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I hate that I love youI hate that I need to have you
With my head on my pillow
Fighting for sleep
The memory of you haunts the dreams
That are simply out of reach
My body arches in pain
As I toss and turn
And the hours slide agonizingly onward
I hate that I want you
I hate that I give into you
Like an addiction
A lovely, intoxicating, mind blowing addiction
I need you more every time I taste you
And I need to taste you
Again and again
And I do taste you
Again and again
And again.
You’ve taken everything I am
Everything I thought I could be
Too fragile, too broken
To stop now…
I will give in again.
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Comments: 49
PoofHead-8D [2008-04-29 19:39:12 +0000 UTC]
this is intense! it's EXACTLY what so many people go through so many times_ here you've managed to put it into words while i'm just i'm left speechless
super good job!
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kristymariethomas In reply to PoofHead-8D [2008-04-29 20:35:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh, thanks so much. I'm glad you like it and can relate to what I was feeling when I wrote it.
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VampireButterflyMel [2008-04-29 01:50:50 +0000 UTC]
amazing <3
I have an addiction to chocolate too.
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kristymariethomas In reply to VampireButterflyMel [2008-04-29 15:54:47 +0000 UTC]
Mmmmmm...who doesn't? And by chocolate, we're talking..."chocolate"...right?
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VampireButterflyMel In reply to kristymariethomas [2008-04-30 03:12:15 +0000 UTC]
I'm talking chocolate and "chocolate"
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feaneye [2008-04-28 23:25:22 +0000 UTC]
omgosh...the lyrics are awesome...i love them...yeah chocolate...of coooourse......
fits with everything...esp...uhm, neverending, unwilling, unexpected love...
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Dya-mond-ay [2008-04-27 02:04:51 +0000 UTC]
whether its about chocolate, or something more, its still good. good job!
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NicoAkikaze [2008-04-27 01:48:44 +0000 UTC]
I love it. It reminds me of a friend I once had...>_<;;
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kristymariethomas In reply to NicoAkikaze [2008-04-28 03:18:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh no...that could be good and bad, which could mean bad and gooood.
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kristymariethomas In reply to NicoAkikaze [2008-04-28 19:11:05 +0000 UTC]
With my comment or just in general??????????????????????????????????????????
Wow, that was a lot of ?'s *shifty eyes*
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TheLindormsbride [2008-04-27 00:28:32 +0000 UTC]
At first I did't think the poem was about chocolate. Keep the title and let your aduience find their own message in the poem.
I like it.
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kristymariethomas In reply to TheLindormsbride [2008-04-27 01:29:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh, it's not about chocolate. That was just a little joke. It's about a person...but of course, you can interpret it anyway you want to. I'm glad you like it.
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TaurusJ [2008-04-26 14:05:39 +0000 UTC]
Huh... and I thought you were talking about David Cook XD
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kristymariethomas In reply to TaurusJ [2008-04-26 15:49:52 +0000 UTC]
Damn you! *shakes fist* Whatever gave you that idea?
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kristymariethomas In reply to TaurusJ [2008-04-26 22:21:11 +0000 UTC]
You ignoring my note?
*pout*
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TaurusJ In reply to kristymariethomas [2008-04-26 22:30:49 +0000 UTC]
sorry, I had a LOT to do in the last few days
I just now reviewed the latest chapter.
and I still have to cut that video of myself doing a training session to send it for review and...
I'm on it, like right now ^^
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kristymariethomas In reply to TaurusJ [2008-04-27 03:37:29 +0000 UTC]
I never asked you what you made the video for - what the review is for...???
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TaurusJ In reply to kristymariethomas [2008-04-27 10:41:06 +0000 UTC]
ah, you see, I attended a schooling for being an instructor. However, to get my real license, I need to show proof that some of the stuff I learned remained inside my skull, so I have to show proof in form of a video assessment. It will be reviewed and if I'm good enough I'll get the license.
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kristymariethomas In reply to TaurusJ [2008-04-28 03:20:35 +0000 UTC]
Cool. Good luck with that.
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Cataclysm-X [2008-04-26 11:55:01 +0000 UTC]
Oh my
lol chocolate... hmmm, I want some chocolate right now! where is it?
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kristymariethomas In reply to Cataclysm-X [2008-04-26 15:52:39 +0000 UTC]
Hint: The chocolate is in *this* cookie:
But, more specifically it's in the "Cook"ie in my Avatar
Or, at least that's what I was just accused of.
I don't know how anyone would get *that* idea... Oh, yeah, maybe my signature for starters. *blush*
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kristymariethomas In reply to scarletwave [2008-04-26 04:23:39 +0000 UTC]
Hey you! I just sent you email. How are you?
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scarletwave In reply to kristymariethomas [2008-04-26 17:42:16 +0000 UTC]
I have been a bit ill but I am alright... how are you doing?? My mom said the drawing arrived (quite a bit back) and it is lovely but I have not seen it yet. She has it up in her house but I've not been there yet. I can't wait to see how it looks all framed I am sure we will be by there on Mother's Day!! Thanks again, Kristy!!
How has your health been...better?? I hope so. Keep me posted!!
Jen
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kristymariethomas In reply to scarletwave [2008-04-28 03:20:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry you haven't been feeling well. I've been doing better than I have in a long time. Long overdue.
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ultimate-chaos12 [2008-04-26 03:14:43 +0000 UTC]
I could go for some chocolate right about now...
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kristymariethomas In reply to ultimate-chaos12 [2008-04-26 04:23:59 +0000 UTC]
meeeee toooooooo.....
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rosaliekay [2008-04-26 02:42:01 +0000 UTC]
The first thing I thought about after reading this was "CHOCOLATE! XD" and then I read the description and I laughed.
X]
But really, I really like this. =]
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kristymariethomas In reply to rosaliekay [2008-04-26 02:55:50 +0000 UTC]
Yay! That's awesome! Delicious chocolate loooove... gimme gimme... I know it's bad for me...
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october-fairy [2008-04-26 02:25:53 +0000 UTC]
wow! I love this!!! haha, Im a hopeless romantic so I find this terribly romantic Great job Kristy!
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kristymariethomas In reply to october-fairy [2008-04-26 02:29:10 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thanks! And for the fave. I'm so glad you like it. It's been begging to be written for a while now.
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BreakdancingBob [2008-04-26 02:22:56 +0000 UTC]
Very nice...and yeah, its about chocolate...yeah.. XD
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kristymariethomas In reply to BreakdancingBob [2008-04-26 02:28:26 +0000 UTC]
Mmmmmmmm....chocolate....
lol... Thanks.
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