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Less2TheTruth — First Loves
Published: 2013-07-27 05:39:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 59; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Your name was honey on my tongue,
And your tongue my sweetest plaything
Our bodies laid lovingly together
With every stroke of your hand
    We gave each other everything

Your name echoes still,
Your memory fills
         The spaces
   Between my words

Oh, how love was like a game
  Childish it seemed,
     And we were children
 Pushed too high on the swing

It didn't matter who was I
           And who was he

I loved you
   And you loved me
  Happily
  Happily




   
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Comments: 5

ravynkatt [2013-07-27 05:41:41 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that's a chorus away from being a song. It has great flow.

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Less2TheTruth In reply to ravynkatt [2013-07-27 06:20:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you think so. now I want to write a chorus...

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ravynkatt In reply to Less2TheTruth [2013-07-27 06:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Do it!! ((Why do I suddenly feel like a fangirl?))

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Less2TheTruth In reply to ravynkatt [2013-07-27 06:57:27 +0000 UTC]

Lol I should

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ravynkatt In reply to Less2TheTruth [2013-07-27 07:00:00 +0000 UTC]

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