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Published: 2012-01-10 16:49:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1203; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 1
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The Hashmalim are Second Sphere Angels. They resemble golden themed kings and as such command a number of Third Sphere Angels. They control clouds and lightning. As per their powers, their jurisdiction is on worlds that are prone to thunderstorms. While they can be found on worlds that have the occasional thunderstorm, they most definitely can be found on worlds that are plagued with storms than they normally should have. With the Hashmalim's powers, they can on such worlds divert the storms' ferocity and give shelter to their charges and more importantly any devout believer.Despite them being capable of controlling lightning though, the Hashmalim however are limited in their mastery of it. While they can control lightning, they are not immune to it. They may absorb some amount of it with the aid of their pauldrons but only so much. If a Hashmal is hit with too much lightning at once, they will like anything else, be electrocuted. Fortunately they can redirect lightning before it can hit them as long as they know where it is coming from.
Due to the connotations that come with their powers, Hashmalim are sometimes mistaken by mortals for thunder gods. The Hashmalim naturally refute such misdirected claims. They counter that they are nothing like the so called thunder gods that they are mistaken for. This is understandably justified due to what real thunder gods are like. Hashmalim, being Angels, are naturally peaceful and benevolent. Thunder gods on the other hand, are not exactly saints. In fact, the difference between a Hashmal and a thunder god is even more evident when one uses some of the more famous thunder gods for comparison, like the one that commands that largest known Γsar pantheon for example.
Notes:
*Loosely based on the Hashmallim from Jewish and Christian mythology. [link]
*The ability that this guy can use lightning was inspired by the biblical description that the Hashmallim were like the color of Hashmal. "Hashmal" is often translated as electrum. While electrum doesn't necessarily mean electricity, its similar sounding was more than enough for inspiration.
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Comments: 9
whitebearboy [2022-01-23 02:27:44 +0000 UTC]
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SMDKFan [2017-03-08 15:34:11 +0000 UTC]
Pretty Cool.
Honestly, it feels as though the angels Bayonetta fights aren't actually real angels...rather demons in disguise.
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Hawk00Refferencer [2012-01-10 21:17:11 +0000 UTC]
Wooooow, I like the design...
Uhm, mind I just say a word of critic?
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Hawk00Refferencer In reply to LeoDIlfKaiser [2012-01-11 13:54:45 +0000 UTC]
It's not the art, it's the descriptions. I'm not exactly sure what it is, but something kinda bugs me about them...
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Hawk00Refferencer In reply to LeoDIlfKaiser [2012-01-11 21:31:55 +0000 UTC]
Not so sure myself, but I did notice you use the same words over and over in next sentences. I can't define the style, I think you're aiming for encyclopedic, similar to how wikia and wikipedia descriptions are made, but the structure of definitions and explanations is a bit different. It's also not a poetic medival bestiary-kind of description, that lacks a proper vocabulary. Please don't get mad...
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LeoDIlfKaiser In reply to Hawk00Refferencer [2012-01-12 04:09:37 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I kinda am aiming for a encyclopedic style when I write descriptions for the various races and creatures I make. In fact, Wikipedia and the various other wikis were what inspired me a long time ago to make a bestiary. I used to look up the various monster articles they had and felt that they were both fascinating and informative. Feeling that I could do something similar but with my own spin, I came to DA and thus was created the bestiary that I have.
As for poetic medieval bestiary-kind of descriptions, not sure what you mean but I try to input as much info about a creature so that people can see the ideas behind said creature. I basically want to paint a picture in people's head to accompany the creature I'm presenting them. Medieval descriptions as far as I can tell are just descriptions no different than any other description. Maybe it's because of style of the time they were written in or something but I don't think what I'm doing is really that different. Besides, I'm not trying to copy the style at all if there is one. I'm just doing what any other regular writer does.
By the way, I'm not mad by your comments. Just a little surprised about criticism towards how I write descriptions rather than towards the content of said descriptions, or more importantly towards the work of art that the descriptions are describing.
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Hawk00Refferencer In reply to LeoDIlfKaiser [2012-01-12 11:51:51 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm, now that you put it that way... okay, I take it back. It's nice to hear some kind of dream comming true for one of us. I'll try and keep commenting, remember, I'll always be as frank as possible.
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