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Description Silverpelt and the First Cat
"But," Firepaw scrunched up his brow, "what is Silverpelt anyhow?" Beside him, Greypaw sighed, the deep, tired sigh of someone who didn't know where to start explaining. 
But it was Halftail who answered. "No, young apprentice, you ask the wrong question. You mean; who is Silverpelt?"
Firepaw's eyes blinked in confusion at this twist, and Greypaw burst in before he could ask what he meant: "But, Halftail, didn't grandpa ban that story?"
"Thistlestar did?" the ruddy apprentice looked between the elders and his friend, clinging desperately to the topic lest he lose what little understanding of it he had.
Greypaw only nodded, but Halftail snorted, none too elegantly either. On his flank, One-eye murmured something, but only snuggled closer to her mate.
"Bah, mayhap he did," the scarred old tom muttered, "but I'm not afraid of our honourable leader's reprimand."
"You're not?" Greypaw meowed, yellow eyes wide, like the very idea that his grandfather did not incite fear in everyone was somehow beyond comprehension.
"You forget my age, Greypaw," Halftail said amusedly, "I slayed foxes before your grandsire even left his den. To me he will only ever be a kit. How could that ever inspire fear in me?" Now this comment made One-eye chuckle at his side.
"I suppose so," Greypaw nodded, the apprehension in his eyes exchanged for awe. Firepaw inclined his head in agreement. Although the thought of Thistlestar as anything but the towering, unforgiving tom that he was was nearly too difficult to imagine, the apprentice figured he understood Halftail's sentiment. 
"Now then, are you still interested in hearing my story, Firepaw?" the elder turned his head, amused amber eyes gliding over him. Firepaw nodded again.
"I'll warn you now," he began, sounding much more serious, "that if you want to be diplomatic, don't bring this tale up at Gatherings - that is, especially if you sit with WindClan."
"Why's that?" Firepaw shot in, unable to restrain himself; he threw his eyes to the ground in shame for a moment, but looked back up upon hearing One-eye chuckle again. "Tell him, Sparrowpelt, no need for your dramatics," the pale she-cat purred, sounding as drowsy as she looked. She didn't even raise her head, only nudged her mate in the side.
Halftail's eyes gleamed with mirth. "Sensibilities," he declared with a snort. "WindClan accepts no lore that touches on Silverpelt or StarClan without a fight, raising their hackles like our old tales are insults flung in their faces. Mousebrains, the lot of them."
"Oh." Firepaw couldn't quite keep the surprise out of his voice, but turning his face to glance at his friend, found that Greypaw was nodding along with a sagely expression; while he didn't truly buy into his expression - Greypaw was too much of a jester to adopt such a look as if he meant it - his agreement in and of itself told Firepaw all he needed to know. This was something he too needed to learn, if he was to get along with the other Clans.
"Ahem, now for the story itself," Halftail started anew, drawing his paws close to his chest. "Long before the Clans existed, and Silverpelt was yet young and lonely, she fell in love. As a spirit whose duty it was to raise the moon high every night, she could not descend to the ground to be with the one she loved, but, upon hearing of her feelings, the tom who had captured her heart journeyed far and wide, until he found a mountain tall enough to take him into the skies. Once there, this tomcat declared he wished to know Silverpelt, wished to see her, speak with her. He too, had found his heart drawn to this faraway spirit. And Silverpelt answered his plea, landing onto the mountain peak, and the two were happy."
