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Description calloused hands covered my own, guiding them through the intricate
process of catching my first fish—your smile gleamed with the same
light as mine once a fish caught the hook the two of us cast into the water
(my attempts ended with the hook caught on the tree, it was the one cast
with your help that finally landed in the water)…the catfish, giant by my meager
standards, flew onto the shores of the lake—perhaps you just made it seem so easy.
the water wasn't a beautiful cerulean color; instead it was murky, a drab, dirty brown—
that should have been my first clue…but smiling with two missing front teeth, glasses
perched with a crooked flair I didn't realize how suddenly things could change.
Whenever we would visit you [and grandma as well], you always handed me a sock—
normally of the black and knee high variety—rounded into a five- inch ball, the
jingling noises telling me what was inside…I never did thank you for those times, did I?
It was too late by the time I thought I ought to; your liver or kidney had failed, but then
aren't I telling you what you already know? Indeed, I am, but a simple rehash is good for
spirit (or so you liked to show us with all of your stories and repeated traditions)…
one day, you were in the house fine, smiling and laughing like normal; the next, you were
admitted to the hospital; you never came out, grandpa… Whatever happened to you being

I N V I N C I B L E?
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Comments: 10

tatterdema1ion [2012-09-28 20:24:09 +0000 UTC]

God damn... it's so beautiful. So beautiful I can't express it without a powerful word-- so don't take the cursing as disrespect. Lovely work. Reminded me of how the Japanese would write short, powerful stories on scrolls. I always seem to come back to wanting your work illustrated.

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to tatterdema1ion [2012-09-28 22:12:11 +0000 UTC]

...do you realize how amazing you are?

Your comment is absolutely gorgeous, at a time when I'm not in the best mental or emotional state you manage to make me smile from ear to ear...Thank you!



As for illustrated, that is an interesting thought...

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tatterdema1ion In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-09-28 23:11:08 +0000 UTC]

I brings me great joy to hear that I managed to lift you up. If you're ever not int he mood to vent via an organized piece like this feel free, but don't feel compelled, to shoot me a message.

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to tatterdema1ion [2012-09-28 23:46:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the offer

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Contradictory55 [2012-09-25 02:55:25 +0000 UTC]

I loved the memory/story you told here. I'm sorry for your loss though

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to Contradictory55 [2012-09-25 02:56:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and I'm sorry as well...thank you for the concern

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Contradictory55 In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-09-25 14:12:28 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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JadeRayne [2012-09-23 15:27:34 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed reading this. Sorry for your loss.

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to JadeRayne [2012-09-23 15:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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JadeRayne In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-09-23 17:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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