as plan. He looks at each of the assassins hell-bent in attacking him. He knew that he would have been surrounded.


"If you wish to take my head," gorm said calmly spreading out his arms "I welcome you to try!"


One of the Theron charged at him, only to be stroke down by a hit on his head. Another Theron tried his luck in using it comrade's attack, but fail in receiving an elbow attack to the gut, sending him slide across the floor crashing into wall.


"Come now, is that the best you have to wager!" gorm mocked


Two others ran towards gorm from both sides, surprising gorm when both Therons grab his arm and tried to hold them done by pulling. Then another one stood in front of them and began to strike him down with each blow of its fists. Little did they know that attempt would be the done-fall!


"Pathetic!" gorm growled


He pulled the two in with a forceful tug and grabbed both of their chest plates, pulling them towards the attacker, crushing all three by gorm's strength. The three fell to the floor, unconscious.


"If you were to hold down an opponent, be correct that your opponent is immobilized!" he told


When gorm's back was turned, the leader ran behind him and dives kick gorm's back, causing him to stumble forward. The other Theron left standing ran towards him and sucker punched him dead center on his head. Gorm leaned back from the impact and began to fall.


"Yes!" it hiss victoriously


As gorm leaned back, he suddenly stopped halfway causing the Theron to be confused. For a moment or two, no one moved from their place, waiting to see what's next to happen. Suddenly, gorm gave a kick to the Theron its side.  Groaned in pain, the Theron fell to his knees and clenched it side. The Theron looked up to find gorm staring over him.


"by the worms, am I fighting warriors or younglings," he groaned as he knelt down In front of the down Theron" do not be overconfident, over you will fail!"


The Theron leader growled and ran towards gorm while he was occupied with its comrade. Gorm turned in time to block its punch, then kick then sucker punch towards his face.


"You are fast, young one!" he complimented


The Theron throw another punch heading towards his chest, but wasn't expecting gorm to take the punch. The Theron hissed as he pulled back and messaged his fist.


"But you lack in strength!"


Gorm then brought his leg up, planting it on the Theron's chest and dragged to the floor with a fluidly like spin. The Theron land with a thump then was push even further to the ground, relinquishing any resistance to escape gorm strength.


"Damn you!" it hiss


Gorm chuckled from his amusement as he put more pressure on the Theron's chest, causing even more and more pain.


"Now," he said catching the attacker's attention "who are you and why dare attack me, or I'll crush you to dust!"


Suddenly, clapping can be heard that was coming from behind gorm. Gorm stopped his torment towards the theron and turned around. Gorm eye became wide when he saw what was making the clapping. For the one that was clapping was none other than queen myrrah.


"Well done, gorm." she congratulated "although I would not be pleased to have fresh blood in my Thorne."


Gorm quickly let the Theron go and knelt down in front of the queen.


"Yes my queen, forgive me!" he pleaded


The queen turned and walk towards her throne to sit on. Once she sat down, she leaned back in her throne and smiled.


"It is all well, my general. It is good to see you again as well."


"As am I my queen!"


She waves her hand towards her and said "how did you like my new fraction I have gathered?"

Gorm lifted his head up and tilted his head in confusion.

"New fraction?" he questioned


The queen nodded and motion for him to turn. Gorm stood up then turned around to see the Theron guards help up their almost conscious comrade from the wall and their down leader.


"What do you think gorm?" she asked


"They are organized in battles and are skilled in ambush, but it would seem they lack in strength." he told


"well, what do you expect when they are up against one of the most powerful warriors i have leading my army, general." she answered


"oh, that would be the caused." he chuckled


Myrrah nodded in confirmation and motion for the group to step up, which they followed.


"I planned for this matter to test how strong they are against a powerful opponent, like yourself." she explained

She frowned towards the group, causing them to look away from her gaze in shame.

"But I see it was nowhere close to successes!"


"I see."


Gorm then walked towards the group, making them stand tall for him. Gorm stood in front of the group, carefully looking over at each Theron. He then notices the difference of their armor. Each Theron had black color instead of crimson red; also they had red marking on their armor assuming their rank. Finally each one had the same helmet with a v on them. Gorm then turned to the queen and gave her a confused look.


"What types of warriors are these, my queen?"He asked


The queen smirked as she stood up from her throne and walked towards them.


"These, my general, are the soulkillers!"She spoke proudly


"Soulkillers?" gorm questioned


"Yes, these are the most skilled and the most talented in warfare."

Gorm stared at her for a moment before looking at each "soulkiller". He looked at the first on in his sights then pointed at him.

"You!" gorm ordered

The warrior was confused at first, for he looked around before he pointed at himself.

"Me?"

Gorm rolled his eyes as the queen made a small chuckle.


"No, I am speaking to the warrior behind you, OF COURSE YOU!" he yelled


The soulkiller seemed to be displeased by the generals order and clenched his fist.Gorm notice the clenching fist and tilted his head.