Halftail stalled, coughed once, and resumed again, his tone now less dreamy. "However, not all were happy at their union. Silverpelt had a brother, who raised the sun every day, and he looked upon their love with disdain. 'Intolerable', her brother said, 'that she should so neglect her duties for the sake of a mortal cat. I cannot agree with this.' And true to his word, Silverpelt's brother decided to express his disdain, and pulled the sun away from the mountain on which the two mates resided. It grew cold and terribly dark, and Silverpelt wondered what had happened, and left to ask her brother. Summoned by her, her brother told her to stop descending to the ground, and to resume her duty to the moon. Silverpelt wished to say no, but she knew as well as he that her happiness could not last, and so finally agreed - on the premise that she was allowed to spend two more moons with her love, and then leave him for ever. Her brother agreed, because while he was harsh, he was not cruel."
"I know what happens next!" Greypaw puffed in exitement, but was swiftly shut up by the look Halftail graced him with.
"Then do you wish to continue the story?"
"Uh... no. Sorry, Halftail."
"Very good." Now, Silverpelt was very wise in asking. While she had surrendered herself to the fact their love could not last the same way her existence did, she was not resigned to the thought of a lonesome eternity anymore, now she had had a taste of companionship. Unbeknownst to her brother, she secured the ties between herself and her mate forever; she bore him kits."
Firepaw's eyes widened. Kits? With a spirit? How did that even work?
"Their union produced four kits, all of which had spiritual ties to Silverpelt. After they were born, she gave them to her mate, asking him to hide them in his home, and then left for the skies again, never to return. Her brother again shone the sun upon the ground, believing he had properly chastised his troublesome little sister, unaware that the ties she had secured with the mortals would be one so strong, not even death could sever. Moons later, the first of her children died a mortal death; however, from the cat's body now rose a spirit, and it was beckoned to the skies. The night skies of Silverpelt, previously dark save the glow of her moon, suddenly held a new, smaller light. A star. The first star. Silverpelt had fooled her brother; on agreeing never to grace the ground again, she ensured she never truly had to, by beckoning her children back to her upon death. She would never be lonely again. And the essence she had granted her children were passed down from one generation to the next, filling the sky with stars. And even now, ages later, Silverpelt still beckons, asking us to come home when our mortal time is up. This is why a true warrior does not fear death, Firepaw, for death is not the end; it is home."
"Wow," Firepaw breathed in response, awed by the remark. 
"Indeed," the elder declared. "Although the tale is, as I said before, not universally accepted. It's only us, and RiverClan, who swear by this tale. WindClan calls it blasphemy, and a story where no drop of blood is spilt doesn't interest any ShadowClan cat I have ever met, simpletons that they are."
"So why do RiverClan like it so much?" 
"Well duh!" Greypaw declared with a loud meow. "The stories say Silverpelt was the most beautiful silver she-cat ever to exist. RiverClan's stroking their own egos!"
At least that was how Greypaw saw it. Firepaw figured it couldn't be too far from the mark.
Okay now we're done, and if I have to look at this goddamn picture one more time in my life it'll be too soon. //weeps

