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Published: 2012-08-25 06:06:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 243; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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Description trickling water forms a staccato
rhythm on the rocks below,
fingers meshed—
minds within the throes of passion
emotions on high—nearly steaming
from our skin, sodden in the stream's
slow strokes—mimicking our own.
steady pulses, head to toe, vibrating skin—
our bodies locked, trembling with the weight
of love and lust.
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Comments: 8

starell [2012-08-27 23:37:50 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem! I love the way the meaning evolves

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to starell [2012-08-28 01:38:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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starell In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-08-28 01:50:21 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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Manigran [2012-08-25 06:17:35 +0000 UTC]

Just beautiful to read. Love the gentle imagery of water compared to the strong emotion of passion.

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to Manigran [2012-08-25 06:20:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the lovely comment!

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Manigran In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-08-25 17:59:14 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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VintageChick121 [2012-08-25 06:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! I could feel all of those vibes coming off the page into me

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to VintageChick121 [2012-08-25 06:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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