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Kinthinia — Reaper by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-09-06 00:23:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 162; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description That piece of fabric flaps in the wind,
The only warning that he descends,
That he rides his black horse into town.

But maybe the scream of the banshee,
Or the washerwoman's reflection
Was what warned the one destined to die,
That the reaper was on his trail.

He keeps his hellhounds at his side,
Leashed on a chain of blue fire -
Which some call hellfire,
But the name isn't what matters here.

Try to run or hide
His hounds shall sniff out their quarry,
And rip it to shreds,
Dragging it screaming if not dead,
Back to their master.

Master of the grave and death,
He is the reaper,
With death in his hand.
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Comments: 28

TransientBANG [2010-09-07 02:54:19 +0000 UTC]

Is this based on a story or will a story be based on these ideas?

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Kinthinia In reply to TransientBANG [2010-09-07 03:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Uhh... not reaaaally.
Loosely yes I suppose.
My main character ends up being called the Reaper and works for the villain in the story I'm writing but... I don't know precisely what the Reaper's job IS so....

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TransientBANG In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-09 00:44:30 +0000 UTC]

How long is said story presently?
Must reap something, ahahaha! Souls, lives... organs.

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Kinthinia In reply to TransientBANG [2010-09-09 05:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Right now? 1,072 words
Between this, the script and the fanfiction... My script gets priority

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TransientBANG In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-12 20:09:42 +0000 UTC]

How many stories have you abandoned in-between?

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Kinthinia In reply to TransientBANG [2010-09-15 23:38:33 +0000 UTC]

None. This is allI'm working on. I spent the summer working on RIT. I haven't abandonned any... that I can think of at least...

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RatofSpring [2010-09-06 20:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh ho ho, how exciting!!

question: how does a reflection warn a person? "Or the washerwoman's reflection Was what warned the one destined to die"

Other than that, I love it Ilike the last two stanzas

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Kinthinia In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-06 20:18:34 +0000 UTC]

When the washerwoman is washing, you see a reflection of yourself and you know you're going to die. She's a death omen

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RatofSpring In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-06 20:22:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh O_o I've never heard that one, neat.

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Kinthinia In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-06 20:27:18 +0000 UTC]

I figured it was probably a little uneard of haha so I tied in the banshee to hopefully help out with that. ^^ It's fascinating stuff to me

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RatofSpring In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-06 20:50:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it is pretty interesting

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Kinthinia In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-06 21:14:01 +0000 UTC]

I cannot wait until I can progress my most recent story -you know what? I'm gonna delete what I have and start over.

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RatofSpring In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-06 21:21:27 +0000 UTC]

O_o

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Kinthinia In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-06 23:41:38 +0000 UTC]

What...? I'm at a part that I'm stuck at... Not even three pages in. I'll introduce the characters differently and go with what I know I going to do rather than trying to skirt around it and reveal later. It's jus pointless that way.

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RatofSpring In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-07 00:11:09 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like a good idea, actually..

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Kinthinia In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-07 01:11:20 +0000 UTC]

I was originally thinking that I would introduce the concept after the first chapter, but that's made everything really difficult. So I'll just start with the concept idea being there. "Monsters exist, we've been raised to kill them, and that's our school life" Then to expand to "hey this prhecy says the world will end" and to save it with the main character going darkside so he villain's awesomeness and past can be explained

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RatofSpring In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-07 22:10:52 +0000 UTC]

fun

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Kinthinia In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-08 21:12:54 +0000 UTC]

Very It's going much smoother now

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RatofSpring In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-08 22:50:23 +0000 UTC]

Great to hear

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Kinthinia In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-08 23:43:29 +0000 UTC]

Rahhhh!
I don't want to study demons anymore. My head's bursting with monsters and names and names and what they do and who they are and their rival nd their days... Ugh
That's what I'm researching for a script atm

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RatofSpring In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-09 23:27:17 +0000 UTC]

My head is full of my OCs =w=

Maybe you should try writing it down. like character bios or something.

Name:
Description:
Rival:
etc. etc.

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Kinthinia In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-09 23:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Demon: Berith
Title: Great Duke of Hell
Legions: 26
Powers: Turn all metal gold, suggest murder, tell of past present and future, give and confirm dignities to men
Appearence: Soldier in red, gold crown, rides a horse, red s
Punishes: Rudeness
Summoning: Involves ring and direction + circle, involving incantations
Removing: Complex incantation + pentagram
Adversary: St. Barnabus (apparently...)
Purpose: To punish rudeness
Summoned for: Attaining True Will

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RatofSpring In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-10 00:13:52 +0000 UTC]

interesting...

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Kinthinia In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-10 00:24:06 +0000 UTC]

I would hope so... I spent ALL YESTERDAY researching the 72 demons of Goetia. He is the twnty-ninth. Very very difficult.

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RatofSpring In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-10 00:32:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow O_o that's crazy.... And this is all for a book?

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Kinthinia In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-11 01:58:20 +0000 UTC]

A script. Yes. That's not including the demon books, summoning rituals and stuff pertaining to the True Will that I spent researching either or the ring/disk of Solomon that I had to read about as well in order to understand WHY those 72 demons are summoned and HOW to summon them. Not that I personally wanted to know all that much but it kinda ended up happening that way

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RatofSpring In reply to Kinthinia [2010-09-11 16:07:57 +0000 UTC]

O_o

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Kinthinia In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-15 23:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...

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