Key notes: Greypaw refers to Thistleclaw/star as his grandfather because this verse has him a son of Whitestorm and Willowpelt. Other than that, the myth about Silverpelt and stuff, well I kinda made that up on the spot yesterday. x3

!! Also I wasn't able to share the tidbit about Silverpelt's brother not being named cuz I wasn't able to just weave it in, but the idea is that no descendant of Silverpelt ought to name their sun-bearing kin by name unless they wish to know his divine punishment, and since the initial stories began to withhold his name, now there aren't any cats around who even remember what it was LOL

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KittyStorage In reply to ??? [2018-06-01 11:56:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, that makes me very happy. :3

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AstarGoldenwing [2018-04-02 20:15:27 +0000 UTC]

That's an interesting story, though I'd say that Halftail and One-eye's mannerisms were as amusing as the story itself. You crafted such beautiful images of Silverpelt and her brother, I love the symbolism woven into it, and Silverpelt looks pretty motherly.  So the Clans actually consider themselves to be descendants of Silverpelt herself? But doesn't it also imply that cats that weren't born in the Clans, like Firestar or Boulder or Millie wouldn't be able to enter StarClan, since they don't have Silverpelt's blood?

Another little question - if Greystripe is the son of Whitestorm and Willowpelt in your verse, who are the parents of Darkstripe? Is he still Willowpelt's son in this version or does he have completely different parents?

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KittyStorage In reply to AstarGoldenwing [2018-04-03 00:38:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I'm really pleased to hear it - and that you found Halftail and One-eye's small gestures just as entertaining hehe, they kinda begged to be given a lil' bit of attention. 
Yeah that's the idea, the most die-hard faithful consider themselves the descendants of Silverpelt, which indeed does add to the conflict regarding non-clan cats, cuz why would they want to grant a spot to them?? They've no connection to them trololo. At least that's how they see it - ShadowClan doesn't follow up on this part of lore so they're more chill about outside recruitment (tho they do prefer rogues to housecats, they're prejudiced like that lol) and as for WindClan... to them it's blasphemy to grant such "mortal" thoughts and behaviour to Silverpelt, they think the story of how an immortal could "fall in love" to be utterly ridiculous. So they don't perceive themselves as Silverpelt's children in the direct sense of the word like RiverClan and ThunderClan do, but rather the... favoured? A favoured piece of Silverpelt's creation or something, any idea that keeps her a completely separate entity to them honestly. They worship her like a mother, without necessarily turning her into one if that makes sense. x3

And oh yes, as for Darkstripe he keeps his original parentage. Tawnyspots still died early (tho he's not nearly as old in this AU as in canon tho, but he's still struck with a terminal illness) so Dark more or less grew up with Whitestorm for a step-father, tho he's not in the least bit grateful for it.

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WildnessInTheWind [2018-03-27 23:17:54 +0000 UTC]

This is such an amazing story, and the visual is amazing! Your creativity never ceases to amaze me

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KittyStorage In reply to WildnessInTheWind [2018-04-01 22:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, truly it means a lot that you think so!

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Twistedfoot [2018-03-27 22:37:12 +0000 UTC]

I love this lore! Though now I keep wondering on names for the brother haha... Goldenfur? To compliment Silverpelt? Haha

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KittyStorage In reply to Twistedfoot [2018-04-01 22:53:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And yeah you and me both seems I meant it when I wrote that his name's been forgotten cuzh I've no clue LOL

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Scaredstiff [2018-03-26 16:07:02 +0000 UTC]

This would make very good foreshadowing for Graystripe and Silverstream~ 

The story is well composed for only just pulling it out of the hat! If only the Erins put such care into the lore.

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KittyStorage In reply to Scaredstiff [2018-03-26 23:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Good point, now that you mentioned it, aww. And thank you very much, that's really nice to hear!

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silver-birch-juice [2018-03-26 15:55:58 +0000 UTC]

Your writing is absolutely splendid!! I was SO immersed in this lovely story, honestly, I even thought it was cannon before I read the rest of the description.
And the characters' designs are lovely as always

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KittyStorage In reply to silver-birch-juice [2018-03-26 23:46:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ever so much, I'm so glad you think so! <3 I admit the story made me nervous about submitting the piece but now I find I'm happy I did, hehe~

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Amberstorm233 [2018-03-26 04:37:56 +0000 UTC]

Ahh I just loved this entire thing? Seriously it was a great read and adds a nice bit of lore to the entire thing too. Love the picture as well and judging by your comments at the end there it seems it must've taken you forever to do it. But the work is quite lovely.

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KittyStorage In reply to Amberstorm233 [2018-03-26 13:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Ehehe now that makes me even more happy, thanks! Considering I pulled the story out of a hat I admit I'm kinda pleased too, if I may be so bold. And yeah trust me, the picture was a goddarn nightmate. That, or my long-standing relationship with Paint tool SAI is beginning to crumble...

