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Published: 2009-05-06 11:43:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1499; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 10
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Description This is for create a Rival for Purity

Jeta The Hedgehog - Purity's Rival
Age: 19
Likes: Herself, make up, Jewels, money and getting her own way.
Tools of the trade: Extreme gear hover board, Climbing spikes for mountains. Light gloves (give off a light source from gloves for dark places like caves)


Well Jeta is a hot headed, self obsessed snob.
She is attractive and knows it using it to her full advantage.
She is a Jewel Thief like Rouge and was originally Rouges number 1 rival and threat when coming to jewels, she also enjoys the finer things in life, Living off daddys Wealth.
Originally from Great britain she has a strong london Cockney accent. Look on youtube ^^

Jeta and Purity met by accident while Purity and Rouge were hunting for the Chaos emeralds. Rouge and Jeta did there usual cattyness between one another. Then out of the blue Purity came out with " Whats the problem me old ducky?" With a huge grin on her face. One thing above all Jeta hates People taking the mick out of her accent. She turned sharply to face Purity with a face like thunder, She snarled and turned to her Hover board. "You BEST!!! stay out my way hedgehog!!!!" She snapped
Purity and Rouge were left dumb struck by it all and carried on their search.

Not knowing to them Jeta decided to follow them and soon learnt of there search for the Emeralds and took it upon herself to get them before Rouge and more importantly Purity. To get back at them and have the very thing they desire.

The idea of this pic is Jeta pushing her way past purity after collecting one of the Chaos Emeralds (blue thats why the light source) and being all smug


Jeta (c) ME!
Purity (c) Becky

Jeta's colour sheme [link]
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Comments: 37

The-BB [2009-05-08 15:08:57 +0000 UTC]

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This is really good!
The character you've come up with is great, both visually and her personality. She'd definately make a strong rival for Purity.
The colouring and shading is really clear - you get the feeling of the light source coming from the chaos emerald. I also like the glowy effects on Jeta's boots and gloves. The poses are good, and you can clealy see the interaction between the two. Nice job on the background e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
Good luck with the contest - this deserves to be in the top 3. Hope Bex likes it!
PS: Jeta's outfit looks really hot e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
Bye then!

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OniYoi [2009-06-21 03:12:16 +0000 UTC]

cool nicely done ^^

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killer4 In reply to OniYoi [2009-06-23 18:58:15 +0000 UTC]

means alot thank you lol

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OniYoi In reply to killer4 [2009-06-23 22:57:37 +0000 UTC]

aw np ^^

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IronKerberos [2009-05-11 21:43:31 +0000 UTC]

Amazing design and good story for her! =3 Good luck in the contest! >w<

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killer4 In reply to IronKerberos [2009-05-11 21:49:18 +0000 UTC]

awwww thank ya so much buddy glad ya like it and yeah fingers crossed ^^

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IronKerberos In reply to killer4 [2009-05-11 21:55:58 +0000 UTC]

*crosses fingers* >3<

no prob.^^

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Areiv [2009-05-09 21:21:45 +0000 UTC]

I think it's a great idea and character, but doesn't she have to be an idiot?

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killer4 In reply to Areiv [2009-05-10 08:52:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks alot and well shes not stupid but then again she isn't to brainy ^^ wanna give purity a little bit of a challenge ^^

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Rhapsody13 In reply to Areiv [2009-05-09 23:58:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah XD That's how contest entries go, we gotta bend to the contests will a little bit

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RaptorRex [2009-05-09 10:53:12 +0000 UTC]

I think you need to work seriously on your anatomy and basic drawing skills before you progress onto actual colour. The heads are too wide, the boobs are gravity-defying. Personally, i hate the whole furry thing because of the awful anatomy.

Secondly, the colouring is tacky and kind of ugly. Try not to use the dodge and burn tools and try to make more gradual tone changes. It just looks too stark.

Finally, to end on a better note, i can see the potential. I think that if you follow a few tutorials, concentrate more and study the human body some more, you could become a very good artist. You don't lack imagination when it comes to clothing, and i think that you should retain that for later when you get better.


Good luck.