"is your mind troubled with thoughts, youngling?" he asked


"many thoughts dowel in my mind." he growled under his breath


"What is your name and who are you followers!" he ordered, seeing as hakar seemed to calm his mind and exhaled in peace.


The leader nodded his head then said "my name is hakar!"


He then move to the first soulkiller and presented him.


"This is onwa; he is my 2nd in command also excellent in rough situations." Hakar told  


Onwa stepped up and bowed to Gorm.


"It is an honor to finally meet you, general!" he announced


Gorm leaned back and crossed his arms, give an intimidating stance.


"Mm hmm." he hummed


Onwa stood their confused until Hakar patted his shoulder and lead him back to the group.


*he is merely studying us brother, take no heed, even though he is blinded by nonsense* hakar explained


"blinded you say?"


hakar and onwa stopped in their tracks as they heard gorm's voice. they turned to see gorm's arms crossed and his right foot taping impatiently.


"well if i were blind," he said walking towards the two in a slowly pace "you would have at least taken me to my knees if i was, correct?"


hakar stood up straight and held his ground though gorm's death glare.


"you may be strong, general, but if it were a real battle and not a test," hakar hissed as he stared up at gorm (which gorm was 1 foot taller than hakar) as gorm stared down at him "we would of made...you...BEG!"


soon the room became silent, not one sound or movment was made towards the two for  5 long minutes.suddenly, gorm started to chuckle, then became laughter. hakar then be came uncomfortable by his position until gorm placed a hand on his shoulder.


"well done, young one, spoken like a true warrior! ha ha!" he cheered


hakar felt confused at the time then began to smile and bowed his head.


"thank you, general." he acknowledged


"now, show me the rest of your group." Gorm told


Hakar nodded in response and resume his place in the group. he moved to the next soulkiller and placed a hand on his shoulder.


"This is sauvix, our comrades healer and has incredible knowledge of the humans!" hakar presented


Gorm grew interest when human came it to line. He wanted to know what humans are but was too busy getting information from this squad so he nodded his head and wave his hand to continue.


Later on, as hakar introduced the rest of the soulkillers. Haar, revix, leega and lehrak were introduced as weapons specialist and an expert torak bow shooter. Gorm had interest in this faction, but all change when he remembered why he needed to know all about these warriors. Hakar stood by the last soul killer in the group.


"And finally taus, he is our scout and our talented longshot expert." hakar finished


The one named taus stood proud as his named was presented to a great warrior and general. But gorm had a scolding look on his face as he saw taus. Gorm started to walk towards the group, making them tense up as he approached them. Gorm continued his stride until he was looking down on taus. For taus, he became a bit uncomfortable under gorms stare but hidden it under his blank, emotional face.


"Do you claim to have impressive talents?" he asked


Taus nodded his head "general, I do not claim to have impressive talents, I do have impressive talents!" he announced


The group began to tense up as their comrade spoke boldly. the group, as well as the queen, waited for gorm's response. Gorm stood there for a long and suspenseful moment until he placed a hand on taus head.


"You are confident, good, that is well in the battlefield. Don't over step your talent's for it will be you downfall...umm." gorm said before hesitating for a moment "What was your name again?"


The queen giggled and the others chuckled under their breaths. Taus stood there in the moment and rubbed the back of his neck.


"It Taus, general."


"Ah yes, yes, thank you." gorm thanked


Suddenly the queen cleared her throat, grabbing everyone's attention towards her.


"Well this enjoyable event of time, but sadly I must prepare for important matters." The queen told


She then turned towards the soulkillers, give them a small smile.


"Thank you for your time of moment, but it is time for you to leave." she said


The group bowed their heads and head out the large door. Once the soulkillers have left the room, the queen then turned to gorm with mischief written on her face.


"Now...shall we discuss why I brought you here?" she asked, as she started walking to the doors behind the throne


Gorm nodded his head a followed the queen.


"I will follow where you lead me, my queen!"
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Comments: 11

Soundwave04 [2012-08-16 12:14:29 +0000 UTC]

"The thorn room had"

Missed out the "e" there.

on center flooring laid

Not sure what that's meant to say: on the centre flooring laid?

"Ah, I home." gorm sighed

Ah, I am home

Thus it was displayed a podium

displayed on a podium

it was one of many of gorm achievements

Sounds like the sentence got a bit muddled here - it was one of gorm's many achievements - might be clearer.

Oh god, I'm going to commit seppuku after talking about this next bit, because I'll feel like a massive d*che that just ruined all your hard work.

"Yes, they do need more training but each has their own talent, gorm." she answered

"Yes, these are the most skilled and the most talented in warfare."

Myyrah is contradicting herself here, one minute she's saying "they need more training! They are weak!" then out of nowhere she's saying "they are the best of the best! Nothing gets by them!"

Also, for the SK's to be this inexperienced - we'd need to go further back... like, back to only moments after E-Day. Because back then, they were just a rag-tag militia that were showing potential, but needed a little more of a push. By the time Leega, Lehrak and Taus are around, the Soul Killers are the swift, elite soldiers they are today. So they wouldn't need any more training (unless a newcomer or Neophyte had joined)

The soulkiller flinched in fear them hastily moved forward in front of gorm.