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Amberstorm233 In reply to KittyStorage [2018-04-07 21:06:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Honestly for doing that it's a great legend and really adds a nice piece of world building to the world. Ugh that sounds awful and sorry that happened. But there are at least other paint programs out there too~

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KittyStorage In reply to Amberstorm233 [2018-04-07 22:27:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again, I'm pleased. Now that I made this story it also came in handy cuz I realized I could make Silverpelt more of a powerful entity in their world, one who can pull strings from afar now and again - mainly so that StarClan, while powerful, isn't ALL-powerful - they still have to bend knee to their Maker and Mother, hehe.
Yeah it sucked, SAI's always been easy to work with for me but now it seems said easiness have turned on me and made me find it... primitive instead lol. But yeah the drawing software market is like super-big and I tested out a whole lot of different ones (Photoshop and Krita killed by computer with lag, Sketchbook's too simple, and the fourth one I don't even remember lol) but now I've settled on Clip Studio Pro. It was actually Laika's recommendation, so I've her to thank for this too~ <3

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Amberstorm233 In reply to KittyStorage [2018-04-07 22:40:50 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Oh and that's so true! So much more of the magical elements can be used and explained with Silverpelt and her brother. I also like your interpretation of her. For me for instance I always thought that Silverpelt was simply the night sky whereas you interpreted it as her raising the moon. That's also a nice idea with StC too. So when Squirrel is granted with milk for her kit(Jay, Holly, Lion)is it more of Silver's/her brother's doing or StC's? Also this thought just occurred to me but what ideas do you have for fading cats? Do they just not fade? Or do they still do then go up with Silver and her brother? Is it something different?
Ofc sometimes the easiest things turn to be the hardest to work with. But at least you found something else! It still looks good and there's no change in your art, still is the same great-looking style as it always has been.

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KittyStorage In reply to Amberstorm233 [2018-04-07 23:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Yisss~ But yeah you and me both, before I used to just think Silverpelt had to be a nickname for the stars, or maybe the Milkyway if I was being specific. It always felt like a tiny bit was missing tho, cuz why bother naming the night sky when it's basically just StarClan you talk about otherwise? So when the idea dropped into my head that maybe Silverpelt actually was someone rather than something I couldn't help let the idea snowball a bit. The moon kinda just joined the ride down, cuz if the stars were the ancestors that was... literally the only thing left in the sky that could indicate Silverpelt herself. xD And since it is traditionally seen as the contrast to the sun, incorporating the siblinghood became much easier, with the brother being the outwardly more dominant part, as reasoned because the sun actually keeps the planet alive. 

That's... actually not a bad idea, maybe Squirrel's prayers were forwarded by her ancestors to Silverpelt herself, and she showed benevolence? Afterall she is the main motherhood representative of their entire culture, and probably a big softie to boot. 

Oh yeah, that one I need to fix up too. I've not really solved the idea of what happens to the dead souls, I mean they can't stick around forever sooner of later StarClan will get crowded. Hmm, maybe something poetic like, instead of outright fading, they just... go back to their beginnings, in other words going back to Silverpelt? So instead of putting it like the "souls fade" it's more like they fall asleep permanently at Silverpelt's belly again, like kits, and since then their cycle has come full circle, they'll be reborn or something? Once they're fully at peace and lulled to sleep by Silverpelt, she'll send them down to the earth again for a new life. 

That's good tho, a real relief to know the essence of my drawings haven't changed despite me changing software! That was initially one of my fears prior to my swap, tbh.

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Amberstorm233 In reply to KittyStorage [2018-04-07 23:55:16 +0000 UTC]

Ah interesting thoughts there and you actually make a good point too…I mean if StarClan is supposed to make up the sky, then what would Silverpelt be? It seems the Erins thought of a cool name they wanted to use but never thought of any rhyme or reason to it. Hey snowballing ideas tend to be the best ideas. Ah really cool! I really love the idea and haring the development of it.

It would work. After all, as you said, Silverpelt is very motherly in the way of what happened with her own kits. And Squirrel herself is trying to help innocent kits and acting like a mother towards them, Silver could grant her the ability to feed them. 