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killer4 In reply to RaptorRex [2009-05-09 19:27:46 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you for the comment, its nice to get some feedback on my work.
I agree and disagree with what you have said. I always strive to better my skills but sonic art isn't always anatomically correct by design and sorry to say I do like drawing huge boobs *holds head in shame*
but I have done life drawing and do still work on my drawing skills, and would mean alot to me if you took a look in my gallery, I have a real passion for the human figure and Love manga.

for me my main thing I feel needs improvement is my colouring and I've looked around at alot of tutorials and really I'm trying to find myself and my style.

but thank you about my imagination and I'm glad you like my ideas that truely means alot and don't get me wrong I will always need to improve on my drawing skills and everything else but then again who doesn't ???

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RaptorRex In reply to killer4 [2009-05-09 22:55:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes yes, there is ALWAYS room for improvement. I do agree completely. I'm afraid I'm not a massive fan of the manga style. I'm actually trying to wean myself away from it to study realism.

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killer4 In reply to RaptorRex [2009-05-09 23:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Well thats cool we are all allowed to like our own styles and why not you know? I just fell that you make think differently if you saw some of my other works you know? Thats all

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Michellethefox [2009-05-07 21:16:14 +0000 UTC]

ooh i had no idea you entered! fantastic job on this! i like the description. best of luck in the contest killer

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killer4 In reply to Michellethefox [2009-05-08 10:48:18 +0000 UTC]

yeah wanted to give it ago ^^ and thank you so much glad ya like the little story really means alot YAY!

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Effit [2009-05-06 20:23:43 +0000 UTC]

Great thought out description!

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killer4 In reply to Effit [2009-05-07 13:03:16 +0000 UTC]

yay nice to hear someone reads it ^^ glad ya like it thank you

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Effit In reply to killer4 [2009-05-07 20:13:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh, you're welcome.

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Flame89 [2009-05-06 17:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Interesting character I think she is perfecte rival for her, and of corse good job, nice grass on background

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killer4 In reply to Flame89 [2009-05-07 13:02:59 +0000 UTC]

really thank man thats so nice of you to say ^^ and thanks alot about the background

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blaze6000 [2009-05-06 17:01:26 +0000 UTC]

awesome pic bro & good luck in the contest

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killer4 In reply to blaze6000 [2009-05-07 13:02:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks sis means so much to me you little star ^^

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blaze6000 In reply to killer4 [2009-05-08 15:40:39 +0000 UTC]

your welcome & thank you

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Rhapsody13 [2009-05-06 15:58:15 +0000 UTC]

I love your characters outfit and you got mentioned in the journal as a good example Yay~!
Good luck to us all myu!

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killer4 In reply to Rhapsody13 [2009-05-07 13:02:10 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you that means alot and REALYY!?!? I'll have to look thank you so much for the lovely comment

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Rhapsody13 In reply to killer4 [2009-05-07 17:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Anytime hun ^_^

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Wolfox-of-life [2009-05-06 15:23:08 +0000 UTC]

nice work!

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killer4 In reply to Wolfox-of-life [2009-05-07 13:01:37 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you hun

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Moon-Phantom [2009-05-06 14:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Most interesting and informational.

Looks like a good candidate! Good luck.

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killer4 In reply to Moon-Phantom [2009-05-07 13:01:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks alot ^^ glad ya hope it interesting ^^ yay lol

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RecklessKaiser [2009-05-06 12:28:57 +0000 UTC]

That's a very kick a$$ character, I love how she came up.

Good luck at the contest dude!

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killer4 In reply to RecklessKaiser [2009-05-07 13:00:51 +0000 UTC]

really thanks man ^^ I just wanted to try something a bit different ^^

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RecklessKaiser In reply to killer4 [2009-05-07 14:13:56 +0000 UTC]

Yush, you did great really! >w< Keep the good work!

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AnnietheGreenKitty [2009-05-06 11:45:30 +0000 UTC]

it looks really great ^-^
good luck in the contest hun

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killer4 In reply to AnnietheGreenKitty [2009-05-07 13:00:16 +0000 UTC]

oh bless ya hun thanks alot

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AnnietheGreenKitty In reply to killer4 [2009-05-07 13:28:02 +0000 UTC]

welcome ; 3

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