A bit out of character for Hakar, because even when he was a young'un, he was that kind of "you don't tell me what to do" anti-social so-n-so. Hell, he'd even stand up to RAAM without flinching. Just giving you the heads up about that.

For taus his pride quickly disappeared into worry and fear.

Same with Taus, while he would be a little more cautious, he wouldn't outright become petrified.

It's my fault really, I never uploaded Ascension of the Reaper, which was a a prequel that covered the past of the Soul Killers, that probably would have helped out a lot more. Plus, I'm very - defensive - about my Soul Killers and how they're done.

Man, I really do feel bad. I feel like I just tore you to shreds there.

P.S - Mr Gorm, ever heard of a Soul Killer cleanup sight? There are so many dead Gears you'd be able to build a small house out of the corpses.

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killcode709 In reply to Soundwave04 [2012-08-19 00:23:18 +0000 UTC]

sorry to have this written since for the past 2 days, but i needed to clear my mind. there was two reasons why i didn't response so soon.


one , i felt terrible when i read this comment, i look over my ch and i felt like an idiot, i bagged my head to a wall and i put most of my frustrations to my pillow (r.i.p fluffy *sniff**sob*)

two, was that i needed to relax and to calm down. i almost wanted to give up on writing this when i wrote this. i felt like a failure and i can't fix it. the first few checks were decent but when i read your comment...you no what i'm getting sidetrack. okay, so after that i spent the last to days hangout with a couple of my friends and most of it for sleeping. now i'm better and i can take anything. to insure in not to become a failure, i decided, with your permission, i would send you a message containing my latest ch and you will check it and fix what ever it needs fixing... so yeah and another-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH

*GETS PUSH OFF CP*

gorm: FOR WORM'S SAKE YOU TALK TO MUCH! anyway, as for the cleanup sight i was the one that organized it after the event, i had no mind that it was the soulkiller for they did not become any interest to me while i was on the battlefield. so i did know of it and i was the one to plan it, if any other says it was false well...that, is for another time my friends. *grins evilly*

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Soundwave04 In reply to killcode709 [2012-08-19 11:26:47 +0000 UTC]

It's probably good you went out with some friends, take your mind off of things and have a good time!

If you want to send me a revised version, I can take a look at it.

Me: Gorm! We were talking!

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killcode709 In reply to Soundwave04 [2012-08-19 17:44:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you, and again im sorry for messing up.


i'm glad that you see this way, i send the next ch when i'm done.


gorm: You asked me a question and i answered it. *get hit in the head with a bat* aaaaaaggggghhhhhh!


me: *gripping the bat* HOW MANY TIME DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU, ASK BEFORE SHOVING ME OF THE COMPUTER!

gorm: LOWLY HUMAN, YOU DARE STRIKE AT THE GENERAL OF THE LOCUST HORDE! *DODGES ANOTHER SWING*

me: I F&%$#@G MADE YOU! I CAN HURT YOU HOW EVER I WANT!

gorm: THAT'S IT!

*begins fighting in dust cloud*

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Soundwave04 In reply to killcode709 [2012-08-19 20:54:53 +0000 UTC]

Just throwing this out as an idea, you don't have to follow it, but you could have it the group that attack Gorm are some hothead Therons that think they have what it takes to be SK's. So Hakar and Myrrah set up the "test" and have them ambush Gorm. Gorm easily defeats the Therons and Hakar, unimpressed, tells the Therons to get lost. That's when Gorm asks Myrrah what's going on, and she introduces him to The Soul Killers. Gorm and the SK's could be on a friendly note here as well.

Again, just an idea, that's all.

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killcode709 In reply to Soundwave04 [2012-08-19 21:52:18 +0000 UTC]

that good i'll only use myyrah to say sk to help gorm *not telling you what there plan is!* but i want to have an only one time appears for all of my favorite writers( you, stone,and dark) characters for this act story first then later on i'll slowly put in one group from the writers stories and into a crisscross of the story, oh and the reason for the sk and the other groups of gears and locust not knowing them...well that my friend is another story to be told.

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TeaDarkA [2012-08-16 01:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Madison: you... mean you're the one who train...THE SOULKILLERS holly shit.

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killcode709 In reply to TeaDarkA [2012-08-16 02:06:33 +0000 UTC]

gorm: not exactly, i was only advising the soulkillers after they failed to attack me. i left the soulkillers to a more...experience teacher, plus i had no time for training the group. someone that have taught me in the way of the warrior!

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TeaDarkA In reply to killcode709 [2012-11-24 00:06:10 +0000 UTC]

at last you are lucky to have been able to talk with theme

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TeaDarkA In reply to killcode709 [2012-11-24 00:04:55 +0000 UTC]

well, at last you are lucky to have been able to talk with theme

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killcode709 In reply to killcode709 [2012-08-16 02:11:22 +0000 UTC]

also here you get a cookie

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