Yeah the fading cats idea is a weird one. Because it just really seems like an idea the Erins came up with on a whim. Ooo I really love that idea! They coexist with at least Silver for a bit before being booted back to the Clans at a second chance at life. It’s very sweet too. As for me I think I may have StarClan/the DF be the plan between “spirit” death and “permanent” death. Spirit death is their ancestor they see. Every cat goes there first death where they’re spirits like Tigerstar or Redtail. Then their second “death” is when they usually fade away or are killed. They end up in a new plane. Not sure if it’ll be like kitty heave/hell or if the cats will have their memories erased(And by erased I mean they remember things like their names and family, but they don’t exactly remember their actions from life or first death nor do they care. So Spottedleaf and Tigerstar would be chillin up together for example) and live in paradise for the rest of their lives. But this may change and perhaps StC/the DF are an ever-expanding place where cats don’t fade and continue to live togheter. Haven’t really decided yet.

Ah well glad to have eased that! I honestly couldn’t tell the difference.

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KittyStorage In reply to Amberstorm233 [2018-04-10 23:07:29 +0000 UTC]

More or less exactly how I thought - Silverpelt herself becomes unnecessary by default, for she represents nothing, embodies nothing, at the end of the day is nothing because StarClan's got dibs on the stars. So yeah I totally believe you that the Erins just made up that word and thought "wow it has to go into their religion somehow" and just left it at that like a gaping wound in their culture that's never addressed. Same as with the so-called LionClan and TigerClan of yore, they're treated the same way. "Supposedly" a deep-rooted part of their beliefs, but at the end of the day, carries no weight and is literally never mentioned again.

I'm glad, I thought so too, considering all the cats by extension are Silverpelt's children then surely her divine mother instincts must kick in no? xD And particularly so because Squirrel was praying for the ability to be a mother in difficult circumstance. Besides it would help mentally, I guess - part of the main plot with the three was about how their very existence was forbidden, unwanted, troublesome - Squirrel would now be able to counter that argument by saying "excuse u but our mother deity blessed me with the ability to rear these kids and you still say the ancestors finds their being alive contrary to their wishes?? don't think so!" The old argument of how they never should've been born doesn't hold much water after that.

Like most other ideas of theirs pfft. Now I'm not much better tbh, most of my AU ideas fall like bricks into my head and I just wing 'em like a crazy person hehe. 
Omg that's the perfect explanation basically yeah the dead cats just go back to their source, and then gets a good kick back for a next life afterall there's no such thing as television in the heavens and Silverpelt needs to pass her days somehow. She can't hoard her descendants forever where's the entertainment in that??
Oooh interesting, redoing it into more of a temporary stage, a sort of limbo. Would better explain how they tend to linger and come back all the time, until something finally sends them away for good, being either rest or getting chased off/killed. But hey all in due time maybe you'll have the answer in the morning already, or maybe not. I mean we're talking layouts of a potential kitty eternity that's not made up in one two three.

Yay! ;w;

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Amberstorm233 In reply to KittyStorage [2018-04-11 03:45:58 +0000 UTC]

Ah that makes complete sense! But yes they had a cool name and didn’t know what to do with it. Just imagine how cool things could’ve been if the Erins actually did something with Silverpelt, the big cat Clans ect. But speaking of which, ah yes LionClan, LeopardClan and TigerClan. Nothing was done with them either. One budding idea I do have with them is there were three siblings/cats/one pair of siblings and a cat who lives in a zoo or with someone who had an exotic privet collection. They were named Lion, Leopard and Tiger or some variation of that (Like Lioness/Leopardess/Tigress). So something happened and the privet collection was taken away/the zoo closed down/they had to leave/etc. and so these cats went out on their own. They stumble upon the Clans who wanted to throw them out but then they told them about the Lions, Tigers and Leopards. The Clans feared that these cats had the Lions, Leopards and Tigers on their side so they got to stay with the Clans and new legends formed from there or something. Not entirely fleshed out but the idea’s there. But speaking of these guys what do you plan on doing with them?

