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LaDiNi — Summer Time
Published: 2004-07-02 18:41:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 203; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 42
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Description Listen careful and listen well
The summer comes – swell!

Three months and one day
No time to waste
I just have something to say,
So copy my words and paste:

Lots of sand, colorful bikinis,
Refreshing ice-creams and life guards –
Wow, they’re cuties!

Enjoy the summer,
Enjoy the beach
Use the “Party” banner
Don’t be a leech!

Summer, summer, oh, summer,
How I love the summer!
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Comments: 12

ffcfan [2004-07-05 19:19:18 +0000 UTC]

free verse rules......

thats all i can right in sucsessfully......

I rhyme accidentally when i am not concentrating

Becky

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shredu2 [2004-07-03 08:07:05 +0000 UTC]

hehe!!!

its more like a fun poem, i like!

i can't rhyme very well, but u did great! i know how hard it can be, so CONGRATS!!!!

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LaDiNi In reply to shredu2 [2004-07-04 23:06:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the support ! But I'm gonna stick to free verse, it goes out more naturally . But I'm glad you liked it

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shredu2 In reply to LaDiNi [2004-07-06 10:07:59 +0000 UTC]

i agree! free verse RULES!!!!!!!!
hehe!!!
hav fun!

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ruben-dig [2004-07-02 23:09:24 +0000 UTC]

I was reading and remembered this :

Eu gosto é do Verão
De passearmos de prancha na mão
Saltarmos e rirmos na praia
De nadar e apanhar um escaldão

sorry for the english speakers but this is a portuguese song ....

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LaDiNi In reply to ruben-dig [2004-07-04 23:05:01 +0000 UTC]

e ao fim do dia,
bem abraçados
a ver o por do sol
atrocinados
por uma bebida qualquer!

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nunomarques [2004-07-02 19:35:41 +0000 UTC]

+1 k n posso comentar

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ffcfan [2004-07-02 18:52:05 +0000 UTC]

the rhyme scheme seems alittle, umm... forced in places. But i like it.

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LaDiNi In reply to ffcfan [2004-07-02 19:03:04 +0000 UTC]

:S.... I guess you are right... I'll try and do a better job next time! thanks for commenting!

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ffcfan In reply to LaDiNi [2004-07-02 20:21:28 +0000 UTC]

i find that when i consciously try and rhyme it sounds forced, though if you can do it without thinking about it it wont, i dont know if thats anyhelp.

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LaDiNi In reply to ffcfan [2004-07-04 23:03:49 +0000 UTC]

yes it is a help - thanks for the comment! I never rhymed very well anyway It was more of an attemp, I'm gonna keep doing free verse from now on

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LaDiNi In reply to ffcfan [2004-07-02 19:02:44 +0000 UTC]

:S.... I guess you are right... I'll try and do a better job next time!

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