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Published: 2008-03-21 20:54:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 419; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 6
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Just for those of you who actually care or are not yet tired of the short-lived series. Bleh, 3 panel, perhaps a record low for me. Methinks it had to do with getting carried away with character expressions and whatnot. More on an introductury page. More content coming up, when I can get it done.Meh, say what you will about this one Not my favorite page, but I think it gets the job done.
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Honestly, there's no other way to describe that meanie penguin! XD
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Nice effect with Leo reflected in her glasses. 
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She sure is tall. That or they are both just short. XD
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Impressive, Leo.
I have a few tips if you would not mind hearing them. 
Onto the tips. XP
Tip 1: Your speech balloons look a bit crammed. To remedy this, draw the words first, then the balloons and try drawing the picture "around" the balloons. It is too late to do that here, but give it a try. It just might make it significantly easier.
Tip 2: Try filling in as much to a panel as possible if there is extra room between the characters/balloons. However do not make it look too cluttered. Erm, I got this "tip" from a book, so I may have missed something to this tip. Or not. Eh heh...
Your antagonist looks intimidating, but for some reason in the first panel she doesn't seem to be looking down at Leo and his buddy. She appears to be looking straight ahead, hmmm...at least it looks that way to me.
In the third panel, the monocle reflection creates a devastating "superior" effect as she looks at you.
The middle panels expressions speak without words. Very good.
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Hahaha, Alpheus is such a punk. XD Very nice expressions once again, especially in the second panel!
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Yes he is 
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*shudder* that's the same evil stare i get in my stories
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It's an inescapable stare, I think XP
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Wow, things are heating up (NO pun intended) and only in the FIRST chapter... O-o
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More to come, I hope!
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More to see, if you can pull through.
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Hah, thanks, glad you like it! ^^
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