Exactly. Haha she would totally do that! And I can honestly see her snapping at anyone who dares try to insult or use Jay’s, Holly’s and Lion’s heritage against them. Exactly again. With Silverpelt, mother of all blessing them, how can they still think those three are a terrible, horrible mistake? 

Precisely. They have something and they either don’t execute it well or plan it out well. But at least you try and think yours out and then come up with cool, unique ideas and actually use them like the family dens.
Haha exactly XD Just imagine her chillin up wherever she is watching the drama unfold before her. Maybe Sun has some fun too watching the silly, little mortal cats caught up in all their drama.
Yeah it makes things a little easier and still adds the “fading away” element in there as well without it being nothingness. I honestly never liked the nothingness idea anyway. That’s true. Perhaps for my main canon I could do one idea and for the AUs and whatnot I can have the other ideas? I mean it’s my AUs why couldn’t I do something like that? Oh and speaking of my main canon would you be interested in seeing what I sort of have outlined for the first book, Into the Wild? I don’t think I’ll ever write it, but I’m trying something out where I go book by book and write out what happens in the main canon.

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KittyStorage In reply to Amberstorm233 [2018-04-11 12:30:26 +0000 UTC]

More or less yap. Oooh but that'd be awesome tho, that the influence came from cats who lived closely with these large felines and passed on the info about them, like set the rumour mill going, and considering how spiritual and fearful the clans are of divine punishment, the insinuation that these cats hold the power of unknown monster cats would probably spark interest and apprehension - interest cuz wow these can't be average cats can they if they're blessed with monstrous skill?? and apprehension cuz holy shit what can they do to us if we piss em off??
Oh yeah as for me I'd nearly forgotten all about LionClan and stuff, however Naomi-Guardian recently set me onto the right track~ So now I'm incorporating the idea that the leopards and the tigers are legendary beasts of yore, kinda like the titans of Greek mythology, that used to roam the land, and their powers were stolen by sneaky little cats, which is why they since have been gone. I'll be adding more than the tree original big felidaes tho, cuz it always felt unfair that WindClan didn't get a big cat representative for themselves, and if that means I have to add Cheetahpaw to the collection I don't give a damn. I might shuffle them too incase I feel SkyClan also should have a kitty of their own, depends.

Right?? You may say whatever about Squirrel herself but when she drags in the name of the Maker and Mother you're about to run out of arguments fufu~

That's good tho, glad you find it to be so. x3
Omg that's a good idea surely Sun, while a grump otherwise, isn't above watching some drama unfold tee-hee.
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but...
wait...
OMG.
You've solved it!! You did! I see what I can do! SOL! SUN! Sol = Sun, it's basically the same thing! And it would explain why Sol knew a whole bunch of stuff he shouldn't have known, how he could predict eclipses and the like, cuz you see, he's a fucking divine! Sun left for the clans to fuck them up as punishment for his sister, and using the name Sol, which the clans don't realize the meaning of, and he unbalanced them all simply by being a sneak. And the eclipse is his sister's fury with him, cuz excuse u brother what'cha thing you're doing??
Aaaaah you fixed it and I didn't even know it needed fixing?? Omg I actually got a post-Last Hope plotline now fufufufufu~
Yeah and since you have like two parallel AU world you have ample opportunity to test small differences between em. Oh but of course I'd like to see what you have, please, if you'd like to show me I'd be super-happy! ;w;

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Amberstorm233 In reply to KittyStorage [2018-04-14 02:07:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that makes sense. I mean they speak of these terrible cats and who knows, perhaps they even managed to show the cats some of these guys too. But yeah they get to be taken care of and well-fed due to their connection to these scary big cats. And who knows what these Clan cats would think of them as well.
Ah yeah they’re forgettable, which is unfortunate because there’s so many ideas that you could do with them. Just imagine if more of these legends were told within the story or something. Honestly it’s a miracle the Erins even remember them and even then who knows if they’re still remembered now? But anyway I really like the idea! And comparing them to the titans of Greek myth works nicely too. Honestly that’s something that’s always bothered me as well. I never liked how WC never got their own big cat Clan, so CheetahClan works nicely and I would love to see a Cheetahpaw or something. As for SkC maybe JaguarClan? Or maybe CougarClan/PumaClan for a mountain lion? Perhaps LynxClan could work too? These are all big cats that can climb trees well after all.

Hahaha quite true. Love that girl. Gets more hate than she deserves.

Haha so true.
Oh my gosh….Duuuude! That’s ingenious! And it makes total 100% sense! And it’s a much more interesting story for him! Like honestly maybe he had a more hands-off approach to destroying the Clans through fires and floods and what-have-you. And then it finally got to the point where he had enough, so he goes down to Earth to cause the chaos. Wow…That’s seriously amazing! Oh and it can explain why he’s a seemingly healthy tortie tom too! Oh and that regal look from Long Shadows fits him perfectly as well! Ah this is just all so perfect! And I also love the nice touch with the eclipse too! Ah it’s so perfect! Ah well I’m glad I was able to help! Somehow! Anyway this was a seriously awesome idea that I can’t wait to see get further developed!
Exactly~
And here you are: Into the Wild IdeasFire and Ice Ideas  and Forst of Secrets Ideas
I’m working on Rising Storm currently.

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gabbycat17 [2018-03-26 01:20:00 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaahhh, the writing is beautiful! What an interesting flavor to the series that seemed to be missing a little. ^^

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KittyStorage In reply to gabbycat17 [2018-03-26 13:00:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh my now that makes me real happy, thank you very much!

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gabbycat17 In reply to KittyStorage [2018-03-27 01:44:47 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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juliakatie-wsm [2018-03-25 22:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. This is very beautiful. The story, everything. Well done.

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KittyStorage In reply to juliakatie-wsm [2018-03-25 22:59:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, it means a lot coming from you!

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Katakana1 [2018-03-25 22:19:28 +0000 UTC]

Good job

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KittyStorage In reply to Katakana1 [2018-03-25 22:59:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Katakana1 In reply to KittyStorage [2018-03-26 19:43:40 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Temporaryfind [2018-03-25 22:18:29 +0000 UTC]

I love this! The verse is cool as well

May I ask what dearly disliked Erin Hunter means?

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KittyStorage In reply to Temporaryfind [2018-03-25 22:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, glad to hear it!

As for that, it's my subtle way of showcasing my contrasting feelings for the Erins; gratitude on one hand for having created the series, and annoyance on the other for being such insufferable authors. ^^

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Temporaryfind In reply to KittyStorage [2018-03-25 23:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Ah that makes sense, I can understand the feelings tbh

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KittyStorage In reply to Temporaryfind [2018-03-26 13:01:53 +0000 UTC]

^^

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5SingingRobins [2018-03-25 21:39:09 +0000 UTC]

this is a beautiful tale! I always wondered if there was some backstory on Silverpelt and this truly brings forth what I'd imagine!

And that Halftail design o; 

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KittyStorage In reply to 5SingingRobins [2018-03-25 21:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, it pleases me immensely to hear it!

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Agryo [2018-03-25 21:23:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is adorable! Well done; I've been working on mythos for my lil' wee Fanclan [I'd love to share via PMs if you're interested ;D] and this is an artfully woven explanation for Silverpelt's name and would likely tie into Starclan too. ^^

Does your 'verse have any forbidden prefixes? Because of Moon/Sun are forbidden, it could tie into this mythos; naming your child Sun-/Moon- might draw the attention of Silverpelt's brother, so doing so wouldn't be wise. ;3 Also provides a lore-reason for why two-part names are important in Clan culture; they're a homage to their first and greatest mother, and could perhaps be seen as a 'key' to being accepted into her embrace upon death (regardless of that being true or not)

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KittyStorage In reply to Agryo [2018-03-25 21:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, glad to hear it! And yes please, I never say no to your notes, surely not~ And my oh my, what compliments, you make me blush. >///<

Not currently, it does not. I've reasoned practicality and ignorance must have won out against any forbidden names (I figure maybe in the wee beginning of the clans, with Clear Sky and company, they'd have certain names you wouldn't be allowed to use, since the myth is still so fresh in their minds, and Silverpelt's bro's name is still, like remembered lol) so over time, a cat would forget itself and say "oh this here's my daughter Moonkit" and the clan goes crazy like "jfc did you just curse us all to death u numbskull??" and when no divine punishment is forthcoming, they'll kinda... shrug off their nerves and just, m'kay so that's a safe name then, puuuuh. Something like that. xD But yes wow that would be a good idea as to why two-part names became so important to them over time, because it ties them up even closer with their first mother omg~

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Agryo In reply to KittyStorage [2018-03-26 00:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Sure thing! Pffft, it's a little pet project of mine; had to put all the designs I've hoarded over the years to use, mixed that in with some ideas I'd had and some worldbuilding and whammo! A great big pile of fools and their stories! ;D

Oooh, that makes sense! I feel like as the various cats settled down into Clans, tying in religion would have been a must to help ensure unity [plus that whole first battle and dead spirits thing] and to help the Clans feel above, or at least separate from, the common strays/kittypets. Naming themselves in a way that'd pay homage to Silverpelt, to try and point that out [and maybe help her recognize each of her descendants; Fireheart is probably a ginger with strong convictions, Silverstream a silver tabby who swims well, etc.] would likely have been a crucial part in forming that cultural identity. ^^

[I also love how Windclan/Shadowclan don't share the same tales?? I imagine Windclan cats sleeping under the stars and counting them to fall asleep, fancying that they know their ancestors in great detail because of this! Shadowclan would probably, in truth, have some similar tale, I'd guess, only with the sun-bringer brother actively fighting his sister or her mate/ the dead stars battling among eachother to stand closest to their mother's fur, thus the milky way]

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KikkiOtter [2018-03-25 21:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Omg, I love this   it always irked me that there isn't any lore at all behind Silverpelt, and I really like your version. Hope to see more of this  

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KittyStorage In reply to KikkiOtter [2018-03-25 21:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I'm happy that you think so!

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AviRayburn [2018-03-25 20:57:41 +0000 UTC]

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KittyStorage In reply to AviRayburn [2018-03-25 21:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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AviRayburn In reply to KittyStorage [2018-03-25 21:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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StarTheWolfPuppy [2018-03-25 20:36:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm actually so intrigued already! I really want to see more in depth why Windclan dislike the story so much. 

Only thing is I didn't get how Silverpelt being a beautiful silver cat was an ego-boost for Riverclan considering silver isn't like exclusive to them or anything? Might just be me being thick idk xD I just didn't get that bit! 

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KittyStorage In reply to StarTheWolfPuppy [2018-03-25 21:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Hehe many thanks, I'm happy to hear it!

Well, yeah basically it's RiverClan indirectly laying claim to the silver gene cuz like, their founder was a silver cat y'know lol, and they've the largest amount of silvers in all the Clans so they feel favoured by Silverpelt's genes or something x'D

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StarTheWolfPuppy In reply to KittyStorage [2018-03-26 21:42:41 +0000 UTC]

aaah i see! I love that idea! 

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KittyStorage In reply to StarTheWolfPuppy [2018-03-26 22:08:28 +0000 UTC]

Hehe~

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shanson1997 [2018-03-25 20:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful story! Certainly better than anything Erin Hunter could write.

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KittyStorage In reply to shanson1997 [2018-03-25 21:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, quite the compliment, thank you very much!

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